issue208 Gter四月''无名''小组第31次作业-Expire7

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1。老年人体现社会传统
2。中年人体现主流文化
3。年轻人体现潮流和未来

TOPIC：ISSUE 208 - "The way people look, dress, and act reveals their attitudes and interests. You can tell much about a society's ideas and values by observing the appearance and behavior of its people."
WORDS：603          TIME：上午 12:40:00          DATE：2006-3-18

The appearance and behavior of people reflects their attitudes and interests. Through observance and careful analysis, we can find a society's ideas and values inherently revealed by those things. I totally agree with the contention of the speaker, and I will support my view from the different age of people, such as the elder, the young and the mid-aged.

When it comes the elder, I am inclined to the statement of the speaker is that in order to find tradition and morality in a society, the elder should be the appropriate group to manifest them by their appearance and behavior. Although economy and technology keep on developing without any cessation and influence more and more people, even orientate the bearings of the whole society, in some sense those revolutions and impulses have not dramatically far-reaching effect to elders. Parts of reasons results from that elders have passed the time easily and readily affected and impacted by novelties. In recent decades, many cultures and traditions have been harmed and damaged according to the advanced society. Therefore, those old people, who still stick to the traditional methods of preening, dressing and behaving, are the valuable living fossil that would help us understand the customs and morality of a society. They prefer wearing the traditional clothes, observing the old and valuable principle of morality and keeping the simper life than other people.

As for the mid-aged, those people's attitudes and interests reveal views of the main society, or the so-called values mixed the tradition and modern. As the underpinning of their society, it is undoubted that they can not escape from the influence of the varying society, and some changes inevitably led by the changing society. A huge majority of them put away the traditional dress and wear the suit and pantsuit, which is the standard of dress in modern society. They persist on the traditional virtues and forefather's morality, but at the same time they open mind to accept the effect of new value and morality generated by the society. Consider, for example, the abortion that is the hotly debated topic. To elders, it is a huge problem which can not be acceptable even debate in their time. However, with the development of human society and people, people become tolerate and respect different people and different behaviors. Their professional dress, new value and morality, and open-mind are the obvious traits of their attitudes and interests and parts of a society..

Turning to the young, it is certain that they possess hints to demonstrate the popularity and the future of a society. In contrast to the elder and the mid-aged, the young might be the more proper people to show the populous things and the developing direction of a society. Almost all of them can accept any shifting fad, thought, ideas, and value. The first group who starts to play the street basketball is the young; the first group who accept the freedom and democracy is the young; and the first group who begin retrieving information in internet and learning from distant course is the young. To some extent those people are the most vivid one and who will keep our society fresh, and bring about progress in the future for the braking outmoded tradition and bad morality.

To sum up, due to analysis above and relevant examples, there is no doubt that more and more people will realize that our appearance and behavior indeed reflect our society's idea and values under some circumstances, for the reason that we are living in this society, and naturally we will represent our society.

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The appearance and behavior of people reflects their attitudes and interests. Through observance and careful analysis, we can find a society's ideas and values inherently revealed by those things. I totally agree with the contention of the speaker, and I will support my view from the different age of people, such as the elder, the young and the mid-aged.

When it comes the elder, I am inclined to the statement of the speaker is that in order to find tradition and morality in a society, the elder should be the appropriate group to manifest them by their appearance and behavior. Although economy and technology keep on developing without any cessation and influence more and more people, even orientate the bearings of the whole society, in some sense those revolutions and impulses have not dramatically far-reaching effect to elders. Parts of reasons results(result) from that elders have passed the time easily and readily affected and impacted by novelties. In recent decades, many cultures and traditions have been harmed and damaged according to the advanced society. Therefore, those old people, who still stick to the traditional methods of preening, dressing and behaving, are the valuable living fossil that would help us understand the customs and morality of a society. They prefer wearing the traditional clothes,(去掉the) observing the old and valuable principle of morality and keeping the simper life than other people.

As for the mid-aged, those people's attitudes and interests reveal views of the main society, or the so-called values mixed the tradition and modern. As the underpinning of their society, it is undoubted that they can not escape from the influence of the varying society, and some changes inevitably led by the changing society. A huge majority of them put away the traditional dress and wear the suit and pantsuit, which is the standard of dress in modern society. They persist on the traditional virtues and forefather's morality, but at the same time they open mind to accept the effect of new value and morality generated by the society. Consider, for example, the abortion that is the hotly debated topic. To elders, it is a huge problem which can not be acceptable even debate(debated) in their time. However, with the development of human society and people(human society and people??), people become tolerate and respect different people and different behaviors. Their professional dress, new value and morality, and open-mind are the obvious traits of their attitudes and interests and parts of a society..

Turning to the young, it is certain that they possess hints to demonstrate the popularity and the future of a society. In contrast to the elder and the mid-aged, the young might be the more proper people to show the populous things (populous 人口密集的, popular 吧) and the developing direction of a society. Almost all of them can accept any shifting fad, thought, ideas, and value. The first group who starts to play the street basketball is the young; the first group who accept the freedom and democracy is the young;(这小句单复数不一致) and the first group who begin retrieving information in internet and learning from distant course is the young(还有这个句,前面begin, 后面is) . To some extent those people are the most vivid one(ones) and who will keep our society fresh, and bring about progress in the future for the braking outmoded tradition and bad morality.

To sum up, due to analysis above and relevant examples, there is no doubt that more and more people will realize that our appearance and behavior indeed reflect our society's idea and values under some circumstances, for the reason that we are living in this society, and naturally we will represent our society. (for the reason that we are... and that naturally we...)(还有...以前听别人说的不知道对不对..,这种议论文最好少用we,可以用people来代替, for the reason that people are living in this society, and naturally people would represent the society.)

yytmywhUID: 2188847

等331你考完了是不是就没有人布置作业了呢? 呵呵..

yytmywhUID: 2188847

全文用这样3点来说蛮好的

嘿嘿不过个人觉得年轻人还是很体现社会传统文化的...中国的小孩和美国的小孩还是有很多很传统很根本的不同........

yytmywhUID: 2188847

关于语法,总的来说
1,多主意单复数主谓的前后一致
2,有的地方的the,还是多斟酌下到底需要不需要,我没全标出来,感觉很多地方的the其实是没用的

yytmywhUID: 2188847

灌了4个帖子..
不吉利..
再灌一个凑成5..
嘿嘿
拨开洪水掩面跑开........

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谢了.按照我今天估计在我考试之前作业就布置完了.最高频的都会写到,次的也会布置成提纲了。A的难题也基本会在提纲里面写完。如果没有写提纲的，有时间可以当作业写。

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The appearance and behavior of people reflects reflect their attitudes and interests. Through observance and careful analysis, we can find a society's ideas and values inherently revealed by those things. I totally agree with the contention of the speaker, and I will support my view from the different age of people, such as the elder, the young and the mid-aged.这样的开头真是直接啊……

When it comes to the elder, I am inclined to the statement of the speaker is 去掉that in order to find tradition and morality in a society, the elder should be the appropriate group to manifest them by their appearance and behavior用复数. Although economy and technology keep on developing without any cessation and influence more and more increasing people, eveneven用在这里是想表达什么意思？ orientate the bearings of the whole society, in some sense those revolutions and impulses have not dramatically far-reaching effects to the elders. Parts of reasons results from that elders have passed the time easily and readily be affected and impacted by novelties. In recent decades, many cultures and traditions have been harmed and damaged according to the advanced society. Therefore, those old people, who still stick to the traditional methods of preening, dressing and behaving, are the valuable living fossil这个比喻用的真恐怖 that would help us understand the customs and morality of a society. They prefer wearing the traditional clothes, observing the old and valuable principle of morality and keeping the simper life than other peoplethe simper就已经说得很明白了，不用再than.

As for the mid-aged, those people's attitudes and interests reveal views of the main society, or the so-called values mixed the tradition and modern. As the underpinning of their society, it is undoubted that they can not escape from the influence of the varying society, and some changes inevitably led by the changing society. A huge majority of them put away the traditional dress and wear the suit and pantsuit, which is are the standard of dress in modern society. They persist on the traditional virtues and forefather's morality, but at the same time they open mind to accept the effects of new value and morality generated by the society. Consider这是consider的什么用法？？, for example, the abortion that is the hotly debated topic.这句话的结构不是很懂，只看for example后面的句子，只是一个从句啊缺少主句，但不晓得是不是那个consider的特殊用法？ To elders, it is a huge 用过huge了，换big problem which can not be acceptableaccepted even debate 感觉去掉好一点in their time. However, with the development of human society and peoplepopulation, people become tolerate改成名词或形容词 and respect different people and different behaviors. Their professional dress, new value and morality, and open-mind are the obvious traits of their attitudes and interests and parts of a society..

Turning to the young, it is certain that they possess hints to demonstrate the popularity and the future of a society. In contrast to the elder and the mid-aged, the young might be the more proper people to show the populous things and the developing direction of a society. Almost all of them can accept any shifting fad, thought, ideas, and value. The first group who starts to play the street basketball is the young; the first group who accept the freedom and democracy is the young; and the first group who begin retrieving information in internet and learning from distant course is the young. 这个排比挺精彩的，就是不知道为什么读起来总觉得像中文……To some extent those people are the most vivid one and who will keep our society fresh, and bring about progress in the future for the braking outmoded tradition and bad morality.

To sum up, due to analysis above and relevant examples, there is no doubt that more and more people will realize that our appearance and behavior indeed reflect our society's idea and values under some circumstances, for the reason that we are living in this society, and naturally we will represent our society这句虽然很简单但读起来很自然很舒服.

好文，越看越觉得我写的像散文不符合要求了……