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10.12 独立
Some people think one’s working is more important than being with one’s family


Essentially we need to look at the question,which has troubles a lot of people from generation to generation.Since the competiton in career is fiercer nowadays,more and more people make wrong choice between the job and family.They are devoted to promoting their work position,thinking that more money means happier family life,however happy family life has been ignored already.So,my standpoint is obvious——Being with one's family is much more important than one's working.


We should recognise that our primary goal of work is to improve the quality of family life.People who emphasize the importance of work is always on the way and even past the destination.To be sure,having a considerate daddy is much more delighting for a child than owing a lot of pocket money.Having a thoughtful husband is much more elating for a wife than dazzling jewel.So,working hard is not the critical method to reach the goal,on the contrary,being with the family is.

Also,the people who work hard but not so care about their family will harm the connection with family members.Most of the divorce may the result of neglecting the family because of  paying too much attention to the work.The alienation is formed while the daddy is too busy to memorize the birthday of his daughter,while the husband roars at his wife owing to the stress of the work,while the couple are busy doing their work rather than visit their old parents.


Morever,many achiever owe their success to the concord family life.They concern more about their family,and in return,members in family support their work and share the happiness and sadness together with them,which increase the confidence in work.


In sum,being with family is a more pivotal way than work to achieve the goal of life.The former also helps the progress in work while the latter sometimes do harm to the most important person in our life.

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Agree or disagree: Teachers should be paid at least as much as doctors, lawyers or business leaders are paid.
Some people argue as if it is a common phenomenon that teachers are not paid as much as doctors, lawyers or business leaders are paid. But to be frank, I cannot agree with them. There are numerous reasons why I hold no confidence on them, and I would explore only a few primary ones here.

The main reason for my propensity is that teacher is the beacon of the students. when we are young, we are unknown to this world. We do not know what is true, what is wrong, what we should, what we should not do, ect. So teachers are here to guide us the road to this complex world. As I was a senior three student, I was confronted one of my significant event of my life, which was which school and which major I would like to choose. I was very upset for I totally have no idea about that and I had a little heterolalia at that time, which I had been absent from school for nearly a week. My class teacher suddenly visited my house and then brought me to my dreaming school ,FUDAN university, she shouted at me, where is your dream? Do not you want to your favorite major? Do not you want to let all you relatives be proud of you? A miracle happened, I was suddenly waken up. From then on, I went to school as usual. Finally, I achieve my dream and is a international law student now.

Another reason can be seen by every person is that teachers work much longer than doctors, lawyers or business leaders. They get up at 6 o’clock as the students do and after most students go home, they help few students review their lessons.They won’t leave until all the students thoroughly understand. Don’t assume that their work have done by now.After they arrive at home, they put out all their students homework and carefully correct them or mark grades. It is almost midnight when they stop their work. Before they go to bed, they definitely will go though what they will teach tomarrow. So, how could we give so little payment to our hardworking gardener?

Furthermore, teacher educate children who are the future of our society, they do a extensively crucial aspect of the growth of our children and the society.

In a word, as I claimed in the previous statements, teacher are the guider of the society.   Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that teachers should be paid at least as much as doctors, lawyers or business leaders are paid.

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