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Issue208
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原来打算限时的，写了一半实在写不下去了，不知道怎么回事，可能今天状态不行，加之这类题目不熟，很多词要想。。。。。。。挺受打击的
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The way people look, dress, and act reveals their attitudes and interests. You can tell much about a society's ideas and values by observing the appearance and behavior of its people.
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Some people assert that the way people look, dress, and act reveals their attitudes and interests, and also reflect social ideas and values. I fundamentally agree with this point view. By observing the appearance and behavior of its people, we could know a society's ideas and values to some extent, but not all.

First of all, human attitudes and interests would be reflected by their appearance and behavior directly or indirectly. In daily life, people will choose certain clothes according to their interests. For example, the football fans intend to wear their favorite football team's shirt; businessmen prefer suits in formal occasions; and movie starts always wear exotic and novel style clothes which could express their personalities. In addition, different behaviors of people indicate varied attitudes to life, too. Extroverts, full of passion, take every possible chance to communicate with others. However, introverts, silent and pessimistic, intend to spend hours themselves. According to these, we could understand people's attitudes and interests by observing their appearance and behavior.

Moreover, different people constitute our society. Because varied people hold various attitudes and interests. These attitudes and interests, which are held by the majority, represent that of the society—ideas and values. As I mentioned before, the appearance and behavior of people reflect their attitudes and interests, in that matter, they also mirror a society's ideas and values to some extent. For instance, Chinese prefer saving money for children's education, parents' health care, etc. But Americans intend to spend money in traveling, exploring, improving quality of life, etc. In one hand, this phenomenon indicates that the Americans lead a better life than Chinese; on the other hand, this also reflects the different social ideas and values: assuming the responsibility and enjoying the life. Additionally, people's appearance and behavior in other part of world also reflects local society's ideas and values. For example, the way Arab women dress indicates Arab society's conservative convention; Japanese who always wear suits reflect their society's preciseness; South American tango mirrors their passionate and unrestrained society's character. In short, we can understand different society by observing the appearance and behavior of its people to some extent.

However, observing the way people look, dress and act would probably fails to provide a whole view of the society, because this kind of observation is often not all-rounded, and in a certain perspective. In other word, what people observed might not typify the majority of the society, and therefore could not reflect the social ideas and values, but only certain group's character, as aptly illustrated by the young's life style. The young love wearing jeans and T-shirt, and always make them special and distinctive. By observing them, we might conclude that our society is fraught with revolutionary and insubordinate spirits. However, it is not the accurate conclusion, because the observation rules out the adults—the majority of the society. Actually, there are still a host of other approaches to access to the social ideas and values. We could rely on them such as studying the culture, art, literature and so forth, when the people's appearance and behavior could not give us an accurate answer.

In sum, I concede that we can tell much about social ideas and values via observing its people's appearance and behavior. Yet under certain situation, we should combine other approach to acquire a more accurate view of society's ideas and values.

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Some people（改成This statement) asserts that the way people look, dress, and act reveals their attitudes and interests, and also reflect social ideas and values. I fundamentally agree with this point ofview. By observing the appearance and behavior of its people, we could know a society's ideas and values to some extent, but not all.（改成completely,entirely更好吧？）

First of all, human attitudes and interests would be reflected by their appearances and behaviors directly or indirectly.(注意平行结构前后一致啊） In daily life, people will choose certain clothes according to their interests. For example, the football fans intend to are inclined to更好吧 wear their favorite football team's shirt; businessmen prefer suits inon formal occasions; and movie starts always wear exotic and novel style clothes which could express their personalities. In addition, different behaviors of people indicate varied attitudes to life, too.重复 Extroverts, full of passion, take every possible chance to communicate with others. However, introverts, silent and pessimistic, intend to spend hours bythemselves. According to thesereasons, we could understand people's attitudes and interests by observing their appearances and behaviors.

Moreover, different people constitute our society. Because varied people hold variousdiverse attitudes and interests. These attitudes and interests, which are held by the majority, represent that of the society—and itsideas and values. As I mentioned before, the appearance and behavior of people reflect their attitudes and interests, in that matter, they also mirror a society's ideas and values to some extent. For instance, Chinese prefer saving money for children's education, parents' health care, etc. But Americans intend to spend money inon traveling, exploring, improving quality of life, etc. In(On the) one hand, this phenomenon indicates that the Americans lead a better life than Chinese; on the other hand, this also reflects the different social ideas and values: assuming the responsibility and enjoying the life. Additionally, people's appearance and behavior in other parts of theworld also reflects local society's ideas and values.(没看懂 For example, the way Arab women dress indicates Arab society's conservative convention; Japanese who always wear suits reflect their society's preciseness; South American tango mirrors their passionate and unrestrained society's 呵呵似乎可以删掉character. In short, we can understand different society（societies) by observing the appearance and behavior of its people to some extent.

However, observing onlythe way people look, dress and act would probably fails to provide a wholegeneral view of the society, because this kind of observation is often not all-rounded, and in a certain perspective. In other word, what people observed might not typify the majority of the society, and therefore could not reflect the social ideas and values, but only certain group's character, as aptly illustrated by the young's life style. The young love wearing jeans and T-shirt, and always make them special and distinctive. By observing them, we might conclude that our society is fraught with revolutionary and insubordinate spirits. However, it is not the accurate conclusion, because the observation rules out the adults—the majority of the society. Actually, there are still a host of other approaches to access to the social ideas and values. We could rely on them such as studying the culture, art, literature and so forth, when the people's appearance and behavior could not give us an accurate answer.

In sum, I concede that we can tell much about social ideas and values via observing its people's appearance and behavior. Yet under certain situations, we should combine other approaches to acquire a more accurate view of society's ideas and values.

1，语法错误好多啊，下次传上来之前自己先粘到word里面纠一下错吧
2，语言和词汇还要多变化。写完了可以用金山查查同义词。
3，写之前自己先动脑列个提纲想想例子，别光用给出的啊

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爽，多谢指教！！！晚上回拍！

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修改了一下, 感觉还是开头写不好!~~~~~~~~

I concede that people’s appearance and behavior would reveal their attitudes and interests, and mirror a society’s ideas and values partially. However, if we intend to understand social character more accurately, we need to resort to some other approaches.

First of all, human attitudes and interests would be reflected by their exteriors and conducts directly or indirectly. In daily life, people will choose certain clothes according to their interests. For example, the football fans are inclined to wear their favorite football team's shirt; the youth prefer jeans and T-shirts partly due to their rebellious nature; and movie stars always wear exotic and novel style costume which could express their special personalities and statuses. In addition, diverse behaviors of people indicate varied attitudes to life. Extroverts, full of passion, take every possible chance to communicate with others. However, introverts, silent and somewhat pessimistic, intend to spend hours by themselves. According to these facts, we could understand people's attitudes and interests by observing their appearances and behaviors.

Moreover, varieties of people constitute our society with diverse attitudes and interests. The ideas and values, which are held by the majority, represent the society’s. Further, the appearances and behaviors of people reflect their attitudes and interests. As a result, they also mirror a society's ideas and values to some extent. For instance, Chinese prefer saving money for children's education, parents' health care, etc. But Americans intend to spend money on traveling, exploring, improving quality of life, etc. On the one hand, this interesting phenomenon indicates that the Americans lead a better life than Chinese do; on the other hand, this also reflects the different social ideas and values: planning the future and enjoying the life. Additionally, there are some other examples also illustrate the viewpoint. For example, the way Arab women dress indicates Arab society's conservative convention; Japanese who always wear suits reflect their society's preciseness; South American tango mirrors their passionate and ebullient character. In short, we can understand different societies by observing the appearance and behavior of their people to some extent.

However, only observing the way people look, dress, and act would probably fail to provide a complete view of the society, because this kind of observation is often not all-rounded, and based on a certain perspective. In other word, what people observe might not typify the majority of the society, and therefore could not mirror the social ideas and values entirely, but only certain group's character, as aptly illustrated by the young's life style. The young love wearing jeans and T-shirt, and always make them special and distinctive. By observing them, we might conclude that our society is fraught with revolutionary and insubordinate spirits. However, it is not the accurate conclusion, because the observation rules out the adults—the majority of the society. Actually, there are still a host of other approaches to access to the social ideas and values. We could rely on them such as studying the culture, art, literature, and so forth at the same time, when the people's appearance and behavior could not give us an accurate answer.

In sum, I concede that we can tell much about social ideas and values via observing its people's appearance and behavior. Yet under certain situations, we should combine other approaches to acquire a more accurate view of society's ideas and values.