0910G[North America Flying] Issue11by 421899282

421899282UID: 2595732

The speaker asserts the necessities to establish a global university to solve the world's most persistent social problems.I agree that a global university could accelerate the pace of the global problem solving.Nevertheless,we also face some risks to function such a global university well enough to achieve its original purpose.

The global social problems relate to every nation's interest and only with every nation's effort ca they be solved. Taking the depletion of atmospheric ozone for example,it is mostly caused by the ozone-layer-unfriendly gas emitted from all over the world and it threatens every survival human being,animals and plants every corner on earth.Even there is just one country still use CFCs as freezer it is not safe for our ozone layer.Hence,we should share our technology to find the substitute as soon as possible. Also we are learning the financial crisis the world is suffering.The fact US dollar serves as the world-wide reserved currency leads the close connection between economic situation and policies carried out by the US government.While the recovery of the US economy depends on other countries's measures aiming home and abroad such as China.In this case every nation is supposed to negotiate a way out of trouble together rather than only value their own interest.Evidently all these communication and cooperation can be facilitated by a global university which educate and specialize people global perspective to solve the issues we are facing.

Nevertheless,the establishment of a global university confronts some problems in order to accomplish its objectives.Firstly,the resource of the fund may affect the administration of the university.The undeveloped countries which is not capable to contribute a lot in financial respect are possible to lose the assurance for their interest.The injustice would impair the cooperation and could cause the decline of the university in long term.Secondly,the variety of language and cultural background inevitably impede the communication of the students.It would take them a long time adapt to the classmates they live with and the teachers they learn from.This problem also exists in the faculty and the management  of university.

To sum up,based on the severity and emergency of the global social problems,the world-wide cooperation is undeniable and a global university makes good sense.However,the obstacle during the establishment of a global university need time to overcome which is related to the thorough understanding of global interest etc.In this case we should first take measures to enforce the cooperation among nations before a global university is available.such as easier passport for professors,more conformation sharing,high frequency for pesidents' negotiation,etc.

komagreUID: 2648261

首先由于我的时间问题，一直没来的及跟你改。

komagreUID: 2648261

首先，不好意思，由于时间的关系，一直没来的及跟你改，道个歉先。:p The speaker asserts the necessities（这个单词本身是必需品的意思，是不是应该就用necessity?) to establish a global university to solve the world's most persistent social problems.I agree that a global university could accelerate the pace of the global problem solving.Nevertheless,we also face some risks to function such a global university well enough to achieve its original purpose. The global social problems relate to every nation's interest and only with every nation's effort can they be solved. Taking(take?) the depletion of atmospheric ozone for example,it is mostly caused by the ozone-layer-unfriendly gas emitted from all over the world and it threatens every survival human being,animals and plants every corner on earth.Even there is just one country still use CFCs as freezer it is not safe for our ozone layer.Hence,we should share our technology to find the substitute as soon as possible. Also we are learning the financial crisis the world is suffering.The fact US dollar serves as the world-wide reserved currency leads the close connection between economic situation and policies carried out by the US government.(这句话再仔细斟酌）While the recovery of the US economy depends on other countries's measures aiming home and abroad such as China.In this case every nation is supposed to negotiate a way out of trouble together rather than only value their own interest.Evidently all these communication and cooperation can be facilitated by a global university which educate and specialize people global perspective to solve the issues we are facing. Nevertheless,the establishment of a global university confronts some problems in order to accomplish its objectives.Firstly,the resource of the fund may affect the administration of the university.The undeveloped countries which is not capable to contribute a lot in financial respect are possible to lose the assurance for their interest.The injustice would impair the cooperation and could cause the decline of the university in long term.Secondly,the variety of language and cultural background inevitably impede the communication of the students.It would take them a long time adapt to the classmates they live with and the teachers they learn from.This problem also exists in the faculty and the management  of university. 这一段的论证应加强。 To sum up,based on the severity and emergency（是不是改成emergency and severity比较好？） of the global social problems,the world-wide cooperation is undeniable and a global university makes good sense.However,the obstacle during the establishment of a global university need time to overcome which is related to the thorough understanding of global interest etc.In this case we should first take measures to enforce the cooperation among nations before a global university is available.such as easier passport for professors,more conformation sharing,high frequency for pesidents' negotiation,etc. 结尾很好 值得肯定的是，观点很明确。但是有些许语法错误。相信你很快就会有所改进。:)

cixitomUID: 2610506

好厉害额~~~拜读了~~~

cixitomUID: 2610506

首先声明 我写的肯定不如你好啊~~
感觉和KOMAGRE说的一样 nevertheless那一段应该论述再多一点点
呵呵 学到蛮多的

rogermzUID: 2612807

freezer 冷库。 cryogen, 制冷剂。

measures aiming home and abroad ？  对内对外措施？

请教下。 谢谢。

421899282UID: 2595732

呵呵，谢谢，大家互相学习的嘛，好的，我再加强一下，谢谢你的意见 5# cixitom

421899282UID: 2595732

没事没事，本来就快期末考试了嘛，谢谢你的意见，我会尽快改正的 3# komagre

421899282UID: 2595732

freezer那个我没有仔细想，应该是你说的那个，谢谢了。后面的那个我想表达的是那个意思，但是具体对不对，我也不是很确定，但是应该语法上没有太大错误，呵呵。 6# rogermz