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发表于 2008-8-6 18:30:43 |显示全部楼层
Nowadays, the ability to cooperate is more imporant than past? A or DA(周三作业,如果写过可以写其它机井。)

When it comes to the importance ability of cooperation in the past and today, the views vary from person to person. Some people assert that we have more advantaged technologies today, thus the cooperation is less important than ever before while others hold opposite opinions. Personally, i side with the latter and my reasons are listed as follows.

First of all, the task today is more and more complex. Though we have invented numerous technologies, machines, and uncovered a bundle of mysteries, the difficulties we face correspondingly increase greatly. Since then there is no one can deal with it just rely on himself. Take producing technical products example. The whole process are divided into several part such as observation, hypothesis, design, making models, production. Each step needs professional researcher to complete it well. Therefore, we have different apartment, like marketing, design, and advertisement.

The complexity is not only reflecting in tasks but also the relationship today. Cooperation can improve our ability of dealing with complex relationship in the society. The longer time we entering the adualt's world, the more people we are going to contact with. It is a cruel point to decide how well and how long we can achieve our life goal. In the process of learning cooperation, we go through a variety of hardship:we quarrel with partners, put up new ideas which base on others' mistakes. With the days passing, we gain a lot from the cooperation and be much more confidence.

The last but not least, we can share the emotion with others by cooperation. The people around us seems more crowded today while sometimes we feel more lonely. The cooperation no doubt give us a good chance to share the our happiness or sadness. The partner working together can easily understand us and gives more useful advises to solve the problems.

To sum up, considering neither the complexity of tasks and relationships nor the need for expressing our emotions, it is sagacious to conclude that cooperation is more important today than in the past.

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发表于 2008-8-6 22:52:12 |显示全部楼层
When it comes to the importance ability of cooperation in the past and today, the views vary from person to person. Some people assert that we have more advantaged technologies today, thus the cooperation is less important than ever before while others hold opposite opinions. Personally, i side with the latter and my reasons are listed as follows.

First of all, the task today is more and more complex. Though we have invented numerous technologies, machines, and uncovered a bundle of mysteries, the difficulties we face correspondingly increase greatly. Since then there is no one can deal with it just rely on himself. Take producing technical products example. The whole process are divided into several part such as observation, hypothesis, design, making models, production. Each step needs professional researchers to complete it well. Therefore, we have different apartment, like marketing, design, and advertisement. 留学,考试,TOEFL,GRE,GMAT,IELTS,SAT,VISA,文书,签证,论坛,出国,申请,美国,英国,欧洲,加拿大,USA%Wns,i#]        T

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The complexity is not only reflecting in tasks but also the relationship today. Cooperation can improve our ability of dealing with complex relationship in the society. The longer time we entering the adualt's world, the more people we are going to contact with. It is a cruel point to decide how well  and how long we can achieve our life goal. In the process of learning cooperation, we go through a variety of hardship:we quarrel with partners, put up new ideas which base on others' mistakes. With the days passing, we gain a lot from the cooperation and be much more confidence. 留学,考试,TOEFL,GRE,GMAT,IELTS,SAT,VISA,文书,签证,论坛,出国,申请,美国,英国,欧洲,加拿大,USAD@"KP
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The last but not least, we can share the emotion with others by cooperation. The people around us seems more crowded today while sometimes we feel more lonely. The cooperation no doubt give us a good chance to share the our happiness or sadness. The partner working together can easily understand us and gives more useful advises to solve the problems.

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To sum up, considering neither the complexity of tasks and relationships nor(either--or,or both---and) the need for expressing our emotions, it is sagacious to conclude that cooperation is more important today than in the past.

写得很好。考试能发挥出来就好了。
但是,最好各段都要突出主题。
以防跑题。感觉你很有跑题倾向。

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