【SAT官方每日一题】12/8/12 Writing > Improving Sentences

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考试类型: Writing > Improving Sentences

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* E& v+ |# E( {! h: \3 Y( [Part or all of the following sentence is underlined; beneath the sentence are five ways of phrasing the underlined material. Select the option that produces the best sentence. If you think the original phrasing produces a better sentence than any of the alternatives, select choice A.  
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* e+ g, p4 J" M9 Z1 EWith the 1977 publication of Song of Solomon, Toni Morrison both received popular and critical acclaim.

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B. both received popular and also
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C. received popular, along with

D. received popular as well as

E. received both popular and also

正确答案:D

解析:

3 q4 A/ }4 b/ g9 K# xChoice (D) is correct. It avoids the error of the original by replacing the awkward and misused “both … and” construction with the much simpler “as well as.”
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