【Daily Writing作文特训小组】nadine 作文帖

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Makingmistake plays an essential part in the process of growing up and achieving(加一个acheiving 感觉前后结构对称些，个人看法) success.However, due to the anxious of parents for their children's well performing,some strict parents would restrict their children to making mistakes and evennever（空格） give their children chances to try in case they do something wrong. Suchphenomenon（空格） has become more and more common with the keen competition amongchildren（空格）. Personally speaking, I think parents should have a tolerant attitudetowards（空格） mistakes and encourage children learn from their own mistakes.% @- B7 r: s4 O

Tobegin with, making mistakes encourage children to explore by themselves, and thisis（空格） necessary to their growth. Just imagine, if the parent forbid the child tomake mistake, the only method to realize this "dream" is that the parentguide （空格）the child in every step, every decision, and even every minute. Childreneducated （空格）in this way would rely on their parents and have difficulty infinishing（空格） task alone, not to mention being independent. As a result, childrenbrought（空格） up under such condition will have a hard time in socializing for theylack（空格） the essential part of growth as well as the spirit of exploration.+ R5 k, l$ V( [! o% y; _+ I

Moreover,learning from their own mistakes can help children to establish self-confidenceand be more likely to succeed. If children only make mistakes without learningfrom （空格）it, they would forget it immediately and at next time, repeat the samemistake. Therefore, parents should guide children to analyze the reason fordoing（空格） things wrongly and summarize experience from it. Only in this way, canchildren（空格） reduce the chances of making more mistakes and gain self-confidence,which are important factors towards success.

lInconclusion, children will benefit a lot from making mistakes and learning from theirown mistakes. Hence, I agree that parents should allow children to make mistakesand（空格） learn from it.

很使劲找了，还是没语法错误，写的很好！
论述也很充分，另外，一定要记得敲空格键哦
加油！