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感谢版友们一直以来对托福版的支持,跟月明同学讨论之后,决定从现在开始我来接过写作小组的任务。

独立的题目主要是写作机经,但实际题目不限,综合写作为TPO。每天都会练习独立写作,综合写作视版友需求大了,会找出一周的某一天专门练习。

如何参加作文互改活动
Step 1 在论坛开一个自己的备考贴,以后的作业都贴在后面,开贴格式:“【独立写作】XXX作业贴”
Step 2 根据当天的作业 写作文,修改,在word中查错,避免简单的拼写语法错误
Step 3 贴在自己的作文贴里,并在本帖回复,格式是:作业日期+交作业类型:独立+作文链接。不要直接在本帖中直接贴作业
Step 4 分组,分组信息在三楼
Step 5 分组后,修改与自己同组所有同学的作业,要求在第二天分组之前改完

如何占座以及什么是占座
有能力交作业,但无法在deadline之前交的人,在本帖回复,以示占座,基本享受和交作业者同等待遇。
占座者需在第二天中午12点之前交上作业吗,否则视为无效占座。
占座步骤
Step 1  在本帖回复,表示占座,内容是:我要占座+作业日期+作业类型:独立
Step 2  23:00分组后,修改同组同学的作业(不管最后是否交作业,都要改同组同学的作业!)
Step 3  贴上自己的作业,编辑修改自己的占座贴,把占座改为作业地址,并通知同组同学,不要贴新帖!
发现不及时改作业的同学,做停止分组处理,直到修改完毕,再能享受分组,希望大家能够尊重版友的劳动,互相监督!

考虑到大家的精力有限,按照交作业的顺序三人一组,遵循“三人行,必有我师”原则。鼓励大家多看同学的作文。如果大家备考时间较紧张,希望二人一组,请在每天占位都标明~楼主会尽量帮你们安排。

links:
写作小组作业讨论贴
IBT作文漫漫谈
托福综合写作误区解读+TPO22实例写作
新托福独立写作部分误区解读(范例分析版)
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发表于 2013-5-11 10:11:23 |显示全部楼层
沙发是每天的题目

欢迎大家来写作讨论帖讨论如何破题~另外,昨天的写作总结已经写好,详情请看这里


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7.14

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: The most important investment for a big company is to improve the efficiency and proficiency of its employees.

7.13

TPO 15综合

7.12

TPO16综合写作

7.11

Many teachers assign homework to students every day. Do you think that daily homework is necessary for students? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

7.10

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
People care more about public recognition than about money, so even if no more money is given, public recognition can still make people work harder.

7.9作文题

Do you agree or disagree with the statement ?  the world is changing so quickly that people now are less happy or less satisfied than in the past ?

7.8作文题

Do you agree or disagree young people today are better able to make decisions for their own life than in the past

7.7作文题

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for schools to fund their students' social activities than to improve students’ meals.

7.6作文题

TPO 17综合写作

7.5作文题

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.

7.4作文题

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:  If parents want their children to perform well in school, they should limit the hours that their children spend watching TV.

7.3作文题

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is easier for parents to raise children nowadays than 50 years ago.


7.2 作文题

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Despite the fact that many countries say they care about environmental problems, the environmental situation will not improve significantly in the future.

7.1 作文题

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The place you choose to live has a greater effect on your overall happiness than the job.

6.30作文题

TPO 24 综合

6.29作文题

TPO 22 综合

6.28作文题(明后我们写两天综合)

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Young people today are more likely to help others than young people in the past.

6.27作文题

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is important to make sure that others know about your strengths and accomplishments; if you are not so, you will never be successful in life.

6.26作文题

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
An effective leader should try to make others feel that they are part of the decision making progress.

6.25作文题

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? "Cars (automobiles) have greater effects (influence) on society than airplanes." Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

6.24作文题

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Teachers had greater influence on young children in the past than today.

6.23作文题

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Competition among friends has negative effect on the friendship.

6.22作文题

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Leadership comes naturally: one cannot learn to be a leader.

6.21作文题

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The government and corporation should share all their scientific discoveries with other countries in the world.
Please use specific details and examples to support your opinion.

6.20作文题

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It’s impossible to succeed if one cannot accept criticism in teamwork.

6.19题目 tpo19综合写作

6.18题目 tpo18综合写作

6.17作文题(明后两天写综合~)

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
People care more about public recognition than about money, so even if no more money is given, public recognition can still make people work harder.


6.16作文题

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Movies and television have more negative effects than positive ones on young people's behavior.

6.15作文题

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
There is never a good reason to be impolite (rude) to another person.

6.14作文题

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is easier for more people now than in the past to get an education.

6.13作文题

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is the best way for teachers to make students more interested in a subject by explaining to them that this subject will help them in their life outside of the school.

6.12作文题

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important to choose friends with whom you can have fun than to choose friends that will help you when you need them.

6.11作文题

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is often not a good thing for people to move to a new town or a new country because of the loss of old friends.

6.10作文题

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: The most important investment for a big company is to improve the efficiency and proficiency of its employees.

6.9作文题

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? the growth of cities can be seen as the development of society

6.8作文题

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is important for government to protect wild animals and wilderness areas for the future generation.

6.7作文题

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Students should not take part-time while they are studying in universities.

6.6作文题

TPO20综合写作

6.5作文题:(下次我们练综合)

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In the busy and crowded world, we should not expect people to be polite to others.

6.4作文题:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In the past young people depended on their parents for making decisions. Today, young people are better able to make decisions on their own.

6.3作文题:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement that people should buy things made by their own country, even if things of other countries may cost less?

6.2作文题:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Students can get as many benefits from organization or club activities as they can get from their academic studies.

6.1作文题:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? We can learn about a person from the books and movies that person likes.(欢度儿童节!)

5.31作文题:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Young people should try different jobs before they decide which job or career they will do in the long term.


5.30综合作文题:

TPO21

5.29作文题:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for schools to fund their students' social activities than to improve students’ meals.

5.28作文题:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Working at home using computers or telephones is better than working in the office.

5.27作文题:

Nowadays it's easier to maintain health than the past

5.26作文题:

Which way do you think is the best for a student to make new friends, a. joing a sports team, b. participate in community activities, c. traveling

5.25作文题:
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
People should follow the ambitious dream or people should focus to achieve the realistic goals?

5.24作文题:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Most people can solve important problems in their lives by themselves or with the help of their families; help from the government is often unnecessary.

5.23作文题:

Do you agree or disagreewith the following statement:
It is more important for government to spend money to build art museums and music performance center than to build recreational facilities( such swimming pool, playground)

5.22综合作文题:

TPO23


5.21作文题:

Some people think university professors should spend more time doing research while others think they should spend more time educating students. What is your view?

5.20作文题:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: it is important to know about what is happening around the world, even if it doesn’t affect your personal lives.

5.19作文题:
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:  If parents want their children to perform well in school, they should limit the hours that their children spend watching TV.

5.18作文题:

Do you agree or disagreewith the following statement:It is better to relax by a movie or reading a book than doing physical exercise.

5.17作文题:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The most important characteristic for politics is to accept responsibility for mistake. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Do you agree or disagree?

5.16作文题:

Which kind of universities do you prefer, universities whose graduates can find good jobs or universities where there are famous professors?(再来个简单的吧)

5.15作文题:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide. (刁难了好几天了今天来个简单的~)

5.14作文题:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to learn about a foreign country is to read the newspapersand magazines from that country.

5.13作文题:

Do you agree or disagree with the statement ?  the world is changing so quickly that people now are less happy or less satisfied than in the past ?

5.12作文题:

Many teachers assign homework to students every day. Do you think that daily homework is necessary for students? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

5.11作文题:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Although science and technology will continue to improve, the most significant improvement for the quality of people’s lives have already taken place.

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板凳将会附上每天参与活动同学的互改分组

昨天的写作总结在这里

7.14分组
1. copyzero2 zen赵天泽
2. 阿拉阿丁  bianzongao
3. 南宫翊熙 hongfan

7.13分组

1. 南宫翊熙 zen赵天泽
2. dongfangbaobei bianzongao 阿之
3. 阿拉阿丁 max0505

12日综合不互改了,我会帮你们都看一下

7.11分组

1. Yornan loveticco
2. 南宫翊熙 copyzero2
3. 欣儿7777777 zen赵天泽
4. 阿拉阿丁 bianzongao

7.10分组

1. 南宫翊熙 zen赵天泽
2. bianzongao 阿拉阿丁
3. 小麦爱自由 max0505
4.

7.9分组

1. Yornan zen赵天泽
2. copyzero2 w_wby
3. 南宫翊熙 小麦爱自由
4. 阿拉阿丁 max0505
5. bianzongao Jerry的小鱼宝宝

7.8分组

1. qwe1__rty2 copyzero2
2. 南宫翊熙 zen赵天泽
3. 小麦爱自由 bianzongao
4. 阿拉阿丁 Yornan

7.7分组

1. 南宫翊熙 zen赵天泽
2. qwe1__rty2 hongfan bianzongao

7.6分组

1. copyzero2  zen赵天泽
2. 阿拉阿丁 小麦爱自由  
3. bianzongao 小麦爱自由  

7.5分组

1. 阿拉阿丁 破格
2. 南宫翊熙 zen赵天泽
3. 小麦爱自由 yonggg
4. bianzongao 秋雨荆州

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IBT Zeal AW小组活动奖 AW作文修改奖 US-applicant

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本帖最后由 qwe1__rty2 于 2013-5-11 12:26 编辑

速度占一个5-11


http://bbs.gter.net/forum.php?mo ... p;page=1&extra=

done! 还是超时了啊。
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IBT Zeal GRE斩浪之魂 Golden Apple 分享之阳 新任版主 寄托兑换店纪念章 US-applicant

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占座帖~
我这周主要的任务是做TPO听力,
对T的作文还不是很了解,昨天看了一部分秋雨的帖子,还没有全部看完。

先占座啦啦啦
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占座帖~
我这周主要的任务是做TPO听力,
对T的作文还不是很了解,昨天看了一部分秋雨的帖子,还没有全部看 ...

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速度占一个5-11

欢迎欢迎啊!期待看你的作文呀!
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5.11
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中秋勋章 备考先锋 US-applicant

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5.11
http://bbs.gter.net/forum.php?mo ... xtra=#pid1776964818

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当初的梦想 发表于 2013-5-11 11:51
占一楼 我也是5.18考

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llsss_1234 发表于 2013-5-11 11:57
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嘻嘻,欢迎!

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AUandNZ Award 烤鸭大厨 Golden Apple 美版守护者 寄托之心勋章 寄托与我 Aquarius水瓶座 寄托优秀版主 AW作文修改奖 IBT Zeal IBT Smart IBT Elegance GRE斩浪之魂 GRE守护之星 分享之阳 德意志之心 新加坡SG ADVISOR 新加坡SG ASSISTANT 新加坡SG APPLICANT 寄托兑换店纪念章 2015 US-applicant 寄托16周年纪念勋章 荣誉版主

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翼_yoyoyoyoy 发表于 2013-5-11 12:46
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手冢队长,加油加油!

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中秋勋章 备考先锋 US-applicant

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秋雨荆州 发表于 2013-5-11 12:46
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噗 被看穿了。。。= w= 我正在研究你的头像。。。。。。

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备考先锋 AW小组活动奖 IBT Zeal IBT Smart Virgo处女座 满1年在任版主 US-applicant

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