Issue83 政府与保护wilderness areas 限时作文！ 有拍必回！！！！！！！！！！！！

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Issue83  限时作文！ 有拍必回！！！！！！！！！！！！
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从2005年8月16日22时48分到2005年8月16日23时45分
字是少了点，唉！！！！！
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Government should preserve publicly owned wilderness areas in their natural state, even though these areas are often extremely remote and thus accessible to only a few people.
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Due to the increasing influence of human activities, the wilderness areas cannot preserve their natural state themselves. I concede that government should take this responsibility to preserve them in their original state. However, as for the wilderness areas which are extremely remote and thus accessible to only a few people, how much government's attention should be involved is worthy considering depend on the seriousness of the problem.

Admittedly, the wilderness areas require government lead a helping hand to preserve their natural sate. Human activities not only affect the environment around us greatly, but they can also cast a bad effect on the wilderness areas where humans' activities are restricted. For example, the exhaust and waste emitted by the automobile results in acid rain, which might be damage the growth of trees in wilderness areas. Additionally, although travelers' activities in wilderness have been already restricted, yet they would bring to the nature waste and noise inevitablely. In that matter, government should play an essential role in preventing the wilderness areas from travelers' disturbing. Government should take actions such as education and legislation, to regulate the travelers' behaviors in wilderness areas.
//需要政府保护

Moreover, the actions government took also benefit us to preserve wilderness areas in their natural state. These actions would effectively preserve the diversity of the creatures. Because the ecologic system is an inextricable web of varieties of creatures, damage to one of them is entirely damage to us now or in the future. Well-preserved natural state not only protect the local vulnerable environment, it also provides humans a chance to access the nature which is still unaffected by the modern society, and increase our attention to protecting the wilderness areas. The Yellowstone National Park is an excellent example to illuminate this point view. Its success sheds the light on the importance of government's responsibility for preserving the wilderness areas in their natural state.
//保护对人类有好处

However, as for the wilderness areas which are extremely remote and thus accessible to only a few people, how much attention government should pay is worth considering. In our daily life, there are still a multitude of problem require government to care and resolve, such as unemployment, drug trafficking, violence, etc. If the wilderness areas can preserve them very well, as well as government is already busy with other issues, government has the choice to let it be. In that matter, government could take full advantages of the social resource to resolve the most critical problems at present.
//对那些远的，无人进入的，能自己调节的，保护力度应考虑

In sum, preserving the wilderness areas in their natural sate is an essential responsibility of government. It not only benefits the nature, but also benefits ourselves maybe not right now but in the future.

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我今天时间比较紧，语言错误就不找了。
给你一个方法可能可以提高你的字数，你第二段中论述太少，第三段中论据没有展开，每段中想办法让论述舆论句平衡一下，自然字数就多了。可以在写之前把中文提纲写详细些，虽然会用掉一部分时间，但思路会比较顺，打起字来快。

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