已经参加过提交文章和互改这2项内容的同学都算是本队成员，可以投票！ Originally posted by kolu_ren at 2005-7-27 14:56
这是我今天的作业：
A 29 https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=307025
请大家帮我批批，尤其是思路和结构！！！
有没有可以帮忙把我的看一下，谢谢！ Originally posted by kolu_ren at 2005-7-28 09:30
有没有可以帮忙把我的看一下，谢谢！
我来改！ 先向各位战友道个歉，昨天我可怜的电脑不知为什么又出了问题，整个防毒软件自己瘫了，所以没有上来。今天来，首先补上昨天的作业。然后改两篇作文。
issue7
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=307480&page=1#pid1662109
argument 18
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=307490
赫赫，刚刚发上来，肯定还没有人改。请兄弟姐妹们毫不留情的拍吧。我一定积极回帖。:p
[ Last edited by Gladysry on 2005-7-28 at 10:40 ] 我在123楼和153楼的通知有多少人没看到啊？ Originally posted by dr_green at 2005-7-26 23:48
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恩，这篇我来改。（汗~刚刚居然发错了位置）
谢谢你啊，dr_green,改得好仔细（我吓死了，其实我贴上来之前还用word检了的，怎么会有那么多拼写错误？唉~真是麻烦你了。）。我呆会儿把自己的想法再贴一下。还有，如果战友们感兴趣，能否帮我看一下，因为我觉得改之后好像逻辑还不如以前那么清晰，但是具体一些。恩，连接如下：
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=304416&extra=page%3D1
谢谢！ hustzwj的改好了
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=301505&pid=1662266
这是我今天的作业
Issue 108 TV and politics: https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=307527&extra=page%3D1Issue 157 observation subjective? or objective https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=307525&extra=page%3D1
157写得不太好,108限时成功,感觉思路还比较流畅,下面来看看你们的了!;P
关于zehua问我的有关1930 Prohibition, 贴出来大家分享一下吧,很有用的反例哟
National prohibition of alcohol (1920-33)--the "noble experiment"--was undertaken to reduce crime and corruption, solve social problems, reduce the tax burden created by prisons and poorhouses, and improve health and hygiene in America. The results of that experiment clearly indicate that it was a miserable failure on all counts. The evidence affirms sound economic theory, which predicts that prohibition of mutually beneficial exchanges is doomed to failureThe lessons of Prohibition remain important today. They apply not only to the debate over the war on drugs but also to the mounting efforts to drastically reduce access to alcohol and tobacco and to such issues as censorship and bans on insider trading, abortion, and gambling
Although consumption of alcohol fell at the beginning of Prohibition, it subsequently increased. Alcohol became more dangerous to consume; crime increased and became "organized"; the court and prison systems were stretched to the breaking point; and corruption of public officials was rampant. No measurable gains were made in productivity or reduced absenteeism. Prohibition removed a significant source of tax revenue and greatly increased government spending. It led many drinkers to switch to opium, marijuana, patent medicines, cocaine, and other dangerous substances that they would have been unlikely to encounter in the absence of Prohibition. Those results are documented from a variety of sources, most of which, ironically, are the work of supporters of Prohibition--most economists and social scientists supported it. Their findings make the case against Prohibition that much stronger kolu_ren的改好了~
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=307025&pid=1662434&page=1#pid1662434 :victory::victory::victory::victory:Originally posted by zehua at 2005-7-27 13:39
全体注意了，现在发现一个问题：每次别人修改完你的文章后提出的相关疑问，请看到后马上用短信给予回复！最好同时在原文的帖子里也回复一下。有问有答才叫交流！有的时候是作者写的有问题，有的时候是改的人理解错 ...
强烈支持！
希望大家都重视这个问题！
密切注视自己的帖子，和修改人保持联系。可以用短消息，也可直接在v6日用帖里回！
[ Last edited by hustzwj on 2005-7-28 at 12:08 ] Originally posted by Gladysry at 2005-7-28 10:20
先向各位战友道个歉，昨天我可怜的电脑不知为什么又出了问题，整个防毒软件自己瘫了，所以没有上来。今天来，首先补上昨天的作业。然后改两篇作文。
issue7
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=3 ...
改了issue7：） :victory::victory::victory:
Originally posted by zehua at 2005-7-28 09:07
全体注意：本站队现在人员已经很多，如果再增加的话管理就变的困难了。请大家发短信告诉我你的想法，即是否还增加新队员。
已经参加过提交文章和互改这2项内容的同学都算是本队成员，可以投票！
希望大家都能发挥自己作为v6 member的作用，予以回复，决定是否。。。。
偶先表个态：
同意暂不接受新的member。这样有助于形成良好的互改气氛，提高效率！ 改了zehua的197了，觉得可以再深化一下