0910G【Try Best】第二小组 issue157 by CharlesHu

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There are 1000 different Hamlets in 1000 people's mind! The difference existing among people’s opinions on the same issue is a combined result of the positions, experiences and knowledge people hold. So everyone’s observation or perspective is both objective and subjective.
Everyone's opinion is based on his/her position and experience. Undoubtedly, there are some subjective ones in his/her opinion. For example, in discussing a new act or statute, everyone hopes that there are terms meet his/her interest. What more, everyone's experience, which may be untrue, play a crucial role in the forming of people's opinions too. In the mind of a frog in the bottom of a well, the sky is just as large as the well. So, we were told to avoid empiricism in analyzing problems.
On the other hand, the opinion is also affected by the knowledge the observers have learned and established, something is objective and true. While Chinese government was pondering on whether or not building the Sanxia Dam, the biggest one in the world, there were huge amount of suggestions provided by experts of different fields, and there are striking contradictions among this suggestions, some environmentalists opposed building the dam for its fatal destroy to the environment, in contrast, some economists supported the plan from the huge benefits to the nation the dam produced. When we review the debate now, we also couldn’t deny the objectiveness and trueness of some reasons the opponents used. We can find all this opinion is partially true in certain fields.
In short, since everyone's opinion is determined by his position, experience and knowledge, inevitably, there are both objective part and subjective part in every observation. In order to obtain a subjective observation on specific issue, combining perspectives of a board consisted of experts with different backgrounds is a good way.

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There are 1000 different Hamlets in 1000 people's mind! The difference existing among people’s opinions on the same issue is a combined result of the positions, experiences and knowledge people hold. So everyone’s observation or perspective is both objective and subjective.

Everyone's opinion is based on his/her position and experience. Undoubtedly, there are some subjective ones in his/her opinion. For example, in discussing a new act or statute, everyone hopes that there are terms meet his/her interest. What more, everyone's experience, which may be untrue, play a crucial role in the forming of people's opinions too. In the mind of a frog in the bottom of a well, the sky is just as large as the well. So, we were told to avoid empiricism in analyzing problems.
On the other hand, the opinion is also affected by the knowledge the observers have learned and established, something is objective and true. While Chinese government was pondering on whether or not building the Sanxia Dam, the biggest one in the world, there were huge amount of suggestions provided by experts of different fields, and there are striking contradictions among this suggestions, some environmentalists opposed building the dam for its fatal destroy to the environment, in contrast, some economists supported the plan from the huge benefits to the nation the dam produced. When we review the debate now, we also couldn’t deny the objectiveness and trueness of some reasons the opponents used. We can find all this opinion is partially true in certain fields.
In short, since everyone's opinion is determined by his position, experience and knowledge, inevitably, there are both objective part and subjective part in every observation. In order to obtain a subjective observation on specific issue, combining perspectives of a board consisted of experts with different backgrounds is a good way

你这几篇文章我是今早一起看起开始改的。看到现在我认为你写作挺创新，不论开头还是issue角度。你这篇写得不错，角度新颖例子也到位不过还是字数少了，字数少了的时候往往不是写不出来，是审题可能不够全面，你可以再挖掘题目有什么可以展开的没有。
我认为这个题目有个题眼就是“all"  题目说all observation都是subjective的,那就可以首先在否定all上开一段，这样的一段在逻辑上也是很重要的一环而不是为了凑字数。这一段下来也有100多字了吧，而且在陈述不是所有obervation都是subjective的同时，也引出了你第二段肯定subjective observation的内容。