TOEFL集结号 第六次作文作业 by Amber

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第六次作业
Do you agree with the following statement: nowadays people spend too much time on personal enjoyment –things they like to do—rather than the things they should do 周三 22：00之前交

There are times when most of us have the desire and interest to do something our enjoyment rather than things we should do. Why enjoyable activities never fail to fascinate some people after all? Whether it is benefit to us when we spend too much time on personal enjoyment rather the things we should do? I definitely believe that we never make mistakes to do some interesting and enjoyable things.should better do the things which be done necessarily.

To begin with, doing some joyful things properly, we could better relax and relieve the pressure from work and study, result in we could do things which be done necessarily better and more efficiently. We can take a glance at a common example, virtually, everyday i experience various kinds of work loads and tasks in daily life, so i feel too tired to do any other things about my work when back home. I still remain to complete one company project in time, even though i am after work already. In order to relieve the work stress, i usually do some Yoga in home, for it is my favorite sport and a good manner for me relax myself. After one hour sport, I could easily back to work and complete it better and much more effectively. In short, we do some enjoyable things appropriately which contribute to things we should do.

Moreover, it is not accurately to say that people spend too much time on personal enjoyment things rather than the things they should do, for as long as people never delay or give bad influence on the things they should do, they do interested things is quite reasonable. Work and money is not everything in our lives. Only enough delight bring us can we enjoy lives better and better. Pleasure is also an essential ingredient to our lives. Just as an old saying goes, all work and no play makes jack a dull boy. In conclusion, i think most people enjoy themselves is suitable and seldom would they put off the things they should do.

In conclusion, a multitude of people live under the illusion that we are spend too much time on our pleasure and ignore the things we should do. Virtually, it is only part of the picture, because most of people do some pleasure in order to do things that they should do better and better. Only both happiness and success equals the whole life.

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Do you agree with the following statement: nowadays people spend too much time on personal enjoyment –things they like to do—rather than the things they should do 周三 22：00之前交0 H5 H+ v" f/ L4 O$ B

There are times（time时间不可数，次数可数，次数来讲感觉后面的when就不太合适） when most of us have the desire and interest to do something our enjoyment rather than things we should do. Why enjoyable activities never fail to fascinate some people after all?（貌似这个问题后边也没解释） Whether it is benefit to us when we spend too much time on personal enjoyment rather the things we should do? I definitely believe that we never make mistakes to do some interesting and enjoyable things.should better do the things which be done necessarily 句子开头第一个字母大写，没有主语，而且which后的谓语应与things一致，个人感觉done多余

To begin with，doing some joyful things properly, we could better relax(和pressure不搭配,和oneself搭配) and relieve the pressure from work and study, result in we could do things which be done necessarily（同上） better and more efficiently. We can take a glance at a common example, virtually, everyday i experience various kinds of work loads and tasks in daily life（前边有everyday了）, so i feel too tired to do any other things about my work when back home. I still remain to complete one company project in time, even though i am after work already. In order to relieve the work stress保留意见不知道能不能这么搭配, i usually do some Yoga in home, for it is my favorite sport and a good manner for me relax myself. After one hour sport, I could easily back to work and complete it better and much more effectively. In short, we do some enjoyable things appropriately which contribute to things we should do段首段末都总结的做法很好啊，跟人很严谨的感觉，要学习！
此段意在说明娱乐生活是必须的

Moreover, it is not accurately to say that people spend too much time on personal enjoyment things rather than the things they should do, for as long as people never delay or give bad influence on the things they should do, they do interested things is quite reasonable.这个观点太棒了，学习！ Work and money is not everything in our lives. Only enough delight bring us can we enjoy lives better and better. Pleasure is also an essential ingredient to our lives. Just as an old saying goes, all work and no play makes jack a dull boy. In conclusion, i think most people enjoy themselves is suitable（suitably） and seldom would they put off the things they should do

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In conclusion, a multitude of people live under the illusion that we are spend too much time on our pleasure and ignore the things we should do. Virtually, it is only part of the picture, because most of people do some pleasure in order to do things that they should do better and better. Only both happiness and success equals the whole life.忽然又整出个成功，虽然明白什么意思，但是容易给人的感觉偏题

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2、做些有意思的事，减压，让工作更有效率。
3、只要不耽误工作，就不存在题目所说的狗屁理论
4、总结
同学的文章标新立异，文字的驾驭能力很强，观点也明确，娱乐和工作的关系也很紧密，非常值得学习；
文中提到的一些语法问题只是个人见解，如有不到还请见谅，也欢迎讨论，加油！