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My name is XXX. Iplan to study the MBA program of University of Saskatchewan. Beloware my study plan in Canada and my career plan in China.


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My education and professional backgrounds
In2006, I obtained a diploma in Computer Technology from East China NormalUniversity, worked as a data operator at the current American-invested companythat mainly engages in the development and sales of software products and startedto study at Shanghai International Studies University majoring in English. I waspromoted to the project manager in 2010. I develop project plans, calculateproject cost/time, cultivate and strengthen co-worker and client relationships,and manage a team of analysts and data operators to accomplish various projects.In 2010, I obtained my Bachelor of Arts degree in English from ShanghaiInternational Studies University. The English proficiency credentials increasemy strength and the competitiveness in the company.

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Why I choose this country, school and the program?

MBAoriginates from North America. Canada is rich in educational resources and outstandingin educational quality. It is a more cozy and harmonious environment than othercountries for intensive studying. These are quite essential for me to study ina peaceful and trustful environment.

The University of Saskatchewan is a public institution inCanada. The MBA degree that it offers is recognized internationally. Furthermore, the career-based and multi-disciplinarycourses provide students a comprehensive understanding of business fields groundedin practice. The highly international faculty team includes award winningteachers who have practical experiences from global companies. The diversified instructionmethods such as case studies have direct linkages to real organizationalpractice. These opportunities and academic resources are exactly what I need torealize my career goal as a senior manager in China.
The MBA International program of Universityof Saskatchewan requires tuition fees as affordable as $29,000 for internationalstudents. Besides, the program can be completed within 2 years and even oneyear depending on a student’s study pace. Thus, the MBA International programof University of Saskatchewan is undoubtedly a right choice for me.


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My overall educational objective
My educational objectiveis to construct and possess a systematic and practical knowledge system ofbusiness fields such as international business, finance, accounting, marketing andmanagement information system. I will take 3 courses per semester and completethe program in two years. Besides studying advanced management knowledge andskills, I will grasp the wonderful opportunity to cultivate a global thinkingway. I will combine my previous professional experience with the advancedknowledge and skills to generate my own management discipline and skills. Thus,I will be prepared to realize my career goal in China. Below is my study planfrom this fall to 2013.


  

Sep, 2011


  
  

Sep-Dec 2011


  
  

Jan-Apr 2012


  
  

May-Jun 2012


  
  

July-Aug 2012


  
  

Sep-Dec 2012


  
  

Jan-Apr 2013


  
  MBA 830 Social Issues in Business
  
  

MBA 817 Global Organizational  Behaviour


  
  

MBA 835 International  Business


  
  

MBA 841 International  Marketing


  
  MBA 848 AA-ZZ Travel Study Tour
  
  

MBA 810 Statistics &  Quantitative Methods for Business


  
  

MBA 815 Business Policy  and Strategy


  
  

  
  

MBA 866 Managing  Information Systems


  
  

MBA 840 Strategic  Marketing


  
  

MBA 891  International Financial Management


  
  

MBA 865 Project  Management


  
  

MBA 816 Production and  Operations Management


  
  

MBA 833 Financial  Management


  
  

  
  

  
  

MBA 843 Strategic Human  Resource Management


  
  


  
  

  
  

MBA 832 Accounting  for Managers


  
  


  




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Why I am not pursuing less expensive alternatives in China
The MBA education inChina is as young as 10 years, while it has been over 100 years in NorthAmerica. The MBA education in China tends to apply a lecturing teaching style,while the MBA education in North America applies various methods such as interactivediscussion, student analysis and real case studies, etc. The MBA program isconducted by leading industry experts worldwide and is taken by students with differentcultural backgrounds. Obviously, the more diversified in background thestudents have, the more they learn from their differences.


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The ties I have in China that will lead me to return to China following mycompletion of studies
The family bonding always matters most. My parents arearound 55 years old now. As the single child of the family, I have the firmwish and responsibility to accompany and take care of them after my graduation.My root is in China. Here I have already developed long standing client andcoworkers relationships. These are my strong supporters and valuable human resourcesin China. What’s more, I harvested plenty of friendship which can providefavorable and familiar circumstances for my career and life. These preciousresources are the bases for me to accomplish my career objective to be a seniormanager in China.


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The importance of this Canadian degree that will increase my chances in theChinese labor market
The industry and economy in China are developing at ahigh speed. Observing the industrial and technical labor intensive marketsituation, I realize there is a tendency that senior managers who haveexcellent management skills will be in high demand in China.
Although China has a lot of
senior managers, it still lacks excellent seniormanagers with international background who embrace global thinking ways andunderstand current business practices. According to a survey from DHDConsulting, China has a strong demand of MBA students with internationalbackground, as many as 75,000 people in the next 10 years. The competitivenessof entering recognized business schools in North America makes the supply ofthe MBA students far less than the demand of those students. Therefore, the MBAdegree will definitely increase my competitive strength in China.





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Futurecareer plan when return
AfterI graduate from the University of Saskatchewan , since I am familiar with the ITindustry and the city of Shanghai, I will seek jobs in the top IT or electronicproducts companies such as Intel and Philips in the Pudong financial districtin Shanghai. I will take full advantage of my human relationships resources inShanghai to develop my career plan to be a senior manager by obtaining latestand most advanced technical knowledge and experience as well as making friendswith the elites in the industry.

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发表于 2011-6-13 16:47:04 |只看该作者
27# cici_57  
告诉你个好消息,酒店机票没有作废,这就是我消失1周多的原因,28号下午他把签证快递到我手,我拎着包就出门赶飞机了,然后赶上了~
zhoujiayi 发表于 2011-6-13 16:34


厉害!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 再CONG一个!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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发表于 2011-6-13 16:36:48 |只看该作者
32# alicecarol 哈哈,这个方法我本来想用的哎,说我在中国有个未婚妻,所以肯定会回来

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29# bombuebue 其实你网上可以搜到模板的,我就是搜到了那个模板,然后照着写的。那模板我记得就有2页长。

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乃看乃看
赤果果的性别歧视!!!!!鄙视大使馆!!!!
LZ乃的tie加个未婚夫吧
祝好运啦!!
来加拿大上学,厨艺变好了,生活能力提高了,办签证、报税都能自己弄,但是不会学习了,囧= =||

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27# cici_57
告诉你个好消息,酒店机票没有作废,这就是我消失1周多的原因,28号下午他把签证快递到我手,我拎着包就出门赶飞机了,然后赶上了~

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发表于 2011-6-13 15:56:37 |只看该作者
对的我是女生。

好感谢大家的建议,正调档准备7月底二签,加油!

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发表于 2011-6-13 14:58:23 |只看该作者
天啊,3页~太给力了~

如果这次被拒我也写长点

The woods are lovely, dark and deep
But I have promises to keep
And miles to go before I sleep
And miles to go before I sleep

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发表于 2011-6-13 14:01:24 |只看该作者
我也分这5点写的,基本上每项的观点也和楼主一样,我比楼主废话更多,5号字体我写了3张A4...所以我觉得长度不是问题。
楼主经历和我也一样哎,06年毕业今年准备出去,可能是MBA课程的关系吧,我是计算机硕士。
能给 ...
zhoujiayi 发表于 2011-6-13 11:21


楼主的女僧吧?

传说中的性别歧视么???
来加拿大上学,厨艺变好了,生活能力提高了,办签证、报税都能自己弄,但是不会学习了,囧= =||

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25# cici_57  =。=这是在期待我出现嘛...
zhoujiayi 发表于 2011-6-13 13:46


想到你那作废的酒店和机票...

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25# cici_57 =。=这是在期待我出现嘛...

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对,我是4月26递签,5月28日拿到签证的。
zhoujiayi 发表于 2011-6-13 11:28


你粗线了...

BIG CONG!

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发表于 2011-6-13 11:30:57 |只看该作者
对,我是4月26递签,5月28日拿到签证的。
zhoujiayi 发表于 2011-6-13 11:28

Huge cong啊。。。沾喜气了~

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发表于 2011-6-13 11:28:15 |只看该作者
对,我是4月26递签,5月28日拿到签证的。

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发表于 2011-6-13 11:25:41 |只看该作者
你拿到visa了?
CaAm 发表于 2011-6-13 11:24

同问~
一年里有那么一个月,一起旅游一起散步,就够了~

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