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Issue103 "The study of history has value only to the extent that it is relevant to our daily lives."   
翻译:只有研究和我们日常生活相关的历史才有价值。

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提纲
(1)说到history,人们常常首先想到那些伟大的历史事件或者国家、人类的历史,事实上,history不仅指这些,一个普通人的past也算history.所以,不仅研究和日常生活相关的历史有价值,其它的历史也是有价值的。

(2)研究和我们日常生活相关的历史是有价值的。例如,历史上的一些伟人的事迹会给人们很大的精神鼓舞,也可以对人的行为提供参考。医学关系到人们的健康,正因为对自古至今医学历史的积累和研究,才有了现代医学的发达和人类寿命的延长。

(3)对历史的研究对一个国家,甚至是整个人类都是有不可忽视的价值的。比如对宇宙的形成、人类的起源等等的研究解开了人类的许多谜团。对历史上的国家兴衰的研究能够使政府更好的治理国家。对历史上国家关系的处理对现代国家之间相处提供借鉴。

(4)历史对人类是巨大的财富。对于历史的研究,可以让我们总结规律,对展望未来有帮助。

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时间:查资料看别人习作(2小时)+构思提纲(30分钟)+正文(1.5小时) = 4小时
:L 时间很长,大家别笑话我呀:(
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When referring to history, people are used to bethinking the famous history events or the history of a nation or the mankind. As a matter of fact, not only those are considered as history, the past of a common person is also counted. Therefore, the study of history that is relevant to our daily lives has value, the study of other kinds of history too.

History is meritorious to our daily lives. History knowledge can enrich people's wisdom and help them to understand the world. In addition, the stories of historical giants can give people tremendously spiritual supports, and provide action references. Take a well-known China ancient story as an example. During the West Han dynasty, there was a very diligent child named QuangHeng. He liked reading very much, but his family was extremely pool and could not even afford lamp oil for him. Then he cut a small hole in the wall, and read under the delicacy lamplight from neighbor. Finally, he became a famed litterateur. This story moved thousands upon thousands children, and made them cherish the study opportunities they owned. On the other hand, the outcomes of scientific studies are also valuable to modern studies. For instance, medicine counts for much to people's health. Just depending on the studies and accumulations of medicine in all ages, there are the development of modern medicine and the prolongation of people's lives.

Moreover, the study of history has undisputable worth to a nation so much as the whole humankind. Such as, studying on the generation of universe and the origin of mankind solves many riddles; studying on the blossom and ruin of historical country makes current government to manage the nation better; studying on the relations between historical nations gives reference for dealing with the relation of modern countries. For example, after review the history of German Nazism, we know that the atrocious rule will be overthrown finally and democracy is the proper way.

History is a great treasure to the mankind. From the study of history, we can conclude the rule of the universe, refer the good experiences, avoid the same mistakes, and prospect the future. For example, seismologists observe the rule of the occurring of former earthquakes, and sum up the phenomena before earthquakes, then get the characters of earthquakes and forecast the future earthquakes.

To sum up, to study the history is essentially important, because it relates to people's daily lives and the development of the whole world.  

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When referring to history, people are used to bethinking the famous history events or the history of a nation or the mankind. As a matter of fact, not only those are considered as history, the past of a common person is also counted. Therefore, the study of history that is relevant to our daily lives has value, the study of other kinds of history too. 这个句子完全是中文翻译过来的,看着生硬,It is valuable to study history which is relevant to our daily lives, so is other kinds of history like ***(几个你会讲到的历史),这么改不知道好不好

History is meritorious好词,学习中 to our daily lives. History knowledge can enrich people's wisdom and help them to understand the world. In addition, the stories of historical giants can give people tremendously spiritual supports, and provide action references. Take a well-known China ancient story as an example. During the West Han dynasty, there was a very diligent child named QuangHeng. He liked reading very much, but his family was extremely pool and could not even afford lamp oil for him. Then he cut a small hole in the wall, and read under the delicacy lamplight from neighbor. Finally, he became a famed litterateur. 例子不用写得这么详细,个人愚见This story moved thousands upon thousands children, and made them cherish the study opportunities they owned. On the other hand, the outcomes of scientific studies are also valuable to modern studies. For instance, medicine counts for much to people's health. Just depending on the studies and accumulations of medicine in all ages, there are the development of modern medicine and the prolongation of people's lives.

Moreover, the study of history has undisputable worth to a nation so much as the whole humankind. Such as, studying on the generation of universe and the origin of mankind solves many riddles; studying on the blossom and ruin of historical country makes current government to manage the nation better; studying on the relations between historical nations gives reference for dealing with the relation of modern countries. For example, after review the history of German Nazism, we know that the atrocious rule will be overthrown finally and democracy is the proper way.

History is a great treasure to the mankind. From the study of history, we can conclude the rule of the universe, refer the good experiences, avoid the same mistakes, and prospect the future. For example, seismologists observe the rule of the occurring of former earthquakes, and sum up the phenomena before earthquakes, then get the characters of earthquakes and forecast the future earthquakes. 预测地震在这里好像不是很有说服力哟

To sum up, to study the history is essentially important, because it relates to people's daily lives and the development of the whole world.  结尾好简单哟

每次看amy的提纲,我都佩服死了,整个思路一目了然,我总是要想不到那么全,总是要写写憋憋才出来点条理。

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发表于 2005-12-24 10:55:30 |只看该作者
@amy@
When referring to history, people are used to bethinking the famous history events or the history of a nation or the mankind. As a matter of fact, not only those are considered as history, the past of a common person is also counted. Therefore, the study of history that is relevant to our daily lives has value, the study of other kinds of history(这个词组有点牵强,这句话也有语法问题) too.

History is meritorious to our daily lives. History knowledge can enrich people's wisdom and help them to understand the world. In addition, the stories of historical giants can give people tremendously spiritual supports, and provide action references. Take a well-known China ancient story as an(用for就行) example. During the West Han dynasty, there was a very diligent child named QuangHeng. He liked reading very much, but his family was extremely pool(poor) and could not even afford lamp oil for him(afford him lamp oil). Then he cut(这个~换个什么词更好呢,谁能告诉我?) a small hole in the wall, and read under the delicacy() lamplight from neighbor. Finally, he became a famed litterateur. This story moved thousands upon thousands children, and made them cherish the study opportunities they owned. On the other hand, the outcomes of scientific studies are also valuable to modern studies. For instance, medicine counts for much to people's health. Just depending on(我觉得用from就挺好) the studies and accumulations of medicine in all ages, there are the development of modern medicine and the prolongation of people's lives

Moreover, the study of history has undisputable worth to a nation so much as the whole humankind. Such as, studying on the generation of universe and the origin of mankind solves many riddles; studying on the blossom and ruin of historical country makes current government to manage the nation better; studying on the relations between historical nations gives reference for dealing with the relation of modern countries. For example, after review the history of German Nazism, we know that the atrocious rule will be overthrown finally and democracy is the proper way.

History is a great treasure to the mankind. From the study of history, we can conclude the rule of the universe, refer the good experiences, avoid the same mistakes, and prospect the future. For example, seismologists observe the rule of the occurring of former earthquakes, and sum up the phenomena before earthquakes, then get the characters of earthquakes and forecast the future earthquakes. (例子的确不恰当)
To sum up, to study the history is essentially important, because it relates to people's daily lives and the development of the whole world.  

@amy@,题目应该这么理解
研究、学习历史具有其自身的价值仅仅在于它和我们的日常生活相关联
大家好,我是韩小King,写作文真是快乐的事情啊!~~

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发表于 2007-8-24 01:25:13 |只看该作者

顶个老贴上来~

借地咨询下~
这里的daily life具体应该怎么理解啊???

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