Issue208 amy的第十四篇啦，欢迎拍~~

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题目
Issue208 "The way people look, dress, and act reveals their attitudes and interests. You can tell much about a society's ideas and values by observing the appearance and behavior of its people."

翻译：人们的眼神、穿着和动作都揭示了他们的态度和兴趣。你可以透过观察一个社会中人们的外貌和举止来认识该社会的理念和价值观。  

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类别：社会类（总频率48）
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提纲
（1）人的外貌就是外表和穿着，人的举止就是动作，这些都能揭示人的态度和兴趣，同时也能反映社会的理念和价值观。
（2）从人的外貌来看，外貌可以体现一个社会的很多问题。比如：阿拉伯国家的女人不能露脸，说明这些社会的女人地位高； 法国人穿着随便休闲，说明他们很浪漫。另外，外貌还能体现一个社会的变化，比如：几十年前在中国穿牛仔裤的人甚至被认为是坏人，说明那时候的人想法很偏激传统，但现在这种想法已经消失了，任何人都可以穿，甚至被认为是时尚。
（3）但是我们不得不承认有时“我们的眼睛会欺骗我们”，根据一个人的外貌可能会产生某些错误认识。比如人们常常认为穿着好的人就是成功的人，反而不愿意和穿着不好的人交往，其实这是有偏见的。但是举止却是人的内心的真实反映。比如人们尊老爱幼、彬彬有礼，可以反映出人们的人品，等等。
（4）因此观察一个人、一个社会都要结合外貌和举止两方面来看。

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正文
As we all know, people's appearance that is look and dress and People's behavior that is action both can reveal their attitudes and interests. After study, we can find that these facets can also reveal a society's ideas and values. In the following, I will give evidence to support the conclusion.

On the one hand, we often get the first impressions of a person from his appearance. When someone dresses well and floridly, we will think he must be very rich and have high social position. When someone dresses himself with dirty and low-cost clothes, we are easy to treat him as a poor and humble person. The appearance also can reveal some characters of a society. For example, the women of Arab countries should not let their face glimpsed by people except their husbands, and this custom shows that the women in these countries have very low social position and are considered as their husbands' appendixes. For another example, Frenchmen always dress as they like, and the phenomenon tells us that they are very romantic. Moreover, we can find the change of a society from its people's appearance variety. Take China as an example, several years ago, dressing jeans was thought as a crazy action and children who wanted to dress jeans would be blamed strictly by their parents because the parents thought the action is the symptom of their children to get worse. In fact the ideas of those people are totally absurd and very traditional. Now those ideas have disappeared and everyone can put on jeans freely, indeed, the jeans are even considered as fashion. From the great differences, we can know that the ideas and values of China have changed dramatically during these years.

On the other hand, we have to admit that sometimes our eyes will cheat us, in other words, to judge a person only by his appearance maybe make some mistakes. In fact, it is bias that thinking a person dressed well as a successful one and being reluctant to communicate with people with poor clothes. However, behavior is the real reaction of one's heart and more suitable for learning a person’s essence. For instance, when a person is very polite and personable, we can directly conclude that he has good bearing. If most people of a society perform like this, we will learn that the society's vogue is considerable good. For another example, there are great differences on treating with money between American and Chinese. American prefer to spend all their money and even borrow money from bank to purchase something they like, however, Chinese more like to save their money to banks and most of them will not choose the consumption mode that first consume and refund later. From this facet, the distinction of values between American and Chinese can be observed.

To sum up, it is true that we can tell much about a society's ideas and values by observing the appearance and behavior of its people, however, we should consider the both facets at the same time, especially cannot overlook the behavior.

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题目
Issue208 "The way people look, dress, and act reveals their attitudes and interests. You can tell much about a society's ideas and values by observing the appearance and behavior of its people."
提纲
（1）人的外貌就是外表和穿着，人的举止就是动作，这些都能揭示人的态度和兴趣，同时也能反映社会的理念和价值观。
（2）从人的外貌来看，外貌可以体现一个社会的很多问题。比如：阿拉伯国家的女人不能露脸，说明这些社会的女人地位高； 法国人穿着随便休闲，说明他们很浪漫。另外，外貌还能体现一个社会的变化，比如：几十年前在中国穿牛仔裤的人甚至被认为是坏人，说明那时候的人想法很偏激传统，但现在这种想法已经消失了，任何人都可以穿，甚至被认为是时尚。
（3）但是我们不得不承认有时“我们的眼睛会欺骗我们”，根据一个人的外貌可能会产生某些错误认识。比如人们常常认为穿着好的人就是成功的人，反而不愿意和穿着不好的人交往，其实这是有偏见的。但是举止却是人的内心的真实反映。比如人们尊老爱幼、彬彬有礼，可以反映出人们的人品，等等。
（4）因此观察一个人、一个社会都要结合外貌和举止两方面来看。
正文
As we all know口语化，可以改为as is know to everyone, people's appearance that is look and dress and People's behavior that is action both can reveal their attitudes and interests.在这里将题目中的appearance和look and dress, behavior和action统一起来，很巧妙值得学习 After study是表达“通过研究”吧，感觉突然这么说有些生硬，还不如去掉, we can find that these facets can also reveal a society's ideas and values. In the following, I will give evidence to support the ；conclusion.个人感觉最后一句有点多余，像在写arg，用一个简单的比如as I talk below代替就成，个人意见，如果说的不对表在意阿

On the one hand, we often get the first impressions of a person from his appearance. When someone dresses well and floridly, we will think he must be very rich and have high social positionstatus可能更为地道一些. When someone dresses himself with dirty恩，我没想到用的短语，学习ing and low-cost clothes, we are easy to treat him as a poor and humble person. 另一层意思，来个连接词更好The appearance also can reveal some characters of a society. For example, the women of Arab countries should not let their face glimpsed by people except their husbands, and this custom shows that the women in these countries have very low social position and are considered as their husbands' appendixes. For another example, Frenchmen always dress as they like似乎又口语了, and the phenomenon tells us that they are very romantic. Moreover, we can find the change of a society from its people's appearance variety. Take China as an example, several years ago, dressing jeans was thought as a crazy action and children who wanted to dress jeans would be blamed strictly by their parents because the parents thought the action is the symptom of their children to get worse. In fact the ideas of those people are totally absurd and very traditional. Now those ideas have disappeared and everyone can put on jeans freely, indeed, the jeans are even considered as fashion. From the great differences, we can know that the ideas and values of China have changed dramatically during these years.这一大段写了三层意思，分别以一个小的主旨句开始加上一些例子构成，但整段缺少总的主旨句，应该在段首加上完整的包含三层意思；另外，第一层次说通过外表来产生对人的第一印象，似乎和题目中的attitudes and interests的理解有出入，我的文章中也存在这个问题，不知道如何解决

On the other hand, we have to admit that sometimes our eyes will cheat us, in other words, to judge a person only by his appearance maybe make some mistakes. In fact, it is bias that thinking a person dressed well as a successful one and being reluctant to communicate with people with poor clothes. However, behavior is the real reaction of one's heart and more suitable for learning a person’s essence. For instance, when a person is very polite and personable, we can directly conclude that he has good bearing. If most people of a society perform like this, we will learn that the society's vogue is considerable good例子很好，把题目中两方面都说到了，学习ing. For another example, there are great differences on treating with money between American and Chinese. American prefer to spend all their money and even borrow money from bank to purchase something they like, however, Chinese more like to save their money to banks and most of them will not choose the consumption mode that first consume and refund later. From this facet, the distinction of values between American and Chinese can be observed.和上段一样，缺总的主旨句

To sum up, it is true that we can tell much about a society's ideas and values by observing the appearance and behavior of its people, however, we should consider the去掉the both facets at the same time, especially cannot overlook the behavior.
鸡蛋里挑骨头，amy不要怪哦:P。这么短的时间里完成已经很厉害了，我还停留在要磨n久才能挤出来的阶段；另外建议amy再多增强句式的变换就更好了

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As is known to everyone, people's appearance that is look and dress and People's behavior that is action both can reveal their attitudes and interests. We can find that these facets can also reveal a society's ideas and values as discussed below.

On the one hand, appearance is the most direct way for people to learn a person or a society. Firstly, we often get the first impressions of a person from his appearance. When someone dresses well and floridly, we will think he must be very rich and have high social class. When someone dresses himself with dirty and low-cost clothes, we are easy to treat him as a poor and humble person. Secondly, the appearance also can reveal some characters of a society. For example, the women of Arab countries should not let their face glimpsed by people except their husbands, and this custom shows that the women in these countries have very low social class and are considered as their husbands' appendixes. For another example, Frenchmen always dress relaxed, and the phenomenon tells us that they are very romantic. Thirdly, we can find the change of a society from its people's appearance variety. Take China as an example, several years ago, dressing jeans was thought as a crazy action and children who wanted to dress jeans would be blamed strictly by their parents because the parents thought the action is the symptom of their children to get worse. In fact the ideas of those people are totally absurd and very traditional. Now those ideas have disappeared and everyone can put on jeans freely, indeed, the jeans are even considered as fashion. From the great differences, we can know that the ideas and values of China have changed dramatically during these years.

On the other hand, we have to admit that sometimes our eyes will cheat us, in other words, to judge a person only by his appearance maybe make some mistakes, but behavior is more dependable. In fact, it is bias that thinking a person dressed well as a successful one and being reluctant to communicate with people with poor clothes. However, behavior is the real reaction of one's heart and more suitable for learning a person’s essence. For instance, when a person is very polite and personable, we can directly conclude that he has good bearing. If most people of a society perform like this, we will learn that the society's vogue is considerable good. For another example, there are great differences on treating with money between American and Chinese. American prefer to spend all their money and even borrow money from bank to purchase something they like, however, Chinese more like to save their money to banks and most of them will not choose the consumption mode that first consume and refund later. From this facet, the distinction of values between American and Chinese can be observed.

To sum up, it is true that we can tell much about a society's ideas and values by observing the appearance and behavior of its people, however, we should consider both facets at the same time, especially cannot overlook the behavior.

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