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作者: gyygtt 时间: 2013-9-30 21:42:46 标题: [口语小组]gyygtt作业贴（10.27）

本帖最后由 gyygtt 于 2013-10-12 20:46 编辑

作业贴加油！
10.12 task 1-6: http://pan.baidu.com/s/1ceKc5
10.11 task1-6: http://pan.baidu.com/s/1yzqgo
10.7 task 1-6: http://pan.baidu.com/s/1FtXck
10.6 task 1-6: http://pan.baidu.com/s/1uvoqD
10.1 task 1-2: http://pan.baidu.com/s/1d0aiz

作者: Cashvs 时间: 2013-10-2 16:01:24

T1: 应该是when I “was” fifteen I really want to XXX contest 这边感觉语速突然加快听不清楚在讲什么中间讲错的地方要再练得顺一点哦内容结构上还算完整若把讲错的部分再修正一下大致上就没问题了

T2: 第二题没有例子作辅助是一个致命的错误而且中间部分还停顿了几秒最好也可以透过练习做适当的修正建议LZ这题要重新练习，想一个例子来论证你的说法吧
最后 T1和T2都是45秒哦 LZ都只讲了30多秒而已这也是个很大的扣分点

作者: gyygtt 时间: 2013-10-3 20:44:51

Cashvs 发表于 2013-10-2 16:01
T1: 应该是when I “was” fifteen I really want to XXX contest 这边感觉语速突然加快听不清楚在讲什么 ...

谢谢啦~你好仔细，我前两天没时间弄。。囧。

作者: Cashvs 时间: 2013-10-4 00:20:29

gyygtt 发表于 2013-10-3 20:44
谢谢啦~你好仔细，我前两天没时间弄。。囧。

哈哈没关系一起加油吧~

作者: lhm77499 时间: 2013-10-7 09:40:38

gyygtt 发表于 2013-10-3 20:44
谢谢啦~你好仔细，我前两天没时间弄。。囧。

hello，你的网盘里面没有10月6号的录音啊？！

作者: gyygtt 时间: 2013-10-7 10:28:29

lhm77499 发表于 2013-10-7 09:40
hello，你的网盘里面没有10月6号的录音啊？！

啊~。。怎么可能我再看看。

作者: gyygtt 时间: 2013-10-7 10:31:55

lhm77499 发表于 2013-10-7 09:40
hello，你的网盘里面没有10月6号的录音啊？！

这下有了。可能给的地址不对。

谢谢啦~！

作者: lhm77499 时间: 2013-10-7 11:20:44

gyygtt 发表于 2013-10-7 10:31
这下有了。可能给的地址不对。

谢谢啦~！

10.6
Your pronunciation is good!
t1 you talked abot Gas's experience, but how you summarize from his changing careers that you should not give up and complain, I suggest that you give some statemnet about this aspect.
t2 make a lot of people...well, you should say make friends...Your point has been very good, though.
t3 your first reason have not been fully elaboraed. the time of giving a speech should also included in your point.
t4cultural lag, the concept refers to time period needed for people to acccept a new technology.  This means, you should have emphasize the process of accepting it.  But you have allocated too little time for it.
t5the point is not why it benefits to you but to the man in the listening.
t6weathering,two ways of how it happens.  You have uttered it cautiously, but you have presented most of the details in the listening.

作者: gyygtt 时间: 2013-10-7 11:34:24

lhm77499 发表于 2013-10-7 11:20
10.6
Your pronunciation is good!
t1 you talked abot Gas's experience, but how you summarize from ...

牛~~
谢谢你给这么多中肯的意见~！~继续加油！

作者: jsc0218 时间: 2013-10-8 09:10:29

10.07
T1
开头的语调有点像在绕口令啊。

T3
and also说了好多遍

T4
概念和例子的关系没有阐明啊。根据robin的帖子，说要此题高分，需要解释这个关系。

T5
支持的第一个理由停留在理论上，一直都说convenient，我觉得可以像这样说，比如不用做公车去学校啦，可以任何时候都做research什么的。

T6
没有描述支持的例子，只讲了理论。

其他都没啥问题啊。不过感觉LZ语速有点偏快。最后祝考试顺利。

作者: mimimomo666 时间: 2013-10-10 01:35:33

楼主你的10/08还没有传还是我没找到？木有发现有帖子？

作者: gyygtt 时间: 2013-10-11 13:58:10

jsc0218 发表于 2013-10-8 09:10
10.07
T1
开头的语调有点像在绕口令啊。

oh
~好多毛病。囧。赶紧改过来~

作者: gyygtt 时间: 2013-10-11 14:00:06

jsc0218 发表于 2013-10-8 09:10
10.07
T1
开头的语调有点像在绕口令啊。

额。我是不是没有改你的口语作业。。。。。前段时间我很混乱~

作者: lhm77499 时间: 2013-10-11 23:50:46

10.11
good at pronunciation!GOOD!
t1activities and relationship could act as unexpectations. I think you could rearrange your presentation as you have planned to do your homework.
t2hang out to the museum, I think this is not serious, maybe you could say they have to visit museums to study.
t3article[ar'ti:kl] there seems to be in somewhat chaos near the end of your response.
t4good.
t5good, I think you could add details like emial the professor is not efficient way to solve her problem
t6the rhythm of your speaking is not steafy...still the cough is disruptive....your content has included main details in the lecture.

作者: gyygtt 时间: 2013-10-12 10:34:18

lhm77499 发表于 2013-10-11 23:50
10.11
good at pronunciation!GOOD!
t1activities and relationship could act as unexpectations. I th ...

谢谢啦~！~好详细。~我都不怎么会给人做评价~。囧

作者: baby_grape 时间: 2013-10-14 16:11:34

不好意思，10.12来晚啦！
不过。。你的网盘里的10.12的文件下下来是空的？？

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