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标题: 5T同主题写作第3期--topic7: [打印本页]

作者: yanhuangbaby    时间: 2006-4-19 15:19:36     标题: 5T同主题写作第3期--topic7:

topic
7. How do movies or television influence people's behavior? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.
参考分析:
电影、电视等大众传媒(mass media)往往可以对人们的行为产生影响
·        通过改变人们的价值观、世界观、审美观而改变人们行为
·        通过制造“社会热点”而使大众不停地讨论一件事情
通过满足人们的幻想,或使人们处于平衡状态,或使人们一定程度上失衡



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请大家列提纲的题目有:
    149  
     参考分析:可以采取It depends的策略:要看这片地有多大?在哪里?视情况而定。
         12
          22(同类型的15)
         50
                                



这次注意:
1。争取把时间限定在30分钟以内,因为不久就要上考场了!!
2。作文在纸上写好后,先自己修改一遍(检查拼写错误,升级短语,修改结构,总之,先给它美容一遍),再发到坛子上让大家拍。这个方法非常有效哦 自己都不满意的作品,别人就更难喜欢,是不是?
3。要积攒人品,人家给你拍了,记得回拍,否则就rpwt了

             本次同主题由逆风飞羊斑竹出题目,大家加油1:)
作者: meishen    时间: 2006-4-19 15:29:46

交卷了!

请大家指点!我一定回拍,谢谢!

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[ 本帖最后由 meishen 于 2006-4-19 21:37 编辑 ]
作者: flyingwind    时间: 2006-4-19 15:33:58

板凳~~~~
作者: expire7    时间: 2006-4-19 15:47:17

up!!!
作者: Earthwormzyy    时间: 2006-4-19 15:48:53

晚上交作业
作者: wyl3    时间: 2006-4-19 16:13:14

过两天交把
最近好忙的说!!
作者: sandyfriend    时间: 2006-4-19 16:14:27

又有新的了
作者: woodygt    时间: 2006-4-19 16:29:23

填上^_^

参考了很多人的文章才有了点思路。不过还是超时。。。

https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1

大家来拍拍吧:)

[ 本帖最后由 woodygt 于 2006-4-20 21:14 编辑 ]
作者: 炽阳    时间: 2006-4-19 16:34:34

占上先,明天交
作者: adugdu    时间: 2006-4-19 16:43:12


作者: roric2025    时间: 2006-4-19 16:59:16

跟上!
作者: undoerlc    时间: 2006-4-19 17:18:07

hoho,好累啊,上篇没写完多久又有新的啦,顶...
作者: 归来的虎子    时间: 2006-4-19 17:18:43

https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1

这篇列举果然不好写~~~晕

[ 本帖最后由 归来的虎子 于 2006-4-20 17:24 编辑 ]
作者: nick2005    时间: 2006-4-19 17:21:54


作者: euge_013    时间: 2006-4-19 17:31:53

来支持下  对不起大家  
最近忙考试
下次一定补上
作者: nostrum    时间: 2006-4-19 18:23:00

seat taken
作者: bert2006    时间: 2006-4-19 18:32:29

赶紧拿个马扎坐下

第二篇新鲜出炉了,欢迎品尝:)
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[ 本帖最后由 bert2006 于 2006-4-20 13:52 编辑 ]
作者: susan8940    时间: 2006-4-19 19:18:12

up

交作业啦! 请大家多指教啊,有改必回

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[ 本帖最后由 susan8940 于 2006-4-20 20:10 编辑 ]
作者: approach    时间: 2006-4-19 21:04:37

又来晚了..


交作业啦


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[ 本帖最后由 approach 于 2006-4-23 03:22 编辑 ]
作者: danielfei    时间: 2006-4-19 21:20:58

占座  占座!

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[ 本帖最后由 danielfei 于 2006-4-20 21:18 编辑 ]
作者: polymath    时间: 2006-4-19 21:30:55

小于动作真快!
作者: pirate_sql    时间: 2006-4-19 22:24:02

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作者: musiclicn    时间: 2006-4-19 22:39:54

小弟我就不怕献丑了,请大家多指教:
With the development of technology, many inventions changed our life. Of the numerous innovations movies and televisions certainly influence people’s behavior both physically and psychologically.

Firstly, it is obvious that many people imitate the dress and gesture of a film star in a movie or a popular singer in the television, especially for teenagers. In recent years, Korean TV programs are favored particularly in China by both juniors and seniors. Many teenagers love the TV stars so much that they imitate their dress, speak the tone like them and even want to learn the language of Korean. That is not what I advocate, but the phenomenon is the fact we face in my country.

What is more, films and TV programs can satisfy some people’s emotional need to some degree. Though we all known that what happens in the films or TV programs is not realistic, some may be addicted to the imaginary situations and laugh and cry for the characters in the scenario. Take the housewives as an example, several years after their marriages, they may feel boring about their ordinary life. As a result, they are eager for the exciting or peculiar things which can be found in the TV programs.

Last but not the least, some new values can bring with films, especially the foreign ones. Nowadays, films from Hollywood are favored by most people all around the world. The consequence is that new values, regardless of whether they are positive or negative, are accepted by the people who are not native Americans. With the tendency of globalization, this step is accelerated by commercial trades.

In conclusion, movies and televisions are changing people’s clothes, emotional feelings and even values or cultures, which leads to the advancement of the whole world.
大家能帮忙改下吗?或者打个分吧 ? 小弟我第一次考托 不知道这篇够不够上5分啊?请高手指点!不胜感激!

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作者: zhdidi    时间: 2006-4-19 22:45:50     标题: 有拍一定回啊,我急的都感冒了……

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作者: 4312    时间: 2006-4-19 23:09:33

先占位
作者: allison    时间: 2006-4-19 23:13:43

wait for me , coming tomorrow
作者: linyanqing00    时间: 2006-4-19 23:35:25

抢个位子  文章即刻补上  欢迎大家给予指教
作者: ishida1981    时间: 2006-4-20 00:08:00

大家速度好快,先占位,明天交作业:)

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交作业,有拍必回

[ 本帖最后由 ishida1981 于 2006-4-21 23:44 编辑 ]
作者: ben26102    时间: 2006-4-20 00:09:46

感觉很不好写内……
草鸟文章~大家拍吧~
http://edu.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=449686&extra=page%3D1

[ 本帖最后由 ben26102 于 2006-4-20 17:21 编辑 ]
作者: xinxinw    时间: 2006-4-20 08:24:30

交作业!快来拍啊

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作者: cpuliuwen    时间: 2006-4-20 12:01:05

占座!
作者: 夜一    时间: 2006-4-20 17:04:04

交作业,请大家多多指教:)

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[ 本帖最后由 夜一 于 2006-4-20 23:01 编辑 ]
作者: allison    时间: 2006-4-20 17:05:44

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限时却让我想痛哭的一篇,自己修改了,才像个样,好可怕啊

大家看看,有拍必回。

[ 本帖最后由 allison 于 2006-4-20 17:11 编辑 ]
作者: wc681620085    时间: 2006-4-20 17:43:25     标题: my section-go!!!

Whether movie or television do influence people’s behavior is becoming a hot issue in society. Although I am not titled to give the correct judgment, I would say it depend on how much you watch them. However, movies or television more or less influence people’s behavior.   
       As the portions of the mass media, it does not only transmit the information but also infuse its internal implication to people’s brain. Meanwhile the reception of the information are processing new signal as a feedback. And your nerve centre will response for the procedure. Just take the violent program for example, it is indeed corrupting the senses of children who read or watch them by any way. Because of the lack of law knowledge induce the youth to the subsequent crime deed. They are so naïve that they can not get the criterion of whether you are granted to do this or not. There always exists some adverse factions in the movie or television programs and they always appears to be cool or handsome which attracts youth a lot. They begin to imitate their performance and make it into practice. I just heard from a awesome news in ZheJiang. Five nonages encase a girl and toss it to the QianTang river after they murder her and cut the corpse into pieces. Their behaviors truly frighten me a lot.
       Affection issue also plays an another role in the people’s daily life. It once distressed many souls of the sensitive people. Their original ways of dealing with affection are distorted by the absorbing in the way of the actor or actress performed in the script. In addition to the situation, they did even more impractical. They have lost their patient to get well with their lover. But the sequence is always leading to the negative effect. The tragedy is always born to the reckless people.
       There are also advantages of the transmitting of the mass media. People can get the instant news from television. They can understand the status of the society and the development of his country. Watching TV also takes place of walking around the place u do not really want to appear but eager to understand it. You can take the advantage of the live sport TV show which you can not get to the scene.
It saves your time and energy even more money. Why do not this!!!
       To sum these points above, I consider the foremost aspect is that we should hold the degree of the time we spend on the watching. Properly watching is benefit for your healthy and help to widen your vision scale.
作者: Earthwormzyy    时间: 2006-4-20 17:59:08

我的,第一次发,好紧张呀。

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作者: eland0000    时间: 2006-4-20 17:59:27

占座
作者: wc681620085    时间: 2006-4-20 18:02:06

怎么把连接搞上去啊
作者: wc681620085    时间: 2006-4-20 18:05:15

http://
作者: wc681620085    时间: 2006-4-20 18:08:44

https://bbs.gter.net/wc
作者: wc681620085    时间: 2006-4-20 18:10:28

https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... page%3D1&page=4
作者: wc681620085    时间: 2006-4-20 18:13:51

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作者: Earthwormzyy    时间: 2006-4-20 22:44:52     标题: 我的,刚修改过的..多提意见

Topic 7 How do movies or television influence people's behavior? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer
Apr. 19

It goes without saying that movies and television have a great impact on people’s behavior. They are a source of knowledge and information and can be used to affect personal view toward the life and world (This paragraph works well. But you can combine the functions of movies and television into two categories: knowledge/information and influence.)

As perhaps the most popular media, movies and television give us a broad window on the world. News programs allow us to learn the events all over the world without us being there. Movies and television can provide us the knowledge of local customs, the development condition and diversity of cultures and races of our planet. Many well-made documentary films and television programs provide vivid descriptions and explanations of mystery animal world and outer space and allow us to explore the unknown realm.

Movies and television can also be used as a powerful tool to influence people’s thinking and behavior. A touching movie and TV story series may be always rooted our mind with the unforgettable character image. Such kind of character is often intentionally used to shape a hero or a perfect “person”. Sometimes the character’s behavior and thoughts can be used to create socially desirable moral and behavior standard. Watching live music concert or an art exhibit on TV notably reduces our stress and makes us get a relaxation. It also helps us to develop our own aesthetic criteria and enables us to identify which kind of art forms is our favorite.


The impact of movies and television can be negative. Watching too much movies and television makes us less physically active. Some unhealthy and violent programs cause some people imitate the character on the screen committing crime, even suicide. But such negative impact can be contained by advocating high-quality programs and discouraging excessive watching.
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作者: 清荷才露    时间: 2006-4-21 01:08:44

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已经跟我原来写得有所出入了。。。
作者: beryl2006    时间: 2006-4-21 10:23:16

呜呜,~~现在作文还是写得很烂,一点水平都没有
怎么办呢?
憋了好长时间,写得象小学生一样
作者: eri-cat    时间: 2006-4-21 12:00:32

https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1

相互拍砖吧,这么一来一去,相互的水平都提高了

时间还是用的长了点,构思7分钟,写作44分钟
作者: wc681620085    时间: 2006-4-21 13:12:19

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有谁帮我改改啊
作者: mswolf    时间: 2006-4-21 15:10:59

先学习学习!看来要临时抱佛脚:)
作者: tonyfly    时间: 2006-4-21 15:27:51

好不容易写好了
第一次写,欢迎打击
http://210.51.167.66/bbs/viewthr ... &extra=page%3D1
作者: wwondery    时间: 2006-4-21 15:41:36     标题: 谢谢指教,继续

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作者: xiaowenzi118    时间: 2006-4-21 18:26:48

我的也跟上:

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作者: lanccy    时间: 2006-4-21 18:42:17

不用占了,来晚了
先帮同学的贴上吧
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我自己的
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[ 本帖最后由 lanccy 于 2006-4-23 00:27 编辑 ]
作者: AceLee    时间: 2006-4-21 21:04:35

搬个凳子占个地儿.^^稍后就来交作业
作者: yz2274464    时间: 2006-4-21 21:57:39     标题: my link

find a place beforehand
作者: alex6945    时间: 2006-4-21 22:50:04     标题: 占坐

待会儿交作业
作业来了:
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
都来拍啊,虽然好象交晚了些.

[ 本帖最后由 alex6945 于 2006-4-24 18:44 编辑 ]
作者: loiswtf    时间: 2006-4-22 10:31:34

交作业了。郁闷呢,看到搂主说的要把时间控制在30分钟以内,不久就上考场了,心里都有点慌了,30分钟还写不完呢,呜呜呜呜,我这个慢性子!
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多多指教阿!有拍必回拍
作者: 麦芒    时间: 2006-4-22 12:59:47     标题: 我的3期TWE 欢迎来拍,使劲拍哈

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作者: timboy    时间: 2006-4-22 13:14:27

第三期作文,希望大家看看,谢谢啦:)https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
作者: QuincySM    时间: 2006-4-22 17:33:59

https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
作者: powerpyc    时间: 2006-4-22 17:47:07

恩恩,交作业了

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作者: berylszy    时间: 2006-4-22 18:53:08

第一次上传,大家指正~~~~
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作者: tianwangxinran    时间: 2006-4-22 18:57:50

https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
请大家多多批评!!
作者: king820606    时间: 2006-4-22 22:05:10

https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
看过其他大牛的高作以后,小可实在是相形见绌。但迫于无奈,还是望各位高手指正哦。
作者: ytr    时间: 2006-4-22 22:40:49     标题: topic 7(已修改稿),又超时了,有狠拍必狠回

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作者: dream_pursuer    时间: 2006-4-23 02:46:22     标题: Topic 7

麻烦大家提出宝贵的意见。大家的任何一点小建议对我来说,都是宝贵的参考意见。拜托大家了。

对了,有些同学是设定一个链接地址,比如
https://bbs.gter.net/post.php ... &extra=page%3D2
什么的,让大家去另外一个页面看作文。大大方便了大家看作文。
请问这个链接地址和页面是怎么设置的呢?谢谢



When it comes to the effects and influence that television and movies exert on people’s behaviors, some people hold the viewpoints that television and movies have brought too much passive negative influence on people, such as causing people to spend so much time on TV that there’s insufficient communication among people and children become much more apt to violence. However, that’s only part of the story. Another far more important effect TV brought is highly positive. Several factors are presented in the following.
   The principle positive factor lies in that TV provides a great deal of opportunities and chances for people to broaden their view sights, increase their knowledge and upgrade their abilities and capacities. As you know, there are many meaningful programs in the aspects of science, technology, education, health, geology and life. People can learn a lot from them. Furthermore, as many programs are so vivid in images, processes and details that they make people be able to learn a great deal in a short period of time.
  Second, as there are more and more programs involving families and groups, they result in many chances for families and friends to participate in certain programs cooperatively, which help increase the communication among families and friends. An instance is that the “Lucy 52” and “Happy Dictionary” in CCTV in China, which require families and friends to cooperate effectively in the process.
   In summary, although TV and movies have caused some negative results, the positive ones far outweigh the former ones. The key point lie in that we should make a proper use of TV and movies.
作者: king820606    时间: 2006-4-23 11:39:29

上次发错连接了
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D3
作者: dlegume    时间: 2006-4-23 12:41:14     标题: up


作者: u571    时间: 2006-4-24 08:51:13

唉,前几天没空,来晚了。就算自己补加 的一个任务吧。。。:):)

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作者: tycoldplay    时间: 2006-4-25 13:58:27     标题: 请求达人拍拍 :)

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作者: chuajasmine    时间: 2006-4-25 15:03:47     标题: 头大:请问哪里有作文试卷下载??

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作者: exp03    时间: 2006-4-27 16:59:14

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我的 比较迟 希望大家看看 也希望斑竹看看 谢谢
作者: sdmmqy    时间: 2006-4-27 19:08:51     标题: 我也写了一篇,那位大哥大姐帮看看

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作者: deansh    时间: 2006-5-2 11:15:11

交作业了,交的晚请版主见谅。
大家帮忙拍砖啊。

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作者: 王美眉    时间: 2006-5-3 15:30:36     标题: 帮忙帮忙

请帮忙! 如有需要,我一定帮您的忙。:)




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