TOEFL 4—6月-Dark_Tournament小组第四次作业

duduyan11UID：2591951

It is better for students at university or in college to choose difficult classes even if they cannot get top grades.（08.1.13)


Nowadays , there is a phenomenon has caused wide public concern in many places of the world that students choose the difficult or challenging classes in college or university though they cannot get a great grade. When it comes to this issue , some people believe that it is bad for students , others , however , disagree with it . As for me , i am in favor of the opinion that it is better for students at univeisity  or in college to choose difficult classes even if they cannot get top grades for following reasons .

First of all ,    students choose  difficult classes to obtain more choices ,higher salaries , and more opportunities for advancement in an increasingly competitive job market. For instance , many students choose Computer Science Class though it is very difficult . Needless to say  applicants with Computer Science degree would not only be qualified for jobs in hightech companies , they would also be well prepared for any job with computer skills as a prerequisite . With a larger  range of potential jobs to choose from , students are more likely to find a job that suits their particular needs and interests.

Second , employers are willing to pay a premium for challenging subjects' students. For example , many companies desire employees offer higher salaries to attract the students that have a difficult subject' s degree .Even if a jog applicant with a college degree has high standardizard test scores , employers may still place a higher value on an applicant with    challenging classes who may  have  lower grades .Students  are not only more likely to receive more job offers , they can also command higher salaries than applicants who have an easy subject's degree .

Last but no least , in addition to offering more choices and higher salaries , a challenging subject's  degree offers access to jobs with a clear path towards professional advancement . For example , a  B.S. in biology  could allow a student to find a job in a lab after graduation , a first step on the road towards a career in scientific research. The same major could also be used to apply to medical school , and a career as a doctor .

In summary, considerable though the advantages that study easy subjects enjoys are , they can not compete with the benefits that choose challenging or difficult classes even if they cannot get up top grades.

mimicaUID：2457275

Nowadays , there is a phenomenon has caused wide public concern in many places of the world that students choose the difficult or challenging classes in college or university though they cannot get a great grade. (这一句有点儿混乱，俩谓语。改为Nowadays, the phenomenon that students choose difficult classes in college though they cannot get great grades has caused wide public concern in many places of the world。)When it comes to this issue , some people believe that it is bad for students , others , however , disagree with it . As for me , i am in favor of the opinion that it is better for students at univeisity （university） or in college to choose difficult classes even if they cannot get top grades for following reasons .

First of all ,    students choose  difficult classes to obtain more choices ,higher salaries , and more opportunities for advancement in an increasingly competitive job market. For instance , many students choose Computer Science Class though it is very difficult . Needless to say  applicants with Computer Science degree would not only be qualified for jobs in high-tech companies , they would also be well prepared for any job with computer skills as a prerequisite . With a larger  range of potential jobs to choose from , students are more likely to find a job that suits their particular needs and interests.

Second , employers are willing to pay a premium for challenging subjects' students. For example , many companies desire employees (and )offer higher salaries to attract the students that have a difficult subject' s degree .Even if a jog applicant with a college degree has high standardizard (standardized)test scores , employers may still place a higher value on an applicant with    challenging classes who may  have  lower grades .Students  are not only more likely to receive more job offers , they can also command higher salaries than applicants who have an easy subject's degree .

Last but no least , in addition to offering more choices and higher salaries , a challenging subject's  degree offers access to jobs with a clear path towards professional advancement . For example , a  B.S. in biology  could allow a student to find a job in a lab after graduation , a first step on the road towards a career in scientific research. The same major could also be used to apply to medical school , and a career as a doctor .

In summary, considerable though the advantages that study easy subjects enjoys are , they can not compete with the benefits that choose challenging or difficult classes even if they cannot get up top grades.

中间三段基本原搬李笑来的，但放在这里作论据似乎很勉强，还是应该自己想些例证出来论述，好的句子可以套用格式，但绝对要有自己的思想。

天泽UID：2340391

It is better for students at university or in college to choose difficult classes even if they cannot get top grades.（08.1.13)
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Nowadays , there is a phenomenon that has caused wide public concern in many places of the world that students choose the difficult or challenging classes in college or university though they cannot get a great grade. When it comes to this issue, some people believe that it is bad for students(, others). Others, however , disagree with it . As for me, (i)I am in favor of the opinion that it is better for students at the (univeisity)university  or in the college to choose difficult classes even if they cannot get top grades for following reasons.

First of all, students choose difficult classes to obtain (more choices, higher salaries, and )删掉more opportunities for advancement and higher salaries in an increasingly competitive job market. For instance, many students choose Computer Science Class though it is very difficult. Needless to say applicants with Computer Science degree would not only be qualified for jobs in high-tech companies, they would also be well prepared for any job with computer skills as a prerequisite. With a larger range of potential jobs to choose from, students are more likely to find a job that suits their particular needs and interests.
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(Second)Secondly, employers are willing to pay a premium for (challenging subjects' students)the students with challenging subjects. (For example, many companies desire employees offer higher salaries to attract the students that have a difficult subject' s degree .Even if a jog applicant with a college degree has high standardizard test scores )什么意思？, employers may still place a higher value on an applicant with challenging classes (who may have)having lower grades. Students are not only more likely to receive more job offers, they can also command higher salaries than applicants who have an easy subject's degree.

Last but (no)not least , in addition to offering more choices and higher salaries , a challenging subject's  degree offers access to jobs with a clear path towards professional advancement . For example , a  B.S. in biology  could allow a student to find a job in a lab after graduation , a first step on the road towards a career in scientific research. The same major could also be used to apply to medical school , and a career as a doctor .9 c2 P/ f0 I/ D% ], L! Y# Y1 w

In summary, considerable though the advantages that study easy subjects enjoys are , they can not compete with the benefits that choose challenging or difficult classes even if they cannot get up top grades.

感觉本文中心偏离题意了，题目写的是有难度的课程而不是有难度的专业。