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1.30 Do you agree or disagree: people should live in the city or country all life instead of moving to another place
In the lately published China Daily, the most hot-debated issue is whether people should live in the city or country all life, as the index of people moving both between cities and from country to city has been dramatically increased during this period. With a further discussion about the topic, people are arguing if people are necessary to do this kind of movement in their lives. As far as I am concerned, I would definitely support and encourage people to live a life more mobile rather than to stay in the city or country all life.

To begin with, to every aspect, moving to another place leads you to a better life. For those people who were born in a small town, as all kinds of facilities are under-developed, they are not able to get regular education, some of them are even forced by their own parents to drop out from school and help the farm work. What’s worse, there also doesn’t have a high-standard hospital to heal people’s various diseases, the locals have to go to the city miles away to visit the authoritative doctors. From above, if people want to perfect their lives, the first step is to move to the city, to a place which is more developed than the town. The city provides various first-class schools to them for education, they can gain knowledge and become more competitive when they graduate. It ensures people to find a certain job, earning a relatively satisfactory salary. Also, as the city is highly developed, it owns more advanced facilities. People are able to watch an IMAX movie in the nearby cinema, to go to work simply by taking a subway. In a word, people could change and improve his/her life by moving to another place.

Moreover, to some degree, we regard this kind of movement as a re-planning for one person’s life. Although people own steady jobs and live happily with their relatives, some of them are just not satisfied about it. They may pursue for another job, be unpleasant about the place’s environment. In another word, when a person can afford to modify his/her life, moving to another place is the way. Within this kind of movement, people are able to create a new plan for his/her latter life. As everything would have a new start after the movement, people can make choices for themselves all over again. Despite of choosing houses or applying for jobs, it’s a life start over again for people themselves. People may take this chance to correct the mistakes s/he ever made and try to be a better person. Take myself as an example, I used to be an unsociable girl, and didn’t have any contact with my classmates and even do not have any friends. When my family moves to another city, I made up my mind to be open, and finally became a popular girl.

With all what I have mentioned above, I recommend people to move to another place, whether it’s short or long term, it is worthy spending time on it. The movement helps you to broaden your horizon, to see a better world, to be a better person.

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1.28 The telephone has a greater effect on people's lives than the television do.

As asked which invention has changed our life more, people all have hesitations on this topic. In the recent survey from China Daily, the various answers can be generally concluded into two main standpoints. One of the two most influential inventions is the telephone, as it has shortened the interpersonal distance by making it possible for getting in touch with people afar. The other is television, as it has enlarged people’s horizon by showing diverse knowledge on a single screen. Frankly speaking, in my eyes, we can not easily judge whose importance that the two has brought to us is greater, as they all do a significant effect on human’s modernization.

To begin with, the time the telephone was invented, it redefined the meaning of distance, and it made distance not that troublesome. In the earlier years, people use letters to contact with others who live in distant. In ancient China, it would take months for letters to reach to the receiver’s hands, and it would take another months for the sender to get the letter wrote by the receiver. That is to say, if one person wants to invite his friend to enjoy flowers in the summer and writes a letter for invitation, the friends would at least arrive there in autumn, and there no longer has flowers to appreciate. As the widespread of the use of telephone, people are able to get in touch with others simply by dialing his/her numbers on a telephone. Through years, the telephone itself also inspires many other inventions such as the Internet, as it was based on the telephone to connect computers initially.

On the other hand, the television’s emergence opens a brand new world to people. Before its coming, people generally learn news from local newspapers, although there have some daily-published newspapers, the latest news on the paper would be hours before. From the television’s glasslike screen, people can get the latest news both domestic and abroad without the need to buy newspapers everyday. For the youth, the television also brings good to them. Before the invention, children have little entertainment, and live everyday boring. The television shows cartoons and interesting programs, children can get a lot of fun from it. Moreover, television provides a place that can bring everything to everyone, including new cultures, new techniques, etc. That is to say, Chinese can learn to cook Italian dishes by watching certain program on TV rather than flying to Italy to study it particularly. To draw a conclusion, people can gain more knowledge and understand the world better by seating in front of the television.

From what I have mentioned above, people can’t determine either telephone or television has a greater effect on people’s lives. The telephone brings us the convenience of communication, while the television brings a whole new world to us, both the two are deserved to be regard as the inventions changed our lives most.

随处发疯：今天的放题很不爽，没有饱感～～～明天去久光血拼，榨干我家财产！！！

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5# 我是chineselady
唉，爸妈要我考100+，没想法了...

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花花不是考完了吗还考的不错的。。。

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1.23 不同兴趣,人格的人能不能做朋友?  

When it comes to friends, different people show diverse inclinations on their friends’ styles. As the old saying goes, “people can have true friendship only with those who speak the same language with them”, many people hold the idea to make friends with the same interests and personalities. However, more and more people today tend to think whether we can build a friendship with those whose interests and personalities are totally different from ours. Based on my abundant experience, I agree that people with distinct interests and personalities can make friends with each other, and they can even make the friendship everlasting.（第一段写得很好，我就不说了，用词很diverse，呵呵学习了）
To begin with, friends with various interests and personalities can enrich your life. For people with different interests, they are good at things that you are not interested in, so when necessary they can use their unique ability to help you.（这句有点笼统） For instance, as I know little about cooking, when I get a friend who cooks well and （we）live together, （加个fortunately 那么能生动点）it makes my life more comfortable as（since感觉舒服点） I always have the chance to enjoy her palatable dishes and at the same time，（to，逗号去掉，那么才能和前面的chance to 平行）learn cooking from her. (个人感觉句子有点长 尝试一下用更加简洁的方式表达)So a friend with diverse interests really helps（give us favor） your life（这个表达怪怪的） and also let you learn more. For people with different personalities, they view things in various viewpoints, so they can help you understand facts（感觉这个词怪怪的要不用world） more comprehensively. When one thing occurs, we used to judge it due to our own point, if you are with a friend who differs from you, s/he can bring a brand new way to handle the case, and it more or less influences you and extends your thinking. (感觉这里可以分成两段。一段时你们兴趣不同，导致skill不同，第二段写：世界观不同，这样写就好很多了)

On the other hand, as people with diverse interests and personalities tend to make frictions more easily, it is a good chance to train ourselves in such a friendship. （我会as去掉，后面用therefore，只是我感觉啊）When we enter in schools, we meet with various kinds of people and make friends with them. We all have to tolerate those days when we know each other better and have frictions （可以换词了debate）more often, but if we really want to continue our relationships, we have to train ourselves some abilities. We should learn to listen, think on （用from吧？）friends’ viewpoint, and also learn to tolerate and accept our friends’ weak points. By the time we are in good command of these, we can not only make the friendship ever last, but also be able to handle any person and situation. （可以谢谢improve my communication skill）
To sum up, based on these points I mentioned above, I do think it is good for people to make friends with different interests and personalities. It can broaden your eyes since they know things you don’t know, it can also help you to build a better personality as you have to learn to deal with various people and situations. （可以说以后进入社会后会有用）So don’t hesitate to make friends with various kinds of people.（这句很好）

总结：你写得很好，条理很是清晰，就是一些措辞要加强，呵呵，我作文写得不好，也只能大概给你评到这个份上了。


By Fatrui

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2# 我是chineselady
翠花姐～我是啊～
咋一学期没来变样了呢～

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是我们美利坚的花花吗。。