【SAT官方每日一题】12/8/12 Writing > Improving Sentences

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考试类型: Writing > Improving Sentences
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# b  ~9 m$ g, a1 mPart or all of the following sentence is underlined; beneath the sentence are five ways of phrasing the underlined material. Select the option that produces the best sentence. If you think the original phrasing produces a better sentence than any of the alternatives, select choice A.  

# ~2 w( k+ q, ^$ Z/ F4 @With the 1977 publication of Song of Solomon, Toni Morrison both received popular and critical acclaim.

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A. both received popular and
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C. received popular, along with
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' y% J! Q3 w* R- L& o0 sD. received popular as well as

9 ?4 u! ~5 P% l3 ?8 ~E. received both popular and also

正确答案:D
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解析:
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Choice (D) is correct. It avoids the error of the original by replacing the awkward and misused “both … and” construction with the much simpler “as well as.”
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