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aimei2005UID: 2119194

Issue185
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Scandals—whether in politics, academia, or other areas—can be useful. They focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could.
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[ Last edited by aimei2005 on 2005-7-29 at 19:42 ]

xiaonawangUID: 2114716

Scandals can be heard all over the world, they give us interesting talking things after lunch, make us unbelieve  people known by everyone, make people notice something neglected,  make some people famous;  on the contrary, they can also amplify people’s personal thing exposed （personal things 改为privacy更简单些。）. they often cause huge effect whether positive or negative. Scandals have someway that no speaker or no reformer ever could do to catch our eyes on.

Scandals can be useful in politics, for example, Clinton –liwensky sex scandal case are known by people around the world, it not only has negative effect for Clinton’s political career but also has strong affect for his home. Seventies years ago the Watergate case cause president Nixon down off the American president. In these cases scandals are by no sense can simply be taken place by whatever any speaker or reformer could do. Scandals become the strong tool by the opponents. In china, Shexianlin case are noticed recently, it concentrates the police misconduct in the case, however when he was set free after mistakening prisoned for over 10 years, the police chargeing for the case can hardly recorrect the case, on the contrary, a  minor police taking part in the case was arrested but can’t resist the overwhelming and chose to kill himself, the result was that the case couldn’t recorrected for ever.

Scandals can also be useful in academia. We usually not notice the article’s truth written by professor. However in the end of 2002 a panel of huadong  science and techonology university found that one of their excellent professor – though he is the youngest professor in china that time,, who had released more than one fifitysix papers on Science Journal and Nature Journal, guilty for using other professor’s article. Since then, many people can’t believe the truth (lost the trust 可以吗？) for the professor’s article.

Moreover, scandals are useful in other areas such as sport, economy, education,foods and drugs and so forth. Recently red exposed the problem exisisted in foods, though the sudan red had been banned for many years, they were still no standard to identify it; when the problem turned up, the power even can’t identify it immediately. It’s not only one, several years ago, yuanhua main concictor Laicangxin muggling over 1000000000 RMB and have many relations even with the police of the central.

In sum, scandals have their role over speaker or reformer could do .

我总体上认为，负面的例子可以用，但是，不要带过多的个人感情。最好语气上分析色彩再浓些。

aimei2005UID: 2119194

Originally posted by xiaonawang at 2005-7-22 11:20
Scandals can be heard all over the world, they give us interesting talking things after lunch, make us unbelieve  people known by everyone, make people notice something neglected,  make some people ...

谢谢!我作了些修改.看看现在如何?
这两天有事情,没来看,现在根据你提的意见做了修改并作些补充,看看比原来会好点吗?缺点错误一定还很多,

xiaonawangUID: 2114716

好多了。再努力。你的词汇许多用得不准。比如最基本的seventy years ago, 不是seventies years ago.   这些，是很难在短时间内提上去的。建议，如果有时间多背几篇文章。如果没有，那就少用生词。把心思花在逻辑上。可能会有用。