寄托写作互改小组（5月11日开始）

秋雨荆州UID：2903781

感谢版友们一直以来对托福版的支持，跟月明同学讨论之后，决定从现在开始我来接过写作小组的任务。

独立的题目主要是写作机经，但实际题目不限，综合写作为TPO。每天都会练习独立写作，综合写作视版友需求大了，会找出一周的某一天专门练习。

如何参加作文互改活动
Step 1 在论坛开一个自己的备考贴，以后的作业都贴在后面，开贴格式：“【独立写作】XXX作业贴”
Step 2 根据当天的作业 写作文，修改，在word中查错，避免简单的拼写语法错误
Step 3 贴在自己的作文贴里，并在本帖回复，格式是：作业日期+交作业类型：独立+作文链接。不要直接在本帖中直接贴作业
Step 4 分组，分组信息在三楼
Step 5 分组后，修改与自己同组所有同学的作业，要求在第二天分组之前改完

如何占座以及什么是占座
有能力交作业，但无法在deadline之前交的人，在本帖回复，以示占座，基本享受和交作业者同等待遇。
占座者需在第二天中午12点之前交上作业吗，否则视为无效占座。
占座步骤
Step 1  在本帖回复，表示占座，内容是：我要占座+作业日期+作业类型：独立
Step 2  23:00分组后，修改同组同学的作业（不管最后是否交作业，都要改同组同学的作业！）
Step 3  贴上自己的作业，编辑修改自己的占座贴，把占座改为作业地址，并通知同组同学，不要贴新帖！
发现不及时改作业的同学，做停止分组处理，直到修改完毕，再能享受分组，希望大家能够尊重版友的劳动，互相监督！

考虑到大家的精力有限，按照交作业的顺序三人一组，遵循“三人行，必有我师”原则。鼓励大家多看同学的作文。如果大家备考时间较紧张，希望二人一组，请在每天占位都标明~楼主会尽量帮你们安排。

links：
写作小组作业讨论贴
IBT作文漫漫谈
托福综合写作误区解读+TPO22实例写作
新托福独立写作部分误区解读（范例分析版）
版主点评备份贴

沙发：每天作文题目。
板凳：每天分组。

Domo-kpUID：3255995

8.6占座

飘飘要考GREUID：3336836

求批改


Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents should spend more time playing games or sports activities than doing school work with their children.



From my perspective , I  fundamentally agree with the assertion that parents should spend more time playing games or sports activities than doing school work with their children.

Firstly , playing with their  children during their leisure time can enhance the relationship between the  family members. Since the hobbies the adults have differs from those that the children have .  Playing together provides an avenue for them to have something in common  . From my perspective , due to the pressure the adults have today , playing with their children is an access for relaxation . And during this time , not only can they play games together , but also make some precious memories .

What is more ,  during the time the parents play with the children , they can find out their children’s talents . Only  in that circumstances , can the parents know how to exploit their talents appropriately . If luckily , maybe one day their children will become a famous sportsman or a musician .

On the other hand , Studying is the children’ own stuff , they have no need to help them . Knowledge is updating everyday and the speed of updating is as fast as you can not imagine . Hence , they  can not help them forever . Because one day they will leave you to have their own life . Considering if they are not in the same city , when they have  a problem , how can their parents help to tackle it . In the long run , children have to study new things themselves . Thus the parents do not have to be with them while their children are studying .

In addition , leaving them alone when they are studying actually develops their abilities to study to some extent. Since there is nobody around them when they encounter problems , they have nothing to do but solve them alone . To be frank ,  being away from them when they study is actually help them .

To draw a conclusion , different parents have their different methods of teaching their children , we can not say which is right precisely . However , I always hold the belief  that for most of them  , Playing with their children is much more essential than being with them when studying .

Domo-kpUID：3255995

7.31 占座

rhino04UID：3445328

占座 肯定会写 明天早上交

rhino04UID：3445328

0724  作文

第一点先写换工作有利于发现自己真正喜欢什么
第二点写换工作有利于人脉和不同的经验
第三点接受不同的年轻人 也会对employer带来好处

https://bbs.gter.net/forum.php?mo ... xtra=#pid1777326936

rhino04UID：3445328

请问一下 如我我在三人组  我要改同组两人的么 还是A改B B改C C改A

秋雨荆州UID：2903781

南宫翊熙 发表于 2013-7-15 11:01
秋版，你没有给我7月14分组   

我现在是无组织人士

收到！

南宫翊熙UID：3334974

秋版，你没有给我7月14分组   

我现在是无组织人士

loveticcoUID：3402732

秋雨荆州 发表于 2013-7-15 09:54
请移步魔术君的帖子占座啦，从今天开始由她来负责写作小组咯

哦！这样。。。。。。

秋雨荆州UID：2903781

loveticco 发表于 2013-7-15 09:43
7.15独立写作loveticco占座。。

请移步魔术君的帖子占座啦，从今天开始由她来负责写作小组咯

loveticcoUID：3402732

7.15独立写作loveticco占座。。

bianzongaoUID：3001180

7.14
独立
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1599978-1-1.html
本帖收官！！继续努力！！

阿拉阿丁UID：3425431

7.14 占座。https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1586901-1-1.html

hongfanUID：3150284

7.14 https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1495662-1-1.html