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刷牙小灰猫UID: 2513544

People seldom agree with each other in such kind of things as the preference between finishing the projects one by one or finishing two projects at the same time. When some praise the efficiency of concentrating on one project, there always others complaint the boring work of locking their mind on one thing. Of course, depending on the different background and experiences, different people have different ways to work. According to my personality, I would like to choose to finish the projects one by one. In the following discussion, I will list my reasons and give some specific examples to support my choice.
There is an old saying in Chinese that one mind could never solve two problems simultaneously! It means that one can not concentrate the attention on two things at the same time. True enough. Concentrating all my attention on one project helps me to achieve the task with high quality. In contrast, if two or more projects are all on my mind, I will mix them up. For example, I can never get an ‘A’ in the test which is too closed to another, Because I need to prepare different subjects together, no matter how hard I worked all the semester, I always get ’B’ . But the situation will be different if there is enough time between two tests, usually, I can achieve them perfectly.
Generally speaking, that achieving the tasks one after another is faster than that dealing with them together for me. Because concentrating my attention on one task helps me to achieve it more efficiently so save the time. Moreover, when a project is finished, I always feel achievability and confidence, which is the best preparation for the following task. For instance, usually I can finish a 1000 words essay in 2 or 2.5 hours, so two such kind of essays will spend me 4 or 5 hours in the event that I write them in different time. But if I choose to deal with them together, I can’t finish them even I work all the day!
In conclusion, achieving projects one by another is a better way for me, it’s not only allowing me to finish them with high quality, but also save my time.

zhuyongchaochaoUID: 2616114

People seldom agree with each other in such kind of things as the preference between finishing the projects one by one or finishing two projects at the same time. When some praise the efficiency of concentrating on one project, there always ( 去掉there always， 句式已经包含“有”的意思) others complaint the boring work of locking their mind on one thing.（句式表达好） Of course, depending on the（去掉the） different background and experiences, different (various)  people have different(multiple) ways to work. (词汇的变换) According to my personality, I would like to choose to （去掉to choose， 不简洁） finish the projects one by one. In the following discussion, I will list my reasons and give some specific examples to support my choice. （view更像议论文观点）1 X- \4 T% f) u) Z5 S
There is an old saying in Chinese that （that 改成goes） one mind could never solve two problems simultaneously! It means that one can not concentrate the attention( 去掉the attention， 固定搭配是concentrate on sth， 中间不加词)  on two things at the same time. True enough. Concentrating all my attention on one project helps me to achieve the task with high quality. In contrast, if two or more projects are all on my mind, I will mix them up. For example, I can never get an ‘A’ in the test which is too closed to another, Because I need to prepare different subjects together, no matter how hard I worked all the semester, I always get ’B’ . But the situation will be different if there is enough time between two tests, usually, I can achieve（accomplish） them perfectly. - N& t3 ^3 E* N9 l7 U
Generally speaking, that achieving the tasks one after another is faster than that dealing with them together for me. Because concentrating my attention (去掉my attention )on one task helps me to achieve it more efficiently so save the time.  （或者用Focusing my attention on one ……） Moreover, when a project is finished, I always feel achievability and confidence, which is the best preparation for the following task. For instance, usually I can finish a 1000 words essay in 2 or 2.5 hours, so two such kind of essays will spend me 4 or 5 hours in the event that I write them in different time. But if I choose to deal with them together, I can’t finish them even I work all the day!
& ~( t9 z5 K0 i1 d! qIn conclusion, achieving projects one by another is a better way for me, it’s not only allowing  （it not only allows ） me to finish them with high quality, but also saves my time.

Pros  1,  395个字，挺多的 2词汇量大 3 阐释论点详细清楚，例证成分有力
Cons 1， 字数多了，时间怕超 2 注意固定搭配

yievenUID: 2324451

People seldom agree with each other in such kind of things as the preference between finishing the projects one by one or finishing two projects at the same time. When(While更好) some praise the efficiency of concentrating on one project, there always others complaint(complain [改成others may complain更好]) the boring work of locking their mind on one thing. Of course, depending on the different background and experiences, different people have different ways to work. According to my personality, I would like to choose to finish the projects one by one. In the following discussion, I will list my reasons and give some specific examples to support my choice.(此句有凑字数嫌疑……)
There is an old saying in Chinese that one mind could never solve two problems simultaneously! It means that one can not concentrate the attention(the attention应删去) on two things at the same time. True enough. Concentrating all my attention on(可以改成Immersing myself in) one project helps me to achieve the task with high quality. In contrast, if two or more projects are all on my mind, I will mix them up. For example, I can never get an ‘A’ in the test which is too closed to another, Because I need to prepare different subjects together, no matter how hard I worked all the semester, I always get ’B’ . But the situation will be different if there is enough time between two tests (…if the interval is long enough), usually, I can achieve them perfectly.
Generally speaking, that achieving the tasks one after another is faster than that dealing with them together for me (For me, achieving tasks one by one is faster that dealing with together. [感觉Generally speaking用在这里怪怪的，不如直接就用for me]). Because concentrating my attention on one task helps me to achieve it more efficiently so save the time (Concentrating on one task leads to efficiency thus time is saved. [because引导的是从句，这里句子结构不完整。而且本句中又有because和so连用…)…]. Moreover, when a project is finished, I always feel achievability and confidence(have a sense of achievability and confidence或是feel achievable and confident [feel后接形容词]), which is the best preparation for the following task ([???感觉怪怪的]which can be the best preparation for the following task????) . For instance, usually I can finish a 1000 words (1000-word 或者是an essay with 1000 words) essay in 2 or 2.5 hours, so two such kind of essays(two essays of such kind) will spend(cost  [sb. spend some time…to do sth./ sth. costs sb. some time… ]) me 4 or 5 hours in the event that I write them in different time. But if I choose to deal with them together, I can’t finish them even I work all the day!
In conclusion, achieving projects one by another is a better way for me, it’s not only allowing(it doesn’t only allow) me to finish them with high quality, but also save my time.

刷牙小灰猫UID: 2513544

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