9.19
T1.录音不怎么流畅啊~~磕磕巴巴的~~
一些细节上:TOEFL很难,所以I had prepared it for quite a few months(quite a few 表示很多的意思,能够衬托出考试的难) (录音里只听到了 a few, 就想起加上quite会更好些)
T2. most of their advices was(单复数弄错了)
T3. ok
T4. ok
不好意思,今天才给你9.17号的作业,再次感谢你的支持和理谢!
TAST1, 内容很好,特别有说服力,这点是我需要学习的。应是 take >>>>as an example
TAST2,注意insteresting发音,其它都很好
TAST3 two reasons
TAST4主要内容都有涉及到,如果能流利点就更好
TAST5注意deadline发音,另外我不知道可不可以用if i were the man但我觉得用i suggest the man 会更好,仅供参考,谢谢