标题: [Error type 02] [打印本页] 作者: tesolchina 时间: 2016-1-8 20:31:46 标题: [Error type 02]
本帖最后由 tesolchina 于 2016-1-21 14:19 编辑
请在回帖中指出以下句子中的错误的类型并尝试修改。请不要为了看隐藏内容而做无意义的回复，谢谢。
句子 1 This reminds me, I appear different in different places, too.
句子 2 For example, people settling down the island must have searched for food to survive, if a certain food that is vital for human is rightly necessary or the only food suitable for mammals, the number of mammals may decrease gradually as this kind of food is more and more occupied by human.
<error_type>句内主语不一致, 多句混合入单句</error_type>
<correction.s1>This reminds me that I appear different in different places, too.</correction>
<correction.s2>For example, people settling down the island must have searched for food to survive. If a certain food that is vital for human is rightly necessary or the only food suitable for mammals, the number of mammals may decrease gradually as this kind of food is more and more occupied by human.</correction>作者: Catherine_hope 时间: 2016-1-20 20:11:32
<error_type>两个句子合在了一起</error_type>
<correction.s1>This reminds me that I appear different in different places, too.</correction>
<correction.s2>For example, people settling down the island must have searched for food to survive. If a certain food that is vital for human is rightly necessary or the only food suitable for mammals, the number of mammals may decrease gradually as this kind of food is more and more occupied by human.</correction>作者: verne91 时间: 2016-1-20 20:12:19
<error_type>不是一句话</error_type>
<correction.s1>This reminds me that I appear different in different places, too.</correction>
<correction.s2>For example, people settling down the island must have searched for food to survive. If a certain food that is vital for human is rightly necessary or the only food suitable for mammals, the number of mammals may decrease gradually as this kind of food is more and more occupied by human.</correction>作者: Twinkle39 时间: 2016-1-20 20:12:31
<error_type>不知道</error_type>
<correction.s1>This reminds me, I appear differently in different places, too.</correction>
<correction.s2> For example, people who settle down the island must have searched for food to survive, if a certain food that is vital for human is rightly necessary or the only food suitable for mammals, the number of mammals may decreases gradually as this kind of food is more and more occupied by human.
</correction> 作者: who-knows 时间: 2016-1-20 20:12:47
<error_type>不知道</error_type>
<correction.s1>This reminds me that I appear different in different places, too.</correction>
<correction.s2>For example, people settling down the island must have searched for food to survive. If a certain food that is vital for human is rightly necessary or the only food suitable for mammals, the number of mammals may decrease gradually as this kind of food is more and more occupied by human.</correction>作者: clarawho 时间: 2016-1-20 20:13:12
<error_type>缺少连接词</error_type>
<correction.s1> This reminds me that I appear different in different places, too.</correction>
<correction.s2>For example, people settling down the island must have searched for food to survive. If a certain food that is vital for human is rightly necessary or the only food suitable for mammals, the number of mammals may decrease gradually as this kind of food is more and more occupied by human.</correction> 作者: gardenia22 时间: 2016-1-20 20:13:41
<error_type>一句话包含多个主谓</error_type>
<correction.s1>This reminds me that I also appear different in different places.</correction>
<correction.s2>For example, people settling down the island must have searched for food to survive. If a certain food that is vital for human is rightly necessary and is the only food suitable for mammals, the number of mammals may decrease gradually as this kind of food is occupied more and more by human.</correction>
本帖最后由 tesolchina 于 2016-1-20 15:07 编辑
请在回帖中指出以下句子中的错误的类型并尝试修改。请不要为了看隐藏内容而做无意义的回复，谢谢。
句子 1 This reminds me, I appear different in different places, too.
句子 2 For example, people settling down the island must have searched for food to survive, if a certain food that is vital for human is rightly necessary or the only food suitable for mammals, the number of mammals may decrease gradually as this kind of food is more and more occupied by human.
作者: cyanchow 时间: 2016-1-20 20:13:43
<error_type>主从句关系，连接代词</error_type>
<correction.s1>This reminds me that I appear different in different places ,too.
</correction>
<correction.s2>For example, people settling down the island must have searched for food to survive.If a certain food that is vital for human is rightly necessary or the only food suitable for mammals, the number of mammals may decrease gradually as this kind of food is more and more occupied by human.
</correction>作者: wz1342322 时间: 2016-1-20 20:13:44
<error_type>时态错误</error_type>
<correction.s1>This reminds me, I appeared different in different places, too.</correction>
<correction.s2>For example, people settling down the island must search for food to survive, if a certain food that is vital for human is rightly necessary or the only food suitable for mammals, the number of mammals may decrease gradually as this kind of food is more and more occupied by human.</correction>作者: shuliang123 时间: 2016-1-20 20:14:14
this thing reminded me that I appear to be different in different places.作者: 天天羊言 时间: 2016-1-20 20:14:56
<error_type>不知道</error_type>
<correction.s1>It also reminds me that I would appear differently in different places.</correction>
<correction.s2>For example, people settlying down the island must have searched for food to survive. If a certain food that is vital for human is rightly necessary or the only suitable food for mammals, the number of mammals may decrease gradually as this kind of food is more more occupied by human.</correction>作者: hao0080 时间: 2016-1-20 20:15:16
<error_type> </error_type>
<correction.s1>This reminds me of the fact that I appear different in different places too</correction>
<correction.s2>For example, people settling down on the island must have searched for food to survive. If a certain kind of food that is vital for human is the only food suitable for mammals, the number of mammals may decrease gradually as this kind of food is more and more occupied by human.
</correction>作者: 蓝涩__ 时间: 2016-1-20 20:15:52
<error_type>缺少连接</error_type>
<correction.s1>This reminds me that I appear different in different places, too.</correction>
<correction.s2>For example, people settling down the island must have searched for food to survive, and if a certain food that is vital for human is rightly necessary or the only food suitable for mammals, the number of mammals may decrease gradually as this kind of food is more and more occupied by human.</correction> 作者: chinnie1952 时间: 2016-1-20 20:16:01
<correction.s1>This reminds me that I appear different in different places, too.</correction>
<correction.s2>你修改后的第二个句子</correction>作者: joewoo198256 时间: 2016-1-20 20:16:12
This reminds me that I appear different in different places,too.
People settled down on the island will need food to survive, 错太多，没法儿改了作者: 葆芙露莎 时间: 2016-1-20 20:16:24
<error_type>一个句子中有两个谓语动词</error_type>
<correction.s1>This reminds me that I appear to be totally a different in different places.</correction>
<correction.s2>For example, people who had settled done must have search for food to survive. If the food was so precious that human would compete with animals, then the number of mammals would probably decrease even to the extent of extinction.</correction>作者: kasy 时间: 2016-1-20 20:17:20
<error_type>不知道</error_type>
<correction.s1>This reminds me that I also appear different in different places.</correction>
<correction.s2> For example, people settling down the island must have searched for food to survive. If a certain food that is vital for human is rightly necessary or is the only food that is suitable for mammals, the number of mammals may decrease gradually as this kind of food is more and more occupied by human.</correction> 作者: 万仔 时间: 2016-1-20 20:17:42
<error_type>填写你认为这个句子的错误类型（如果不知道就填不知道）</error_type>
<correction.s1>This reminds me that my appearance is different in different places, too.</correction>
<correction.s2>For example, people settling down on the island must have searched for food to survive. If a kind of food, which is vital for human, is rightly necessary or the only food suitable for mammals, the number of mammals may decrease gradually as this kind of food is occupied by human on a big amount.</correction> 作者: anonymous1111 时间: 2016-1-20 20:17:53
<error_type>不完整</error_type>
<correction.s1>It remains me that I appear different in different places </correction>
<correction.s2>. </correction> 作者: qq135zxc 时间: 2016-1-20 20:18:39
<error_type>1.缺少从句2.语序不对。</error_type>
<correction.s1>This reminds me that I appear different in different places, too.</correction>
<correction.s2> For example, if a certain food that is vital for human is rightly necessary or the only food suitable for mammals, the number of mammals may decrease gradually as this kind of food is more and more occupied by human since people settling down the island must have searched for food to survive, </correction> 作者: 洋葱大叔 时间: 2016-1-20 20:18:42
<error_type>主语错误,单复数错误，少介词</error_type>
<correction.s1>It reminds me that I appear differently in different place, too.</correction>
<correction.s2>For example, people set down in the island must have to search food for survive, if a certain kind of food that is vital for human is rightly necessary or the only food suitable for mammals, the number of mammals may decrease gradually as such food was more and more occupied by human. </correction>作者: prince3734 时间: 2016-1-20 20:18:45
<error_type>缺少连词</error_type>
<correction.s1> it is reminds me that I appear different in different places.</correction>
<correction.s2>For example, people settling down the island must have searched for food to survive, but if a certain food that is vital for human is rightly necessary or the only food suitable for mammals, the number of mammals may decrease gradually as this kind of food is more and more occupied by human.
</correction> 作者: shingle 时间: 2016-1-20 20:18:59
<correction.s1>你修改后的第一个句子</correction>
This reminds me too that I appear differently in different places.
<correction.s2>你修改后的第二个句子</correction>
1.不应该用分词settling,,,因为有动作即视感.2.must have searched不应该用虚拟语气..3.
For example, people settling down the island must have searched for food to survive, if a certain food that is vital for human is rightly necessary or the only food suitable for mammals, the number of mammals may decrease gradually as this kind of food is more and more occupied by human.
For example,people who settle down the island must search food to survive,if a certain food that is vital for human,and is rightly necessary or the only food suitable for mammals,the number of mammals may decrease gradually as this kind of food is increasingly occupied by human.
作者: tibetswan 时间: 2016-1-20 20:19:19
句子 1 This reminds me, I appear different in different places, too.
This reminds me that I appear differently in different places as well.
句子 2 For example, people settling down the island must have searched for food to survive, if a certain food that is vital for human is rightly necessary or the only food suitable for mammals, the number of mammals may decrease gradually as this kind of food is more and more occupied by human.
For example, people settling down the island must have searched for food to survive. If a certain food that is vital for human, it is rightly necessary. If it is the only food suitable for mammals, the number of mammals may decrease gradually as this kind of food is more and more occupied by human.作者: 二零一五劳动节 时间: 2016-1-20 20:19:51
<error_type>一句话有两个谓语动词</error_type>
<correction.s1>It reminds me that I appear different in different places, too.</correction>
<correction.s2>For example, people settling down the island must have searched for food to survive. If a certain food that is vital for human is rightly necessary or the only food suitable for mammals, the number of mammals may decreasing gradually as this kind of food is more and more occupied by human.</correction> 作者: Uncl3Aaron 时间: 2016-1-20 20:20:17
<error_type>不知道</error_type>
<correction.s1>What reminds me is that I appear differently in different place too.</correction>
<correction.s2>For example, if a certain food that is vital for human who are settling down the island that must search for food to survive is rightly necessary and the only food suitable for mammals, the number of mammals may decrease gradually as this kind of food is more and more occupied by human.</correction>作者: 方頭獅仔 时间: 2016-1-20 20:21:17
句子 1 This reminds me, I appear different in different places, too.
句子 2 For example, people settling down the island must have searched for food to survive, if a certain food that is vital for human is rightly necessary or the only food suitable for mammals, the number of mammals may decrease gradually as this kind of food is more and more occupied by human.
<固定搭配有错.s1>
<correction.s1>This reminds me of appearing to be different in different places.
<缺少连接词.s2>
<correction.s2>For example, people settling down the island must have searched for food to survive, if a certain food that is vital for human is rightly necessary or the only food suitable for mammals and the number of mammals may decrease gradually as this kind of food is more and more occupied by human.作者: 会咩的绵羊 时间: 2016-1-20 20:21:19
<error_type>sentence fragment
</error_type>
<correction.s1>This has reminded me that I had appeared different in different places, too.
</correction>
<correction.s2>For example, people settling down the island must have searched for food to survive, if a certain food which is vital for human is rightly necessary or the only food is just suitable for mammals, the number of mammals may decrease gradually as this kind of food is more and more occupied by human.
</correction>
作者: 多多洛71 时间: 2016-1-20 20:23:12
<error_type>不知道）</error_type>
<correction.s1>This reminds me that I appear differently in different places too.</correction>
<correction.s2>For example,when people have settled down in the island, they must searched for food to survive. If a certain food is vital for human but also the only food suitable for mammals, this kind of food would be more and more occupied by human so the number of mammals may decrese gradually.</correction>作者: chbang 时间: 2016-1-20 20:25:00
<error_type>不知道</error_type>
<correction.s1>This reminds me of the fact that I appear different in different places.</correction>
<correction.s2> For example, people settling down the island must have searched for food to survive. If a certain food that is vital for human is rightly necessary or is the only food suitable for mammals, the number of mammals may decrease gradually as this kind of food is occupied more and more by human.</correction>作者: cevyukyvsV 时间: 2016-1-20 20:25:52
省略不当
I also appear different in different places
or is the only food 作者: 尓尓 时间: 2016-1-20 20:28:02
<error_type>填写你认为这个句子的错误类型（如果不知道就填不知道）</error_type>
<correction.s1>你修改后的第一个句子</correction>
This reminds me that I appear different in different places.
<correction.s2>你修改后的第二个句子</correction>
For example, people settleing down the island must have searched for food to survive, if a certain food vital for human is rightly necessary or the only food suitable for mammals, the number of mammals may decrease gradually as this kind of food is more and more occupied by human.作者: law1990 时间: 2016-1-20 20:39:46
<error_type>不知道，缺少介词</error_type>
<correction.s1> This reminds me, I seems different in different places, too.</correction>
<correction.s2> For example, people settling down on the island must have searched food to survive, if a certain food that is vital for human is rightly necessary or the only food suitable for mammals, the number of mammals may decrease gradually as this kind of food is more and more occupied by human.
</correction>
作者: shanshan3 时间: 2016-1-20 20:41:02
<correction.s1>This reminds me that I perform different in different places, too.</correction>
<correction.s2> For example, if people settle down in the island,they must search for food to survive, and if a certain food that is vital for human is rightly necessary or the only food suitable for mammals, then the number of mammals may decrease gradually as this kind of food is more and more occupied by human.</correction>
作者: huaping 时间: 2016-1-20 20:44:02
<error_type>两句话中缺乏必要的连词,too用起来很牵强，前面没有逻辑信号</error_type> <correction.s1> This reminds me that I appear different in different places.</correction>
<error_type>不知道问题在哪里</error_type>
<correction.s1> This reminds me that I appear different in different places.</correction>
<correction.s2>你修改后的第二个句子</correction> 作者: Dummy-Yummy 时间: 2016-1-21 01:42:30
<error_type>句子之间关系混乱</error_type>
<correction.s1>1 This reminds me that I appeared differently in different places, too.</correction>
<correction.s2>2 For example, people settle down the island must search for food to survive, if a certain food that is vital for human is rightly necessary or the only food suitable for mammals, the number of mammals may decrease gradually as this kind of food is more and more occupied by human.</correction> 作者: tesolchina_RA 时间: 2016-1-21 14:16:02