issue157 【dancing in the dark】第7次作业 by熹僖

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Issue 157 "There is no such thing as purely objective observation. All observation is subjective; it is always guided by the observer's expectations or desires."(提纲+正文)

OUTLINE

A 提出观点，没有绝对的客观，也无纯粹的主观。我们观察事物同时受这两方面的影响。
B 论述没什么没有绝对的客观。举例：科技、历史。
C 论述也无绝对的主观。
D 举例
马丁.路德.金
及
反种族歧视。
E 进一步说明人的期望和欲望影响着我们的决定,但不是主导作用。我们在客观的世界的基础之上，会受到我们主观思想方面及行为准则的主导。
F Sum up.

ARTICLE

We human beings live in a world with objective substances all around, but it is strange that we cannot do things purely objectively. Why? Because we use our own minds to observe. Our minds receive signs of the world and then reply it combining with our one thinking. So neither purely objective observation nor complete subjection is extent. We meet the world with our own thinking influenced by the objective world.

That there is no purely objective observation is completely right. Everyone wants to observe our living world in an objective way as much as possible to recognize the truth. But can we really get the absolute truth indeed? We try our best to explore the truth of science, with endlessly overthrowing the theories founded by ourselves before and building new ones. We grasp every opportunity to reveal the history's truth, only to find that every historian is just a story teller. They can only tell the history under their own recognition. That is why there is only one history but there are varies of explanations about the history. That is to say, we can only go closely to the truth infinitely but can never get the real truth because everyone thinks with an independent distinctive subjective mind.

Although we observe everything by thinking with our subjective minds, is it to say that all observation is just subjective? The answer is negative. The world we live in is objective, so our observation is consequentially based on these objections. How can we stand alone from the world and think only by our own mind? We cannot because every detail of our thoughts comes from the objective world, even our brain itself is made up of objective matters.

The campaign fighting against racial discrimination, leaded by Martin Luther King, is regarded as to be just and great by all of us. But does King just set up all of his theories only by his thinking? Of course not. It concerns lots of his objective experiences when he was young. Only by being based on these experiences, can he come up with great thoughts and finally become a great man. So that the majority of white people opposed the blacks’ fighting is not just because their thoughts are unjust; it is first because the objective environment they live in is filled with the point of that blacks are lower people. This perception companied with their growth all along. What is more, even though they recognize they should not look down the blacks, significant whites still refuse to accept the equality because the change will hurt their own profit. This objective condition forces them to disobey their own heart sometimes. This convincing reason has clearly showed that we observe the world based on objective things.

Further, most of time our observation is guided by our minds, but it not means our expectations and desires completely lead us. We people are most possibly to do things according to our original expectations and desires, but most of us can force us by the right or wrong in our minds from the objective world. Even though this criterion has lots of things to do with our subjective minds, it corresponds with profit of most people, and we try hard to perfect it continually to be closed to objection. Just like the example of the racial discrimination, we cannot ignore the portion of whites who changed their minds to support King or even fighted for equality for the blacks and the whole US primitively. Compared with other whites who were conservative, they stood out with their subjective thinking in the same objective world. Their minds defeated the exceptions and desires. That is, we often do things guided by our minds and criteria of right and wrong but not only always the expectations and desires.

To sum up, we live in an objective world and possess subjective minds at the same time. So we do things neither purely objectively nor completely subjectively. As a result, we combine them two together. Although we cannot reach the absolute truth, we move close to it continually step by step under the action criteria coming form our own mind and the world around us.

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We human beings live in a world with objective substances all around, but it is strange that we cannot do things purely objectively. Why? Because we use our own minds to observe.(改成Because we add our own minds to observations 是不好些？~) Our minds receive signs of the world (接收世界的信号？我觉得改成接收周围环境中的信号是不好写？receive the signs around us)and then reply it combining with our one(one 是不可以去掉？) thinking. So neither purely objective observation nor complete subjection is extent. We meet the world with our own thinking influenced by the objective world.

That there is no purely objective observation is completely right. Everyone wants to observe our living world in an objective way as much as possible to recognize the truth. But can we really get the absolute truth indeed? We try our best to explore the truth of science, with endlessly overthrowing the theories founded by ourselves before and building new ones. We grasp every opportunity to reveal the history's truth, only to find that every historian is just a story teller. They can only tell the history under their own recognition. That is why there is only one history but there are varies of explanations about the history. That is to say, we can only go closely to the truth infinitely but can never get the real truth because everyone thinks with an independent distinctive subjective mind. 写的很棒哦~~

Although we observe everything by thinking with our subjective minds, is it to say that all observation is just subjective? The answer is negative(我觉得no可能比negative 好些吧~~). The world we live in is objective, so our observation is consequentially based on these objections. How can we stand alone from the world and think only by our own mind? We cannot because every detail of our thoughts comes from the objective world, even our brain itself is made up of objective matters. (感觉最后两句想表达的意思不是很清楚)

The campaign fighting against racial discrimination, leaded by Martin Luther King, is regarded as (觉得regard as 后面直接跟个名词短语就可以了，好像比动词不定式好些~)to be just and great by all of us. But does King just set up all of his theories only by his thinking? Of course not. It concerns lots of his objective experiences when he was young. Only by being (by being 是不可以去掉？~) based on these experiences, can he come up with great thoughts and finally become a great man. So that the majority of white people opposed the blacks’ fighting is not just because their thoughts are unjust; it is first because the objective environment they live in is filled with the point of that blacks are lower people. This perception companied with their growth all along. What is more, even though they recognize they should not look down the blacks, significant whites still refuse to accept the equality because the change will hurt their own profit. This objective condition forces them to disobey their own heart sometimes. This convincing reason has clearly showed that we observe the world based on objective things.

Further, most of time our observation is guided by our minds, but it（没有谓语） not means our expectations and desires completely lead us. We people are most possibly to do things according to our original expectations and desires, but most of us can force us by the right or wrong (distinguish right from wrong 是不好些？) in our minds from the objective world. Even though this criterion has lots of things to do with our subjective minds, it corresponds with profit of most people, and we try hard to perfect it continually to be closed to objection. Just like the example of the racial discrimination, we cannot ignore the portion of whites who changed their minds to support King or (and ?) even fighted for equality for the blacks and the whole US primitively. Compared with other whites who were conservative, they stood out with their subjective thinking in the same objective world. Their minds defeated the exceptions and desires. That is, we often do things guided by our minds and criteria of right and wrong but not only always the expectations and desires.

To sum up, we live in an objective world and possess subjective minds at the same time. So we do things neither purely objectively nor completely subjectively. As a result, we combine them two (two 可以省略)together. Although we cannot reach the absolute truth, we move close to it continually step by step under the action criteria coming form our own mind and the world around us.


感觉中间那段写的很好，论证很清楚~呵呵~向你学习~发现了一些小问题，你可以参考一下~加油哦！！

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1# 熹僖 挺厉害的你，有感情的，加油啊。
            你帮我评的也老好，让我思考到了很多缺陷。