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ArantUID：2814596

Newspapersand magazines are greatest inventions – they can help us know whatis happening all over the world. But, Newspapers and magazines cannot be the best way to learn a foreign country.
Firstly,there may be a lot of obstacles access to newspapers and magazines onforeign countries. Languages will limit you reading a foreignnewspapers and magazines. You may have to face a foreign languagelike Japanese, French and Spainish. It is also uncomfortable to reada foreign language for a long time. And foreign newspapers are fewand expensive. Because they are generally for their overseascitizens.
Secondly,ignoring the limitation above, we can not find what we want from thenewspapers and magazines. You can find plenty of magazines andnewspapers about a certain country, but it is so hard to pick outwhat you are interested in. Assume that you are interested ingeography of a country and want to buy a magazine, such as NationalGeographic, can you easily find what you want on it? Probably not,because there are so many countries, and you can hardly find what youwant. Without a search engine, it is almost impossible to doeffective search.
Thirdly,it is hard to have a totally objective description. Perhaps nobodywould like to be inflicted on other's impression. But, it is almostunavoidable while you learn about a foreign country by newspapers andmagazines. The problem arises in part from
thearticles on them are picked by the editor, and there are no guaranteethe editor will be objective. Moreover, the articles are written bysomeone. They are expressing their feelings. The proverb says "Thereare a thousand Hamlets in a thousand people's eyes". It is alsotrue about country. Therefore, it would be much better if you feel ityourself.

白菜学英语UID：2731720

修改啦~   也谢谢你的修改~

ArantUID：2814596

2# 白菜学英语
我看了一下...于是今天的特地想了很多词要怎么改...
= =不知道这个怎么样

ArantUID：2814596

09.02.27NA
Doyou agree or disagree with the following statement? A job with morevacation time but a low salary is better than a job with a highsalary but less vacation time.

Personally,I totally concede that a more vacation time but a low salary job isbetter. The following is some supportive reason.
Firstly,more vacation time benefits to one in mental and emotional health.Almost every one would like to have a long time for relax, duringwhich they can do whatever they like and spend some time with theirfamilies. Thus, they can release their pressure. That is to say,vacation can build your spiritual health which in my opinion outweighmoney. Seeing that keeping in good mood prevent diseases can saveplenty of money and time, we can easily conclude that being gratifiedworths much more than cash.
Furthermore,having a good mood in reverse assist us to work effectively andproductively. Working without rest will cause people feel down andhopeless, which may reduce them enthusiasm and eventually affect thework. A research recently also shows that the  speed of response willbe reduce significantly if one is in depression. At the same time,the comprehension and logical judgement are also affected. Theresearch confirms the importance of vacation from the other side.
Additionally,the salary one can earn depends greatly on his working performance.Namely, the salary will not always stay low if one is outstanding. Abetter work performance can obviously accelerate it. There is noexcuse for the boss to refuse to rise wages for a subordinate who isactually excellent. And this is also rooted in more vacation.
Inconclusion, it can be a virtuous circle if start with a more vacationjob – more vacation brings more enthusiasm and more enthusiasmresult in rising wages. Perhaps starting with higher salary can makeyou feel better, but starting with more vacation one can help you toachieve success quicker and happier.

littlekuoUID：2860535

不好意思，这几天比较忙，31号的作业我今天才给你改完

ArantUID：2814596

5# littlekuo
托福作文要写400字那么多么?不是说只要250~300么?
我也觉得我例子不够...因为觉得举不出来....You的问题自己也发现了....

谢谢

ArantUID：2814596

可以传作文了!!终于!!!!

ArantUID：2814596

今天开始都是写限时的了....
第一次写还真的会来不及= =

没做任何修改...

后面两个观点展开不够,而且在写的时候思路中间还混乱了一下,没有打草稿的坏处啊!!

下次再努力!

zak_chemistryUID：2612236

zak_chemistry 的8。7 作文
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=1135586&extra=
一楼。
谢谢各位啦！！！

ellishuUID：2699646

该过了，希望你也帮我改下，谢谢。

ttuuttuuUID：2299729

0805修改
SORRY  上週網路出現問題  今天才可以上網 還望見諒
這是一篇寫的很好的文章  沒有拼字文法上的大錯誤
但建議在每個論點的支持例子可以多寫一點去支持他
開頭第一段有點短了點才兩句話。
建議結論可以再重申自己的主張的論點

ArantUID：2814596

先花了五分钟去构思disagree...然后写agree....无比之来不及
其中单词拼错了4个..无语啊!默默改掉了...

其余的完全没改....

ArantUID：2814596

这次超时了....没写完...

呜呜

dandan17UID：2812933