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本帖最后由 ncnys 于 2011-3-4 07:11 编辑
Teachers play an essential role in every one's life. Teaching us how to discern right and wrong, how to read a long passage, and even how to count stuffs in the room, teachers offer abundant knowledge to us which is necessary in our lifelives. As a result (Therefore), the quality of education relies a lot on teachers' behavior.(good expression!) Someone believes that it is of importance to increase the salary of the teacher, attempting to raise the passion of teachers who have work dealing with piles of things about young students. However, as far as I am concerned, the key to level up our education could not be a raise in teachers' salaries, instead, the quality of the teachers, facilities of school, and the collaboration of parents and teachers really counts for education.
The first factor coming to my mind is that the quality of the teacher affects the outcome of education. Good teacher distinguish themselves with athe perfect teaching skill, a brandbroad range of knowledge, and a well-being personality. Take a teacher I admire most, called Jane, for instance, being my primary school teacher, she always told us how to behave in the public with deep patience, though the school kids were so naughty to interrupt her speech. Moreover, with a wide range of knowledge, she could almost answer whatever questions we raised. Listening, observing, and teaching us make her a popular teacher among our classmates, who deeply know what we really require. Therefore a competent teacher could help to improve education这段主要讲教师对于education的重要性,但是感觉跟第一段有点重复?并且与topic的联系不是特别大?
To back up my points of view, it is relevantreasonable to conclude that the modern facilities of school also weighs in improving the education, such as the swimming pool, the sports stadium, and the play ground. Indeed, the quality of education not only depends on refined teachers, but also need the high qualified facilities to develop the body of students. To plus, being a assistance for a distinguished teacher, a library with abundant books covering different fields is necessary to expand students' horizon.
Adding more credibility to my argument is that both the parents and the school share responsibility to ensure the high quality of education. At school, students could be conducted by their teachers on the study and the social behavior. InAt home, parents are the most direct and crucial teacher of the children. Consequently, the corporation of parents and teachers, which including communicate about the state of the kid regularly and sharing the similar education ideas, would prove the quality of education largely.
In conclusion, the best approach to level up education could not be a large amount of money offer to teachers. The decent quality of both teachers and the facilities in school could make the students well-educated, and the cooperation between parents and teachers would advance the education as well.
蓝色的部分用词很妙,值得学习!
感觉全文讲的是什么对improve education是很重要的。我觉得topic的题眼在一个best,如果同意观点,那么就要举出增加工资和其它方式相比有什么better处;反之,则需列举增加工资不如其他方法有效,或者equally important。。。突然发现我自己也没有比较。。。。不知道这想法对不对哈。。与LZ共勉!加油! |
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