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Modern people, longer lives
    The fact that mordern people live longer is so clear that all of us do not even think about it. Facing those statistics which prove that we are living much longer than our ancestors, I couldn't help wondering, why modern individuals have much longer lives?

    Modern medical technology, together with chemical pills, is probably the very first reason. In nowadays, hospitals play an cardinal role in reducing people's death rate. Unlike people living in ancient time, most of us do not die when we are infants, and small infection is no longer fatal. Despite some certain kinds of diseases, modern technology is capable to save us from all kinds of illness.

    Secondly, food is much easier to attain now. Hunting and fishing are more like a way of entertainment other than a necessary job to survive. In modern cities, we can even acquire food anytime and anywhere. It means that modern people have enough food and regular meals, which is significant to our health. Actually, it brings us the problem of obesity though, getting food easier is still a vital reason to explain why people are living longer now.

    Last but not least, sport is also a significant factor to influence our lives. Compared with us, ancient residents had no concepts of sports improving human's health condition. They treated sport as a different kind war, or a way to exhibit male's bodies. However, people now have clear recognition on the funtion of sports. We do sports since we need to be healthy and live longer. Every four years' Olympic Games, could always show that how much passion people have on sports, one of the oldest behavior in human history.

    In conclusion, it can be attributed to three reasons that why people live longer now. We are equipped with newer midical facilities; we are having ample food and we are doing sports for our health's sake. Compared with ancient human, we are unbelievably lucky.

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