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(依据奔跑蜗牛作文小组的模板来开办这个小组)

注意每周三、六晚10：00安排拍文顺序和发布下一次作业！

小组目标：cracking ibt essay
小组宗旨：互助-助人-助己
行动准则：做好，好好做，做得好
终极目标： let us elevate ourself  , let us chase our dream,let us make a bright future

互改作文步骤：
1.加入群：（群号76205925），修改群名片（在对话框上面最右面的一个图标“设置”—“修改自己的群名片”）群名片的名字与寄托ID一致（如：奔跑蜗牛）

2.发作业：  每周三、六安排拍文顺序和发布下一次作业，晚22：00交
  每次作业发布和拍文顺序都会现在群里，帖子（群邮件）发布，注意查收

3.交作业：自己开个新帖题目为
  [6,7月份 cracking ibt essay! 小组写作组某某某的第几次作业]
（如 6,7月份 cracking ibt essay! 小组写作组某某某的第四次作业]）
  然后把作业连接粘贴在主贴报名的楼层（在你报名的楼层下面有个“编辑”的选项，点开编辑就可以编辑自己的帖子了）详见主贴别人的样板
（群中发布：寄托名+发帖楼层）
  如:  zhuyongchaochao+6#

4.改作业：
要求：
      大家按时交作业，严格执行
      请假---请在报名楼层（该交作业的地方）写上：
      请假  第某某次作业
      晚交---请在报名楼层（该交作业的地方）写上：
      晚交第某某次作业但是最迟于什么时间之前交
      修改讨论

作文题目就是题库和机经  o(∩_∩)o...

宣布三大纪律，八项注意。

rule 1 : English first in the "cracking ibt essay"
rule 2 : change your name to your testing date
rule 3 : kick your ass after three times postpone homework

连接：  〖TOEFL 2009上半年-Dark_Tournament写作组 https://bbs.gter.net/thread-911133-1-1.html

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【目标】

竭尽全力！释放全能力！独立写作满分 +综合写作冲刺高分满分!!!
（凡是在5月中旬前参加考试的组员们，烦请于考试后写一个系统的总结留给尚未参加考试的组员朋友们，届时我们会将考试心得经验统一整理公布，以供后来者参考学习。）"

***【任务要求】***.

【资料】

07—08--09年独立写作机经

[题目发放]

然后次日安排拍文顺序，拍文为三个人两两互拍。两次拍文必须在周三和周六布置第二次作业前完成。
2 p% d1 g. }9 z0 }) \（注：临近考前需要特别训练，到时候由组长和副组长调取相关机经作为特别训练。详情届时自会发布

相关分析可以参考精华帖里的资料及自己理解作简要分析，可由小组成员轮流进行；

[作业提交]

晚21：00前小组成员务必完成并提交。（注：为保障小组全体组员的一致利益，凡无故滞留不交或不按时完成作业的组员，视情况而定予以警告，不改者逐出小组。）（注：如有特殊情况，请于作业提交的24小时前向组长或副组长请假，并说明原因，以便组长和副组长重新安排拍文顺序和时间。谢谢合作！）
每个人都用大帖里固定的一个帖子交作业，列出自己的每一次作业链接，写明：第xx次作业5 请注意寄托作文版规则，不要违反，请大家积极配合版主工作。

[作业格式]
范例：

标题栏：【Dark_Tournament TOEFL-ibt作文小组第**次作业】

【Dark_Tournament TOEFL-ibt作文小组第**次作业】:

（字数统计/所用时间）
正文
   相关参考资料（附于正文后面，如果有的话，大家找到的资料都可以拿来形成资料帖）
   请小组成员现将各自的拼写和基本语法错误使用<Microsoft-Word>(推荐使用最新版的2007)纠正之后再发布上传

每人每次负责修改两人的文章，这样保证每个人的文章每次都由两个人同时修改。（跟帖修改即可

组长或副组长发布拍文顺序后即为修改时间。请务必于下次作业发布前修改完毕，并通知对方登陆论坛查看，并注明：已修改。
组员在修改对方文章中，一定要挑出该文中优美语言句子或精妙用词，并罗列在修改文章之下，然后周末或副组长总结筛选收录于大帖中：Pool Of Writing Language 楼层中，方便小组成员查看学习。

[惩罚]

没有在规定时间内完成作业或者修改，组内通报批评: k4 a! q/ G, B: `3 s
3次连续不写作业或者3次连续不修改其他组员的作文，请自动退出小组

[管理员轮换制度
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第一轮管理员暂定结果见章程开始，以后每隔两周轮换一次，表现好的管理员继续连任，表现不好的自动退位让贤，其他人可以推荐或自荐。

[友情提示]

对每次都对帮忙改作文的同学致以感谢;

请认真修改小组成员的文章，你不但会换得他人对你文章的认真态度，而且可以在互改中获得巨大的进步
如果小组进展顺利，再试着增开总结帖或资料贴吧，暂时只能放在大帖或提纲资料大帖中。

再次向各位站长和版主致谢！！！

[发帖注意事项]

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小组成员请注意

把我们的帖子整理一下，第1楼作为章程，本帖作为题目的链接帖，以后每次题目放在大帖的回复里，然后把链接放到下面。

例如：第一次作业
组长也将大帖里自己的第一帖作为题目链接帖，第二帖作为作业链接帖
1 w0 a z5 F X. s; m9 k* X- M组员将大帖里的第一帖作为作业链接帖3 \1 \

这样做的目的是使得题目和作业链接都在大帖前面的固定位置，方便我们查找作业和题目，也利于帖子的清洁。:

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本帖最后由 zhuyongchaochao 于 2009-6-20 22:52 编辑

第一次作业：
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to finish a project and then start another than to finish two projects at the same time. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.（06/24/07）
请于本周六（4月18日）晚十点前提交作业链接~~~

第二次作业：teacher should be paid according to their students' performs
请于下周三（4月22日）晚10点前交作业链接~~··

第三次作业： Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Letting a friend make a mistake is better than saying or doing something that may destroy the friendship. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

请于本周六（4月25日）晚10点前提交作文连接~~~

第四次作业： It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay. (说明：这次作文体面是题库185的第20题，
请大家先在群共享里面下载《Toefl Independent Writing》
这个软件，然后选择第20题，在规定时间30分钟内完成。
下次会公布相应范文！）
请于下周三（4月29日）晚22：00前提交作文链接~~

第五次作业：（ personal philosophy)When famous people such as actors, athletes and rock stars give their opinions, many people listen. Do you think we should pay attention to these opinions? Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay.
请于这周六（5月2日）晚22：00前交作文链接。

第六次作业：（来自大贴）Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The next twenty years from now on, students will not use printed books any more. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.08/04/07

请于下周三（5月6日）晚10点前交作业

第七次作业：Does human activity improve or damage the earth? Some people believe that the Earth is being harmed (damaged) by human activity. Others feel that human activity makes the Earth a better place to live. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

请于这周六（5月9日）晚22：00前交作文

（P.S.这是来自大贴的第28次作业，与我们的第五次作业属于同类，贴上来，希望有时间的人可以写个outline，拍文的人请帮忙看看。特别针对就要考试的人）Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Getting advice from older friends is more valuable than getting advice from friends at your age. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.）

第八次空缺

第九次作业（5月16日）晚22：00前交作业

The twentieth century saw great change. In your opinion, what is one change that should be

remembered about the twentieth century? Use specific reasons and details to explain your choice.

第十次作业（5月20日）晚22：00前交作业

In your opinion, what is the most important characteristic (for example, honesty, intelligence, a sense of humor) that a person can have to be successful in life? Use specific reasons and examples from your experience to explain your answer. When you write your answer, you are not limited to the examples listed in the question.

机经103. The most important characteristic that a person can have to be successful

in life

第十一次作业（5月23日）周六晚22：00前交作业

People work because they need money to live. What are some other reasons that people work? Discuss

one or more of these reasons. Use specific examples and details to support your answer.

机经

48. Reasons why people work other than earning a living

第十二次作业（5月27日）周三晚22：00前交作业
137. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? High schools should allow students to study the courses that students want to study. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

第十三次作业下周三晚（6月3日）22：00前交

110. Spend time alone or with friends?

Some people prefer to spend most of their time alone. Others like to be with friends most of the time. Do

you prefer to spend your time alone or with friends? Use specific reasons to support your answer.

第十四次作业本周六（6月6日）22：00前交

01/19/07: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Most people often let
others make decisions for them rather than make decisions by themselves. Use
specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

第15次作业下周三（6月10）晚22：00前交链接
Compare and contrast learning by doing to learning by reading. In your opinion, which is better? Use specific examples to support your opinion?
题目来源：Ace the TOEFL Essay (TWE)

第十六次作业
本周六（6月13日）22：00前交
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Perseverance makes people stronger. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
题目来源： Ace the TOEFL Essay(TWE) 7

第十七次作业
下周三（6月17日）晚22：00交
Do you agree or not that the extended family (grandparents, cousins, uncles and antes) becomes less important nowadays than it was in the past? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. （家庭）

第18次作文周六（6月20日）晚22：00前交
One argument states that higher education should be open to everyone, regardless of background. The opposing argument says that only the elite students should be allowed to proceed. Discuss these ideas. Do you agree or disagree? Explain why. 教育
第19次作业下周三（6月24日）晚22：00前交

Why people visit museums?

Many people visit museums when they travel to new places. Why do you think people visit museums?

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

12.。。。

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本帖最后由 zhuyongchaochao 于 2009-6-21 23:02 编辑

拍文顺序说明：
发作业：
1.周三，周日晚10：00后,发布下次作文题目
2.查看cracking ibt group主贴, 群消息，群邮件获取新题目
3.题目来源：托福185题库，机经

交作业：
1.周三，周日晚10：00前，相应楼层提交作文连接。
2.迟交请注明：最迟于某日前某时交。请假请注明：某次作文空缺
3次不遵守，视为严重违纪，扰乱大家户改作文的顺序，时间和效率！kick out!

改作业：
1.每三人一小组户改，每人修改他人2篇，自己2次被改。每次户改分组不同。
2.务必于交作业后第二日晚10：00前户改完，小组成员互相监督。
3.大家一定要仔细的户改，给别人改作文，别人才会改你的。别人改了自己的，才会看到自己的错误，进而改正提高。
小组成员互助共勉！
范文：《 iBT高分作文思路+范文》

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地板

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第18次作文范文

本帖最后由 zhuyongchaochao 于 2009-6-20 23:42 编辑

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第18次作业
The idea that an education should be available to all or restricted to only good students requires scrutiny on two points. Mainly, the term good needs clarification beyond the common idea of better-than-average gardes. Plus, the word open needs a stricter definition than the normal usage. Let's delve into these ideas.
To insist that students should have an unusually high grade point average to attend college is rooted in the idea that the more motivated students will excel. This is true in many cases. However, the idea of good transcends the stereotype of the guy with thick glasses and his head in a book for six hours every night ,in addition to school. The student not taken into consideration here is the one that works for six hours every night in addition to going to school during the day. His grades may be at the B average, but his time is spread more thinly than that of the student who has all As and has never worked a day in his life. Therefore, the common idea of a good student fails under that light, which leads to the concept of openness in many counteries now, highter education is available to all students, at least in terms of open enrollment. Nevertheless, available does not mean free. In the united States, for example, people have the option to attend even if they do not take the high school diploma, but school may not be paid for by the government. Yet, loans are available; there is little excuse not to attend, if a person truly wants to do so. with the right application and the right contacts through government agencies, an aspiring scholar can get that degree. Opportunity is there. There are numerous monies accessible to the public, even in developing countries, such as private grants, private scholarships, federal loans,private loans, and private scholarships, and these are even gotten sometimes by students in developing countries, financed by some of the world's superpowers. Unfortunately, this is not always the case.
The systems are not perfect , and not everyone can live a luxurious life. But the chances are there if people pursue their options. Regardless of what some others may think, we all have to follow our dreams.

转自; Ace the toefl Essay (TWE) Everything You Need for the Test of Written English