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Jessie奔奔UID: 2627156

Teacher should be paid according to their students’ performs

Education is one of the holiest occupations in my view. It is true that teacher plays an important role in students’ education and learning. But comes to this question whether teacher should be paid according to their students’ performs. Different people have different opinions due to their different background. From my personal angle, I am in favor of the opinion that teachers should not be paid according to how much their students learn.

First of all, school examinations are only one aspects of text how much students learn, so we could not rely this to understand the students really mastery how much of the knowledge. The exams are different so the results are different. As is known to all, the easier exams are the higher score you obtain, which can be easily demonstrated by thousands of examples in our daily life. For example, my brother is a good student in his class, every exam his score is the highest. But once exam his score is very low due to two reasons. On one hand this exam is very difficulty so many students have a low scores, on the other hand my brother has a fever so he did not do his best. But how can we say my brother did not learn much knowledge so the teacher who did his or her best to taught my brother should pay lowest?

In addition, how much or how well students learn depends on themselves. In a school, is easy to see many students get a high marks, but quite a few still have lower marks. The teacher taught the students the same thing so why the results are different, we should serious consideration this question. I think the more attention students pay, the more knowledge they learn. The hard-working student may get higher scores. Sometimes it has noting to do what how well the teachers taught. For instance, my friends Lily does not like to study so she often gets a low score no mater our teacher strict on her. Therefore, the most striking conclusion is obvious that the teacher should not paid according to their students’ performs. It is unfair that teachers are paid according to how much their students learn.

Furthermore, I think teacher paid according to their students’ performs maybe arise the students pressure of study. For example, the teacher may let their students learn many things and assignment students many work in order to add their paid. This may course student digest of study and influence student efficiencies of study. So I strongly disagree that teacher should paid according to their students’ perform.

To sum up, although teachers are important in students’ education and learning, there are many other factors that decided how well students learn. So taking into account all the factors discussed above, we could safely come to the conclusion that teacher should not paid according to their students’ perform.

75108397UID: 2525955

First of all, school examinations are only one aspects of text how much students learn,so we could not rely this to understand the students really mastery how much of the knowledge.我觉得举例说明考试不缺点不好，说其他方面综合起来反映学生的学习程度或者开头直接说考试有缺点。还有些单词错误，单复数错误。我觉得你写的挺好的，观点独特，举的例子也好。

Jessie奔奔UID: 2627156

哦 谢谢你给出的建议 我语法太差了