Issue51 Young people should be encouraged to pursue long-term, realistic goals

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51. Young people should be encouraged to pursue long-term, realistic goals rather than seek immediate fame and recognition.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.

TS (pt1, pt2, pt3): The argument that youths’ chase for long-run and pragmatic aims ought to be preferable to their pursuit of the immediate fame and recognition is reasonable only when they want to success in the fields like politics. Once we consider the juveniles who have the will to become stars in the fields of entertainment and sports, the advice given in the topic is not the case.

ts (pt1): To begin with, if a young person wants to achieve the goal of becoming a successful political leader, she should prepare for a long time by accumulating relevant knowledge and experience. 一个合格的政治家需要大量的社会学、经济学、政治学方面的知识以及丰富的从政经验、人脉关系、威望。因此致力于在政坛发展的青年就不能急于求成，他们需要把目光放长远一些，潜心学习知识，慢慢积累经验，几十年后他们也许就能在该领域成功。比如历任美国总统，大多都是在某一州或者议会里工作了数十年，才能最终当选。因此，题目中的建议对于要从政的青年是很有借鉴意义的。

ts (pt2): Notwithstanding, if a youth is interested in acting and singing, she needs to hurry up in her career. 演艺与歌唱等娱乐业项目，吃的是青春饭。因此的确对表演和唱歌感兴趣的年轻人就得快点行动，为自己创造出名和获得认可的机会，否则到了自己人老珠黄、活力不再的时候，就悔之晚矣了。例如贾斯汀•比伯十几岁就成名，今年二十岁的他已经是国际巨星了。所以对于想在娱乐圈发展的年轻人来说，题目中的建议是不能采纳的。

ts (pt3): What is more, the juveniles aiming at sports stars should attempt to be famous and recognized as soon as possible. 体育是一个对人的年龄要求更严格的职业，因为一旦人上了年纪，身体机能的下降也许比外貌的老化还要快。所以想当体育明星的人，也不能磨磨蹭蹭的，抓住一切机会展现自己的才能，争取名誉和赏识才是正理。当今的球王梅西，十几岁时就展露出过人的足球才能，二十多岁时就拿下除了世界杯以外所有的团体和个人荣誉。那么在体育领域里，题目中建议也是不成立的。