【Dark_Tournament TOEFL-ibt作文小组风辰的眼泪的 第24次作业】

风辰的眼泪UID: 2618183

06/30/07: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Letting a friend make a mistake is better than saying or doing something that may destroy the friendship. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Friendship is an essential part of our daily life that most of human beings cannot live without it. Friendship makes life easier, more convenient and delightful, which people pursuit to. As a consequence, how to keep friendship certainly becomes a prevalent problem that people may face everyday because it is inevitable to have some scrub when together. When meeting a dilemma, some people tend to let friends make a mistake rather than saying or doing something that may destroy the friendship while some prone to the opposite choice. Personally, the former is the better action for me.

The principal reason for my perspective is that letting a friend make a mistake makes him/her aware of the existed problem and have lower risk to destroy the friendship. When being conscious of a problem, I prefer to choose calm. Because if I rashly indicate that the other side has made a mistake, it may hurt his/her self-esteem and have a negative effect on our friendship. Nevertheless, if I keep calm and carefully conduct my friend to realize the problem, even let him/her make such a mistake, then the counterpart will suddenly be aware of the existed problem and correct it immediately. In that way, my friend may apprehend my sincerity and appreciate my action for him/her which can effectively enhance our friendship.

Another primary reason that deserves to be mentioned here is that making a mistake themselves helps to strengthen the memory and avoid recurring the same mistake again. There is a prevalent phenomenon that people often involve in the same plight for several times under the condition that they are reminded by others and abort the tendency immediately. Obviously, people cannot impress the warnings by friends and the things that haven’t really happened for a long time, but completely forget sooner or later. In the contrast, if people themselves really make the mistake and experience the passive result, they may impress it profoundly and never forget it which helps them to preclude making the same mistake again. Under this circumstance, letting friends make a mistake is another form to help friends correct their errors.

The merits of the action that I supported are of course more than above two. Although it may leads some negative impacts, such as my friend may be conscious of the problem in a long time and I may have to tolerant for such a long period, the strength of the benefits are overwhelming greater than the corresponding weakness. As far as I am concerned, letting a friend make a mistake is the better way that effectively protect the friendship.

wazzaUID: 2473807

Friendship is an essential part of our daily life without which most of human beings cannot live without it. Friendship makes life easier, more convenient and delightful, which people pursuit to. As a consequence, how to keep friendship( firm) certainly becomes a prevalent problem that people may face everyday because it is inevitable to have some scrub when together.( 一句话包含太多意思，建议拆开） When meeting a dilemma, some people tend to let friends make a mistake rather than saying or doing something that may destroy the friendship while some prone to the opposite choice. Personally, the former is the better action for me

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The principal reason for my perspective is that letting a friend make a mistake makes him/her aware of the existed problem and have lower risk to destroy the friendship. When being conscious of a problem, I prefer to choose calm. Because if I rashly indicate that the other side has made a mistake, it may hurt his/her self-esteem and have a negative effect on our friendship. Nevertheless, if I keep calm and carefully conduct my friend（ 这不是已经 do something了吗） to realize the problem, even let him/her make such a mistake, then the counterpart will suddenly be aware of the existed problem and correct it immediately. In that way, my friend may apprehend my sincerity and appreciate my action for him/her which can effectively enhance our friendship.

Another primary reason that deserves to be mentioned here is that making a mistake themselves helps to strengthen the memory and avoid recurring the same mistake again. There is a prevalent phenomenon that people often involve in the same plight for several times under the condition that they are reminded by others and abort the tendency immediately. Obviously, people cannot impress the warnings by friends and the things that haven’t really happened for a long time, but completely forget sooner or later. In the contrast, if people themselves really make the mistake and experience the passive result, they may impress it profoundly and never forget it which helps them to preclude making the same mistake again. Under this circumstance, letting friends make a mistake is another form to help friends correct their errors

The merits of the action that I supported are of course more than above two. Although it may leads some negative impacts, such as my friend may be conscious of the problem in a long time and I may have to tolerant for such a long period, the strength of the benefits are overwhelming greater than the corresponding weakness. As far as I am concerned, letting a friend make a mistake is the better way that effectively protect the friendship.

1，长句用得过多，有些导致句子结构错误
2，第一个观点有点不妥当

gundammoleUID: 2300958

1# 风辰的眼泪
Friendship is an essential part of our daily life that most of human beings cannot live without it. Friendship makes life easier, more convenient and delightful, which people pursuit to. As a consequence, how to keep friendship certainly becomes a prevalent problem that people may face everyday because it is inevitable to have some scrub when together. When meeting a dilemma, some people tend to let friends make a mistake(前面是friends,这里用mistakes好点吧) rather than saying or doing something that may destroy the friendship while some prone to the opposite choice. Personally, the former is the better action for me.
前面对friends的描述太长了,与主题无关的东西尽量少些,一句话引出When meeting a dilemma就够了.

The principal reason for my perspective is that letting a friend make a mistake makes him/her aware of the existed problem and have lower risk to destroy the friendship. When being conscious of a problem, I prefer to choose calm. Because if I rashly indicate that the other side has made a mistake, it may hurt his/her self-esteem and have a negative effect on our friendship. Nevertheless, if I keep calm and carefully conduct my friend to realize the problem, even let him/her make such a mistake, then the counterpart will suddenly be aware of the existed problem and correct it immediately. In that way, my friend may apprehend my sincerity and appreciate my action for him/her which can effectively enhance our friendship.0 r/ H7 `7 o1 [' j3 F1 V8 U

Another primary reason that deserves to be mentioned here is that making a mistake themselves helps to strengthen the memory and avoid recurring the same mistake again. There is a prevalent phenomenon that people often involve in the same plight for several times under the condition that they are reminded by others and abort the tendency immediately. Obviously, people cannot impress the warnings by friends and the things that haven’t really happened for a long time, but completely forget sooner or later. In the contrast, if people themselves really make the mistake and experience the passive result, they may impress it profoundly and never forget it which helps them to preclude making the same mistake again. Under this circumstance, letting friends make a mistake is another form to help friends correct(correcting) their errors.

The merits of the action that I supported are of course more than above two. Although it may leads some negative impacts, such as my friend may be conscious of the problem in a long time and I may have to tolerant for such a long period, the strength of the benefits are overwhelming greater than the corresponding weakness. As far as I am concerned, letting a friend make a mistake is the better way that effectively protect the friendship.

LZ写的不错,错误很少,逻辑也很清楚.
想请教一个问题是,example用具体的事例好呢,还是像你这样展开论证好?