【Dark_Tournament TOEFL-ibt作文小组第六次作业】

duduyan11UID: 2591951

Agree or disagree : the best way to travel is in a group lead by a guide.


Nowadays , there is a phenomenon has caused wide public concern in many places of the world that traveling in a group with an experiend  tour guide or travel by themselves . Personally , i believe that , although traveling in a group with a guide is obviously convient , the benefits are often not significant enough and in many ways in this kind of way  can  limit one's travel experience.

The conviences of group travel with a guide include the fact that one easily meet other people and thus has a more enjoyable and comfortable experience. This is most important when traveling in a foreign country where a language barrier prevents interection with the locals and isolation can become a problem. The guide is often experiened in generating a jovil atmosphere within  travel troup and her knowledge of foreign culture and places of interest provide travels with a greater appreciation of their trip . Also ,and maybe most importantly, when traveling with a group the individual travellers normally does not have to worry about hotel reservations and translations . Those aspects are taken care of .

On the other hand , convience might not be important to a traveller  and traveling alone allows far more personal freedom . For example , one can easily make changes to travel itinerarel and choose to stay in certain place or move on quickly than otherwise posible , because he dose not follow  a set schedule .
Learning about foreign culture and places of interest is also more easy  as that information is readily aviable in books . Furthemore , traveller tend to congragate , it is easy to meet fellow vacationers who might have insightful tips as far as where to go and what to do .Generally , bisic command of English language suffices to have informative exchanges with other travellers and the locals who are very eager to sharing their cultures and custom .

Therefore , traveling  outside a large travel grouop can result in a richer and genuin experience , and i believe this experience to be jmore exciting to me .

chelseajcoleUID: 2589519

Agree or disagree : the best way to travel is in a group lead by a guide.

Nowadays, there is a phenomenon has caused wide public concern in many places of the world that traveling in a group with an experiend  tour guide or travel by themselves . Personally , i believe that , although traveling in a group with a guide is obviously convient , the benefits are often not significant enough and in many ways in this kind of way  can  limit one's travel experience.
（有套模板的嫌疑哦，Nowadays, there is a phenomenon has caused wide public concern in many places of the world that  A or B.Personally , i believe that , although A  is obviously XXX , the benefits are often not significant enough and in many ways in this kind of way  can  XXX)


The conviences of group travel with a guide include the fact that one easily meet other people and thus has a more enjoyable and comfortable experience.(舒服的经验？改成UNFORGETTABLE 怎么样？） This is （最高级前面加THE）most important when traveling in a foreign country where a language barrier prevents interection with the locals and isolation can become a problem. （读起来感觉有点问题，IMPORTMENT 什么,用WHERE来连接，感觉不是很妥当）The guide is often experiened（experienced） in generating a jovil atmosphere within  travel troup and （HIS OR)her knowledge of foreign culture and places of interest provide travels with a greater appreciation of their trip . Also ,and maybe most importantly, when traveling with a group the individual travellers normally does not have to worry about hotel reservations and translations . Those aspects are taken care of
扣题，说了跟团的三个好处，但感觉层次不是很明确，这段上来说跟团是为了easily meet other people，但说着说着就有点偏，感觉主题句不能很好的概括）


On the other hand , convience might not be important to a traveller  and traveling alone allows far more personal freedom . For example , one can easily make changes to travel itinerarel（拼错） and choose to stay in certain place or move on quickly than otherwise posible , because he dose not follow  a set schedule .
（example 的东西其实还是freedom的重复，建议可以加一个个人经验作为论据，也可以进行正反对比，效果强烈）

Learning about foreign culture and places of interest is also more easy（easier） as that information is readily aviable（available） in books . Furthemore , traveller tend to congragate , it is easy to meet fellow vacationers who might have insightful tips as far as where to go and what to do .Generally , bisic command of English language suffices to have informative exchanges with other travellers and the locals who are very eager to sharing their cultures and custom .
（懂英语可以和同伴交流 和当地人交流，没能凸显有导游和自己游的区别，应该是 有导游不存在语言问题，但没导游，只要懂英语，也不存在，这么一对比才围绕主题）
Therefore, traveling  outside （with） a large travel grouop （group）can result in a richer and genuin（genuine） experience , and i believe this experience to be jmore exciting to me .