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Scandals, ridiculously, a word people disgusts to look at, since it presents the stain in a political or academic field, while, sometimes it just operates as something attracting .No matter how distress it may bring about, People just can not help themselves to get away with it. Discussing the function it practices, admittedly, it can contribute to the development in some fields. However, overestimating what it brings to us, especially compared it with the effects the speaker or a reformer may flow from. I agree, a speaker or a reformer goes further than scandals .


At the first hand, scandals are one form of the media report. As a famous politician in USA said, "media report is just like a throat of justice, in that it presents truth in front of people." Scandals also have the similar function. For further supporting my claim two cases may be convincing. First, as in a political field, the most famous scandal happened in the year 1978, USA, called the Watergate affair. It happened as the burglary and the wiretapping operated on the Democratic Party leaders. While no one could ever imagine, behind the mask, it is the president –Nixon ,who conducted the whole things. After years of investigation, from the tape of the Federal Count, the truth demonstrates it is the president himself should be sentenced. Though this scandal hit every American individual’s heart. However, it is the reflection of the perfect law system, the constitution win at last. The scandals sometimes like a bell tells us some supplements we should solidify to our political field.


Secondly , compared to the scandals, although people may suspend that if the speaker or reformer could do more or better than the sandal? The answer is yes, definitely, a good case in point leads us to say a man, Martin Luther King, a great and brilliant speaker in American's history. Referred to this man, every one may remember the discourse "I have a dream", it inspire thousands of people's encourage to break the slavery system, including the black and the white enlightened. He contributed dramatically to the democratic process in USA, thus Martin was remembered, revered by people all over the world.


However, it is true that no denying should be given to the advantage what scandals contribute to our society, Overestimating its effect, may bring a disaster in the media world, as well as the other fields. The results will be -a distortion standard, without any former moral and ethnic element, or a web full of torturous ideology and fallacy. Retrospect to the human history, as to the years after the World War Second, Soviet Union was under the charge of Stalin, it built a system which encourage people to curse and point out others drawback or fallacy, Without carefully examining if the information people announced is true or false-as a kind of scandal. The result is, in the society, no one existed with no scandal, no one was free of cursing by others, no one felt safe of himself for lacking the fundamental standard and check system. Many people who are cursed for antisocialist were persecuted by the government. Scandal without limitation is rather a curse rather than a blessing.

In sum, the power is depended on us, to lead a scandal an evil or a god. what we should do is showing a rational attitude or justice on it. Only through this way can it fuel our society even prosperity and abandon the bad quality of itself. While it is important but it can not compare with the contribution make by the speakers or reformers.

翦瞳UID: 184872

先保存了，明天改出！

翦瞳UID: 184872

"Scandals—whether in politics, academia, or other areas—can be useful. They focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could."

defination of scandal:
scandal
     n 1: disgraceful gossip about the private lives of other people
          [syn: dirt, malicious gossip]
     2: a disgraceful event [syn: outrage]


Source: Webster's Revised Unabridged Dictionary (1913)

Scandal \Scan"dal\, v. t.
   1. To treat opprobriously; to defame; to asperse; to traduce;
      to slander. [R.]

            I do fawn on men and hug them hard And after scandal
            them.                                 --Shak.

   2. To scandalize; to offend. [Obs.] --Bp. Story.

   Syn: To defame; traduce; reproach; slander; calumniate;
        asperse; vilify; disgrace.

so I have a problem, such as 孙志刚被殴致死案，can be called scandal?
before looking at your article, I expressed my understanding of the issue.

1 scandal can focus our attention 的原因：it is a huge error
2 the use is derived from error,如果可以我们都可以好好利用
3 a wide attention scandal roused always was exaggerated unnecessarily by media
while scandal does help focusing our attention, but it is evil attention and distracted attention. We also put attention on some more valuable things such as charitable things.
Scandal always a joke or talking topic for ordinary people, scandal can not evoke the real care, while other senseful things can.
Scandals, ridiculously, a word people disgusts to look at, since it presents the stain in a political or academic field, while, sometimes it just operates as something attracting .No matter how distress it may bring about, People just can not help themselves to get away with it. Discussing the function it practices, admittedly, it can contribute to the development in some fields. However, overestimating what it brings to us, especially compared it with the effects the speaker or a reformer may flow from. I agree, a speaker or a reformer goes further than scandals . (开头太长，第一句可以去掉)   

At the first hand, scandals are one form of the media report. As a famous politician in USA said, "media report is just like a throat of justice, in that it presents truth in front of people." Scandals also have the similar function. For further supporting my claim two cases may be convincing. First, as in a political field, the most famous scandal happened in the year 1978, USA, called the Watergate affair. It happened as the burglary and the wiretapping operated on the Democratic Party leaders. While no one could ever imagine, behind the mask, it is the president –Nixon ,who conducted the whole things. After years of investigation, from the tape of the Federal Count, the truth demonstrates it is the president himself should be sentenced. Though this scandal hit every American individual’s heart. However, it is the reflection of the perfect law system, (in fact, perfect law implies there is no revision needed, what is to say, the scandal never improved law which is incorrect.) the constitution win at last. The scandals sometimes like a bell tells us some supplements we should solidify to our political field.

Secondly , compared to the scandals, although people may suspend that if 换成两句吧，however,as to scandals, people may hesitate to conclude their present value. can speakers or reformers do more or better than scandals? the speaker or reformer could do more or better than the sandal? The answer is yes, definitely, a good case in point leads us to say a man, Martin Luther King, a great and brilliant speaker in American's history. Referred to this man, every one may remember the discourse "I have a dream", it inspire thousands of people's encourage 去掉 to break the slavery system, including 指代不明 the black and the white enlightened. He contributed dramatically to the democratic process in USA, thus Martin was remembered, revered by people all over the world.


However, it is true that no denying should be given to the advantage what scandals contribute to our society, Overestimating its effect, may bring a disaster in the media world, as well as the other fields. The results will be -a distortion standard, without any former moral and ethnic element, or a web full of torturous ideology and fallacy. Retrospect to the human history, as to the years after the World War Second, Soviet Union was under the charge of Stalin, it built a system which encourage people to curse and point out others drawback or fallacy, Without carefully examining if the information people announced is true or false-as a kind of scandal. The result is, in the society, no one existed with no scandal, no one was free of cursing by others, no one felt safe of himself for lacking the fundamental standard and check system. Many people who are cursed for antisocialist were persecuted by the government. Scandal without limitation is rather a curse rather than a blessing. (very excellent example which is able to reject the issue powerfully, but I have to say, the entire article's construction need improvement)

第二段放在最后，把说scandal 的内容放在一起，是不是好些？
我的思路也很乱，反对，但论点不好确定!

In sum, the power is depended on us, to lead a scandal an evil or a god. what we should do is showing a rational attitude or justice on it. Only through this way can it fuel our society even prosperity and abandon the bad quality of itself. While it is important but it can not compare with the contribution make by the speakers or reformers.

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意见供您参考：）
Scandals, ridiculously, a word people disgusts to look at, since it presents the stain in a political or academic field, while, sometimes it just operates as something attracting .(这个句子当然很有形式上的美感，以前我也喜欢这么写，但是和老外交流觉得太花哨了，可以尝试着少一些逗号来分割。进贡参考啊：－）)No matter how distress it may bring about, People just can not(好像一般是写成cannot) help themselves to get away with it. Discussing the function it practices, admittedly, it can contribute to the development in some fields. However, overestimating what it brings to us, especially compared（ing 形式吧) it with the effects the speaker or a reformer may flow from. I agree, a speaker or a reformer goes further than scandals .


At the first hand, scandals are one form of the( 没有the 吧？) media report. As a famous politician in USA said, "media report is just like a throat of justice, in that it presents truth in front of people." Scandals also have the similar function. For further supporting my claim two cases may be convincing. First（ 前面用了first， 这里可以尝试着用on one hand）, as in a political field, the most famous scandal happened in the year 1978, USA, called the Watergate affair. It happened as the burglary and the wiretapping operated on the Democratic Party leaders. While no one could ever imagine, behind the mask, it is the president –Nixon ,who conducted the whole things. After years of investigation, from the tape of the Federal Count, the truth demonstrates it is the president himself should be sentenced. Though this scandal hit every American individual’s heart. However, it is the reflection of the perfect law system, the constitution win at last. The scandals sometimes like a bell tells us some supplements we should solidify to our political field.


Secondly , compared to the scandals, although people may suspend that if the speaker or reformer could do more or better than the sandal?（ 没有看懂的说 :P) The answer is yes, definitely, a good case in point leads us to say a man, Martin Luther King, a great and brilliant speaker in American's history. Referred to this man, every one may remember the discourse "I have a dream", it inspire（s） thousands of people's encourage to break the slavery system, including the black and the white enlightened. He contributed dramatically to the democratic process in USA, thus Martin was remembered, revered by people all over the world.


However, it is true that no denying should be given to the advantage what scandals contribute to our society, Overestimating its effect, may bring a disaster in the media world, as well as the other fields. The results will be -a distortion standard, without any former moral and ethnic element, or a web full of torturous ideology and fallacy. Retrospect to the human history, as to the years after the World War Second, Soviet Union was under the charge of Stalin, it built a system which encourage people to curse and point out others drawback or fallacy, Without carefully examining if the information people announced is true or false-as a kind of scandal. The result is, in the society, no one existed with no scandal, no one was free of cursing by others, no one felt safe of himself for lacking the fundamental standard and check system. Many people who are cursed for antisocialist were persecuted by the government. Scandal without limitation is rather a curse rather than a blessing.

In sum, the power is depended on us, to lead a scandal an evil or a god( a blessing or a curse 也许更好吧). what we should do is showing a rational attitude or justice on it. Only through this way can it fuel our society even prosperity and abandon the bad quality of itself. While it is important but it can not compare with the contribution make by the speakers or reformers.

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