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发表于 2017-6-27 21:26:42 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?       In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.       Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

There are countless information emerging continuously with the fast social development. Only by keeping pace with the high speed can people seize all chances created by the economic prosperity. In that case, working slowly and guaranteeing the correction seems to be out of date. There is no denying that working fast means more possibility of making mistake, but we can’t lose the sight that it brings about the high working efficiency. Hence, I really agree with that it’s worth working quickly, in spite of risking making mistakes.
For the individuals, high efficiency is a significant part of their capability. As the competition is so fierce, finishing tasks faster can provide more chances for people to get noticed and promoted compared to the less efficient staff. For instance, the salesman who achieves the most sales volume among all the colleagues within the same time will obtain the best awards. In addition, owing to high efficiency, people can also save more time for their own interest to entertain themselves.
Furthermore, for the corporations, efficient staff can distribute considerable contribution, thus assisting the development of the whole company. Commercially, the first to occupy the market in a certain field may always grow as the most profitable one, which can be proved by Apple, the first electrical company to produce the smart phone. Therefore, currently many enterprises intend to set foot in the 5G (the fifth generation) communication applications, such as IBM, Sumsung and Huawei. In order to be the most authorized one in that field, they all have been sparing no effort to research the principles and develop innovative technology as soon as possible, which requires the scientists and engineers to work day and night to get the tasks completed in a limited time.
As a favorable result, when the company profit more, the employees are able to receive better salary and other benefits. That is, the individuals’ efficiency apparently prompts the prosperity of the corporation, in return, the increasing income also stimulate the spontaneity of the stuff, thus leading to a benign feedback.
From the mentioned information, it can be seen that efficiency can facilitate both individuals and companies. However, there are still risks to make mistake while working fast, but it‘s feasible to make up the weakness by utilizing the advanced technology to correct the possible errors. For example, some intelligent software can be installed to proofread the documents, by which any spelling and format errors never fail to be detected and then rectified.
To conclude, people ought to work efficiently to adapt to this stressful world for all above reasons, though it may increase the error rate.
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