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It is possible to identify a person's politics within a very short time of meeting him or her. Everything about people—their clothes, their friends, the way they talk, what they eat—reflects their political beliefs.

提纲:
1.反对立场.短时间不能了解。
2.让步段,特定情况下可以通过题目列举部分了解
3.short-time meeting只能提供浅层的了解,代表的是不同人群各自的文化和个性,而不是政治立场(后分为两个body)
4.一个人的政治立场是深层次的东西,需要长时间的了解
5.总结

Can one's politics be identified through a short-time contact by with? others? I do not agree with such an assertion that everything about people reflects their political beliefs so I will give out a negative answer to the question at the beginning, although there really exist some special examples which can reach this point 有些指代不明了。this point. 应该是指原题的观点吧。但从位置上来看里TS比较近,可能会被误解为指你的看法。可以改成the opposite point。不过再细想想,觉得把although...改称although there exist some exceptions更舒服

What we could not deny is the fact 改成It is no denying the fact that under some circumstance, it is possible to identify others' politics quickly by observing the details of them -- their clothes, their friends, the way they talk, and what they eat. In some countries and regions with the unification of church and state, somebody's 怪怪的用a person's politics can be justified at the first glance when his/her eating taboos are noticed, for instance, an Arabism people 索性就用an Arab with his/her taboo of consuming pork. On the other hand, in some special historical era, people were willing to present their politics by wearing different clothes, such as the famous feminism forerunners "Blue Stocking" in England history, who were all wearing blue stockings as they were called. However, though to identify one's politics hurry is feasible under some situations, it cannot be acted on general circumstance. in circumstance和under circumstance都对,但on不太肯定

In general circumstance, as a common sense, a very-short-time meeting can only provide people a correspondingly facial我想你要说得意思用superficial来表达更准确 impression about others, which is把which is去掉可以在句式上换换口味 usually not strong enough to justify their politics inside. Such fast cognition has to stay on the facet of their clothes, their friends, the way they talk and what they eat.感觉和前一句重复了 On one hand, such symbols show others the culture they are growing in rather than their politics. Cited as an example, Chinese are accustomed to use chopsticks when they are eating, compared with the Westerns using knives and forks. And similarly, many African females living in primary tribes always bare their upupper body, which is regarded bizarre in any enlightened society. Such differences are easily noticed after a short time of meeting, but they really show nothing linked with those people's politics.

On the other hand, the impression in a short time sometimes represents people's characteristics much more than their politics, tootoo是哪来的. One cannot draw such a conclusion -- the two people respectively from USA and Japan have the same political point of view to support the war in Iraq -- just when he/she has seen them chatting with the same language, same body gestureslanguage和gestures好像不能反映characteristics吧, or wearing in the similar Hip-hop style. Another great example will be presented here: could notorious Hitler has friends who were not linked so closely with Nazi? Hofmann was one of them. As a photographer, he had the same interest with Hitler, who was not only an autocrat but also an outstanding artist这里没有递进关系. In conclusion, a short-time impression can only offer a shallow cognition, which is not keen enough to show one's politics.感觉这一段只不过是继续上一段的话题对原题得看法给反例。实际上整个段落似乎并没有涉及到你提出的characteristic

On contrast这个词组可能有问题,不确定, one's political beliefs as a kind of profound feeling needs long-time meeting to be known well, since it cannot be reflected by everything about him/her.我觉得应该摆一个shortly以和long-time对应 People should spend long time to observe one's inclination on politics, and analyze his/her every choice on his/her political way, and so can people tell the skin-deep cognitions from his/her real political beliefs. For example, even though one of your neighbors claims that he is an honest supporter of Republican, how can you recognize that is only a joke if you have not seen his voting to the Democrat candidate?用陈述句就可以了,you will not recognize that is only a joke until you see his voting to the ... Here goes a significant Chinese saying, "Time reveals a person's heart", which can be a summarization of my opinion here.

To sum, it is usually impossible to know one's political beliefs in a very short time meeting, because not every thing of him/her is reflecting his/her politics so clearly. Politics as a deep belief is kept inside of people, which needs a long-term cognition process.(615words)


超时了15分钟,修改过拼写和语法。题目分析了很久。明天大家批驳的时候再详细讨论思路形成。谢谢!

整个文章感觉例子不少但似乎挖掘不深。我觉得b3的TS倒是表达了一种很不错的见解,但似乎也没有并分析到位。
这个题目我还没什么想法,所以思路上就我就说不出什么了。先看看其他人怎么说:D
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