0910AW 同主题写作第8期 issue221 by cnwzly

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偏向性观点
大体上赞同作者的观点，但研究历史的主要功效并不局限于破除幻想。
1. 研究历史的确能够破除幻想，人类的发展与过去并非决裂，因为历史的研究，揭示出人类发展的关联。历史中任何事物不会独立存在。
2. 历史的研究在破除幻觉的基础上更能揭示并延续人类内在的精神
3. 诚然，历史的主要作用还体现在其他方面
4. 总结

I agree with the speaker's broad assertion that the significance of study of history in some respects can be concluded that it break down the illusion which consists of separate temporal montage of history. However, the function of history study is intricate that it cannot be generalized in a few words and cannot be limit merely within such an area.

To begin with, I acknowledge that the study of history is essential point of summarizing the incidents and revealing the inherent conformity from these events, while the real historic occurrences are usually separate and asynchronous. There is no denying that the overall trend stays the same during the human history, while history cannot repeat thoroughly today.
More or less, everything involved in our society is influenced by their predecessors, and, disclosed that it obeys the trend and discipline in some ways. Thus study of history focuses attention on the complex processes of social change, including the factors that are causing change around us today. Study of history provided a screening device for many fields of society to understand why such changes occur. Accordingly, it is not exaggerate to take it for granted that every new form of event related with human beings inherits from foregoing counterpart’s merit, and then creates the difference. So it is easy to draw a conclusion that to understand the past and through it, come to a far better understanding of the present, and so the futures

Moreover, history always contains and continues much more the inner spirit of human than just external forms which sometimes change frequently, and study of history just reveals it and makes the illusion away. That is mean the same aesthetic and humanistic goals are shared by people in the past and in present day. With the history study, the pursuit of history comes to a form of time travel; how and why people behaved as they did is learned; and motivation in complex and inconsistent ways for people in the past is represented. By studying the stories of individuals and situations in the past allows a student to test his or her own moral sense, to hone it against some of the real complexities individuals have faced in difficult setting. By holding the phrase "History teaching by example" which describes the use of a study of the past-- a study not only of certifiable heroes, the great men and women of history who successfully worked through moral dilemmas, but also of more ordinary people who provide lessons, such as Edison's perspiration, Martin Luther King's dream of freedom and equality and brothers Wright's originality. In a word, through the deep study of history can you get the inherent similarities and consistency of human's spirit.

Admittedly, breaking down the illusion indeed is of consequence. After all, there are other primary functions study of history takes. Thorough studying history, we may know more about ancestors and more about ourselves. Furthermore, history as art and entertainment serves a real purpose of identifying a citizen to lead to loyalty to his nation, or helping people understanding how recent and prospective changes that affect the lives.

To sum up, history that lays the foundation to possible uses of the study of the past for its coherence. Study of history supplies a richly-textured, substantive framework for understanding the human condition and grappling with and inheriting spirit from their forerunners.

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I agree with the speaker's broad assertion that the significance of study of history in some respects can be concluded that it break( breaks) down the illusion which consists of separate temporal montage of history. However, the function of history study is intricate that it cannot be generalized in a few words and cannot be limit merely within such an area.

To begin with, I acknowledge that the study of history is an essential point of summarizing the incidents and revealing the inherent conformity from these events, while the real historic occurrences are usually separate and asynchronous. There is no denying that the overall trend stays the same during the human history, while history cannot repeat thoroughly today.
More or less, everything involved in our society is influenced by their predecessors, and, disclosed that it obeys the trend and discipline in some ways. Thus study of history focuses attention on the complex processes of social change, including the factors that are causing change(changes) around us today. Study of history provided a screening device for many fields of society to understand why such changes occur. Accordingly, it is not exaggerate to take it for granted that every new form of event related with human beings inherits from foregoing counterpart’s merit, and then creates the difference. So it is easy to draw a conclusion that to understand the past and through it, come to a far better understanding of the present, and so the futures( future)

Moreover, history always contains and continues much more the inner spirit of human than just external forms which sometimes change frequently, and study of history just reveals it and makes the illusion away. That is mean( means) the same aesthetic and humanistic goals which are shared by people in the past and in present day. With the history study, the pursuit of history comes to a form of time travel; how and why people behaved as they did is learned; and motivation in complex and inconsistent ways for people in the past is represented. By studying the stories of individuals and situations in the past allows a student to test his or her own moral sense, to hone it against some of the real complexities individuals have faced in a difficult setting. By holding the phrase "History teaching by example" which describes the use of a study of the past-- a study not only of certifiable heroes, the great men and women of history who successfully worked through moral dilemmas, but also of more ordinary people who provide lessons, such as Edison's perspiration, Martin Luther King's dream of freedom and equality and brothers Wright's originality. In a word, through the deep study of history can you get the inherent similarities and consistency of human's spirit.

Admittedly, breaking down the illusion indeed is of consequence. After all, there are other primary functions study of history takes. Thorough(Through) studying history, we may know more about ancestors and more about ourselves. Furthermore, history as art and entertainment serves a real purpose of identifying a citizen to lead to loyalty to his nation, or helping people understanding(understand) how recent and prospective changes that affect the lives.

To sum up, history that lays the foundation to possible uses of the study of the past for its coherence. Study of history supplies a richly-textured, substantive framework for understanding the human condition and grappling with and inheriting spirit from their forerunners.
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I agree with the speaker's broad assertion that the significance of study of history in some respects can be concluded that it breaks down the illusion which consists of separate temporal montage of history. However, the function of history study is intricate that it cannot be generalized in a few words and cannot be limit merely within such an area.

To begin with, I acknowledge that the study of history is an essential point of summarizing the incidents and revealing the inherent conformity from these events, while the real historic occurrences are usually separate and asynchronous. There is no denying that the overall trend stays the same during the human history, while history cannot repeat thoroughly today.
More or less, everything involved in our society is influenced by their predecessors, and, disclosed that it obeys the trend and discipline in some ways. Thus study of history focuses attention on the complex processes of social change, including the factors that are causing change(changes) around us today. Study of history provided a screening device for many fields of society to understand why such changes occur. Accordingly, it is not exaggerate to take it for granted that every new form of event related with human beings inherits from foregoing counterpart’s merit, and then creates the difference. So it is easy to draw a conclusion that to understand the past and through it, come to a far better understanding of the present, and so the futures( future)

Moreover, history always contains and continues much more the inner spirit of human than just external forms which sometimes change frequently, and study of history just reveals it and makes the illusion away. That is means the same aesthetic and humanistic goals which are shared by people in the past and in present day. With the history study, the pursuit of history comes to a form of time travel; how and why people behaved as they did is learned; and motivation in complex and inconsistent ways for people in the past is represented. By studying the stories of individuals and situations in the past allows a student to test his or her own moral sense, to hone it against some of the real complexities individuals have faced in a difficult setting. By holding the phrase "History teaching by example" which describes the use of a study of the past-- a study not only of certifiable heroes, the great men and women of history who successfully worked through moral dilemmas, but also of more ordinary people who provide lessons, such as Edison's perspiration, Martin Luther King's dream of freedom and equality and brothers Wright's originality. In a word, through the deep study of history can you get the inherent similarities and consistency of human's spirit.

Admittedly, breaking down the illusion indeed is of consequence. After all, there are other primary functions study of history takes. Through studying history, we may know more about ancestors and more about ourselves. Furthermore, history as art and entertainment serves a real purpose of identifying a citizen to lead to loyalty to his nation, or helping people understand how recent and prospective changes that affect the lives.

To sum up, history that lays the foundation to possible uses of the study of the past for its coherence. Study of history supplies a richly-textured, substantive framework for understanding the human condition and grappling with and inheriting spirit from their forerunners.