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Along with the ever-increasingly pace of industrialization,environmental problems are being a threat to undermine our prosperous andcontented life. And wilderness areas in world fail to escape by sheer luck. Toachieve sustainable development and avoid economic and academic loss,government should take some measures to protect these areas.(全赞同?)
Firstly, preservation for remote areas will contribute to the protection of whole ecologic system in the world, since the overall ecologicsystem is composed by many partial ecologic systems which interact closely. As nowadays environmental problems have never been worse before, wilderness areas,perhaps the last beauty for human beings, are facing more and more threats. Manypeople may think the areas of wild forest are so remote that only a few peoplelive there, environment there must be quite well. Disappointingly but truly, contaminatedwater from the upper course of the river, over hunting, even poaching, etc. are destroying environment in these areas. We can see no further than the Dunhuang district, a remote place in northwest of China forexample. Dunhuang is used to be a beautiful and long-history place next to Ta KaLa Ma GanDesert, however, due to over exploit of its resources for developing travelcause, its environment is being destroyed-- rivers become draught-up there , lakesgradually disappear, desert invades more and more land, and many species dieout.(恩,现在的敦煌是publicly ownedwilderness areas,但古代的敦煌不是.它的沙漠化不是因为当时政府因为它太偏远而不保护它造成的,而是因为太过繁荣,资源利用过分造成的.这个例子不恰当.)Actually, there are so many remote areas all over the world are experiencing such deteriorating. Hence, it is necessary for government toprotect these areas; otherwise, deterioration of environmental condition of wildernessareas will affect other partial systems and finally the whole ecologic system
Further, to preserve wilderness areas has value both fromeconomic and academic aspects. As for the economic value, it is no surprise forus that most remote areas are abundant with energy sources and mineralresources, such as coal, oil, iron and aluminum.(晕,保护跟开发有什么关系?保护的越好矿就越多?保护的不好矿就飞了?) As nowadays most countries arefacing potential resource crisis, such areas may greatly alleviate the pressingsituation. Moreover, many valuable wild plants that are used to make medicineusually live in these remote areas. And in fact some of these plants can onlybe found in remote areas, since they have weak adaptation to other environment.So, if remote areas are polluted, these plants may die out. (这也是幻觉.真的有经济利益,那地就不会荒凉了...就算污染了还能人工养殖么...)While, concerningthe academic value, the remote areas may offer us evidence about the change ofspecies and the evolution of earth, since they are not destroyed by humanactivities.From these precious evidence and materials, scientists could studythe truth of the Earth as well as life. (恩,这个很有道理,值得借鉴.所谓原生态,才是那些破地的真正的卖点.) Hence, we will benefit a lot from preservingremote areas.
From the discussion above, we(个人觉得不要WE的好...) know that preservation forremote areas are fairly necessary, and then come the question, what’s theproper role of government in such activities? The answer is that government should lead public in protecting remote areas. The reason is that: for onething, public’s awareness can only be fully aroused by means of propaganda. Withoutthe very process of stimulation, the public will continuously take for granted the deforestation, desertification, unscrupulous floods and so on. And only government owes such a sweeping influence on the whole society. For the other thing, by making laws, such as the Wildness Act of 1964, only government possesses the power to force public to stop artificial devastation of the natural state ofthese areas. Obviously, individuals, groups or many other communities have nosuch authority. So, government should call for the whole society pay attentionto the Earth we live on, and engage in protection of the Earth we live on.(恩,说明为什么government, rather than sth else, should do this,还是很好的展开)
In sum, as damage of the remote areas will not only affectthe whole ecologic systems, but also make us suffer an economic and academicloss. Hence, it is quite necessary to preserve such areas. And governmentshould lead the public join in the activity in environment protecting. Althoughsuch protection may not bring significant profit soon, this will benefit theenvironment and life there, and in turn, human beings as well.
(本文最大的问题是把wildness areas的范围缩小化了.谁说遥远的野外就一定是森林,沼泽,湖泊呢?荒漠,戈壁,苔原难道就不是么?那么这样的areas也需要保护么?为什么? 这才是这个题目有意思的地方) |
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