issue38 [OB小组]第7次作业_stonescj-书本和电视

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TOPIC: ISSUE38 - "In the age of television, reading books is not as important as it once was. People can learn as much by watching television as they can by reading books."
1. 电视很重要
2. 但是电视取代不了书本的地位
3. 应该综合利用

Nowadays television has takes the absolute advantages over books and people could learn more from television. Nevertheless, television could not take the place of the documental records especially book as a way of learning, it is necessary to make a balance between them.

On the one hand, no one can deny that the television has changes our life more vivid and convenient. It is a great source of political, economic, social and cultural information for citizens in the world. Television make us could get the latest news happened around the world as long as control the TV robot. As to government politicians, it is a good approach to place their ideas and set up a claim to the civilian on television. As to common people, it is true and properly beneficial that the programs such as cartoon, situation comedy, and show are actual propitious to people who need relax after a whole day taunt work, besides, family members could build up stronger sensations by sitting around the television to see and critic some programs. In addition, with the soaring of science and technology, it is entirely possible that people could interact with the master of ceremonies on the television through mobile or other communication implements to express their ideas. As a result, television plays an important role in our daily life and nearly all people can not live without television.

On the other hand, even though television has improved quality of our daily life as a means of entertainment instead of education, the most important method to get knowledge is book all the same. As one of the most famous educators Bacon once said (I paraphrase),"Book is the resource of human civilization." It is known that book is the most loyal friend to company with us all the time. Book is not only the oldest manner of scholars to note their ideas and innovation but also the most common method of teachers to inoculate them with knowledge. In fact, almost schools in the world especially primary school are use books to educate students. According to a newest investigation of Peking University, nearly 85% educators and parents are totally agree with that the school should still use books rather than television in fundamental teaching. Only in this way can children concentrate on study and exclude various allures such as games and funny cartoon from television.

Furthermore, according to the advantages of television and book, it is difficult for us to choose one of them and quit the other, actually, the best way is to make a balance between them. In fact, we can introduce to education realm and utilize television reasonably to service for education. Above all, television could incite students' interests to study such as language due to its vivid cartoon, and teacher could communicate more convenient. Moreover, many actual techniques especially experiment, only television could make students to understand it clearly. Consequently, more and more people realize the predominance of television that introduce it into modern education.

As what are mentioned above, we can conclusion that both book and television are effective ways to attain information and technology. Only we make a balance between them can improve the  modernization of human beings.

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TOPIC: ISSUE38 - "In the age of television, reading books is not as important as it once was. People can learn as much by watching television as they can by reading books."
1. 电视很重要    2. 但是电视取代不了书本的地位     3. 应该综合利用

Nowadays television has takes(taken) the absolute advantages over books and people could learn more from television. Nevertheless, television could not take the place of the documental records especially book as a way of learning, it is necessary to make a balance between them.//开头简单明了hoho

On the one hand, no one can deny that the television has changes our life more vivid and convenient（意思明白，不过有点怀疑语法上是不是有点问题。改为这样好不： has changed our life into a more vivid and convenient mode.）. It is a great source of political, economic, social and cultural information for citizens in the world. Television make（makes） us could get（这样总觉得有点chin-english使得我们能够，enable us to get） the latest news happened around the world as long as control（cotroling） the TV robot. As to government politicians, it is a good approach to place their ideas and set up a claim to the civilian on television. As to common people, it is true and properly beneficial that the programs such as cartoon, situation comedy, and show are actual propitious to people who need relax after a whole day taunt（tart紧张的？） work, besides, family members could build up stronger sensations by sitting around the television to see and critic some programs. In addition, with the soaring of science and technology好，脱离了陈腐的development, it is entirely possible that people could interact with the master of ceremonies on the television through mobile or other communication implements to express their ideas. As a result, television plays an important role in our daily life and nearly all people can not live without television.

On the other hand, even though television has improved quality of our daily life as a means of entertainment instead of education, the most important method to get knowledge is book all the same. As one of the most famous educators Bacon once said (I paraphrase),"Book is the resource of human civilization." It is known that book is the most loyal friend to company with us all the time. Book is not only the oldest manner of scholars to note their ideas and innovation but also the most common method of teachers to inoculate them with knowledge.这个不错，本来我也想写结果写着写着就忘了这句了-_- In fact, almost schools in the world especially primary school are use books to educate students. According to a newest investigation of Peking University, nearly 85% educators and parents are totally agree with that the school should still use books rather than television in fundamental teaching. Only in this way can children concentrate on study and exclude various allures such as games and funny cartoon from television.(调查是编的吧hoho我也学到了。最后那个倒装不错捏)

Furthermore, according to the advantages of television and book, it is difficult for us to choose one of them and quit the other, actually, the best way is to make a balance between them.（要平衡的模板写法hoho） In fact, we can introduce to education realm and utilize television reasonably to service for education. Above all, television could incite students' interests to study such as language due to its vivid cartoon, and teacher could communicate more convenient. Moreover, many actual techniques especially experiment, only television could make students to understand it clearly. Consequently, more and more people realize the predominance of television that introduce it into modern education.

As what are mentioned above, we can conclusion（conclude） that both book and television are effective ways to attain information and technology. Only we make a balance between them can improve the  modernization of human beings.
有点小小的问题，我写的时候，考虑了很久，是写电视带来的重要还是关注电视对学习的影响
后来我选择的是电视在学习方面，而不是泛泛的说他的好处。所以，我会觉得你的第二段写的宽了点，而且和后面的平衡有点接不上
为什么要平衡，既然要平衡，就要突出他在学习上的好处，这样才有平衡的理由。 当然，也是因为我放弃了这种写法所以才会觉得有点问题。
句子依旧很漂亮hoho  继续学习

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Nowadays television has takes the absolute advantages over books and people could learn more from television. Nevertheless, television could not take the place of the documental records especially book as a way of learning, it is necessary to make a balance between them.

On the one hand, no one can deny that the television has changes our life more vivid and convenient. It is a great source of political, economic, social and cultural information for citizens in the world(这句连续几个political, economic, social and cultural读起来感觉很累). Television make us could get the latest news happened around the world as long as control the TV robot. As to government politicians, it is a good approach to place their ideas and set up a claim to the civilian on television. As to common people, it is true and properly beneficial that the programs such as cartoon, situation comedy, and show are actual propitious to people who need relax after a whole day taunt work, besides, family members could build up stronger sensations by sitting around the television to see and critic some programs. In addition, with the soaring of science and technology, it is entirely possible that people could interact with the master of ceremonies on the television through mobile or other communication implements to express their ideas. As a result, television plays an important role in our daily life and nearly all people can not live without television.

On the other hand, even though television has improved quality of our daily life as a means of entertainment instead of education, the most important method to get knowledge is book all the same. As one of the most famous educators Bacon once said (I paraphrase),"Book is the resource of human civilization." It is known that book is the most loyal friend to company with us all the time. Book is not only the oldest manner of scholars to note their ideas and innovation but also the most common method of teachers to inoculate them with knowledge. In fact, almost schools in the world especially primary school are use books to educate students. According to a newest investigation of Peking University, nearly 85% educators and parents are totally agree with that the school should still use books rather than television in fundamental teaching(这个调查编的不好,毕竟中国还没发展到那个水平,即使85%同意,也不可能有这样的条件,可以换一个例子). Only in this way can children concentrate on study and exclude various allures such as games and funny cartoon from television(前面说电视好就好在可以提供cartoon等等,这里又说要抵制allures as cartoons,换个东西举例比较好,要不前面就换成是discovery不要举cartoon例子).

Furthermore, according to the advantages of television and book, it is difficult for us to choose one of them and quit the other, actually, the best way is to make a balance between them. In fact, we can introduce to education realm and utilize television reasonably to service for education. Above all, television could incite students' interests to study such as language due to its vivid cartoon, and teacher could communicate more convenient. Moreover, many actual techniques especially experiment, only television could make students to understand it clearly. Consequently, more and more people realize the predominance of television that introduce it into modern education.

As what are mentioned above, we can conclusion that both book and television are effective ways to attain information and technology. Only we make a balance between them can improve the  modernization of human beings.

有点感觉前面电视很重要说明的很充分,但是后面说取代不了书本地位又不如前面论证充分,最后综合利用的观点提出的很好,折中了一下,我要好好学习 :)

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