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bqianaUID：193168

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题目：Please describe why you are applying to the ABC MBA program and describe how our program will help you meet your future goals. (500 words)

Original Version：

Introduction – career objectives

Intellectual curiosity and advancing the society are the drive of my life; having these in mind, accomplishing complex -challenging business projects to be proud of is the “fill conducteur” that leads me to where I am about to: Applying to the ABC MBA program. I do believe that an MBA is the right thing to do when one has the ambition to lead organizations in an international environment, manage a business in various sectors -from investment banking to consumer products or media and telecom services -and to later on build his own business: these are my career goals. I want to be able to develop and transform business ideas into executable implementation plans; more to ensure that these ideas will be the source of wealth and good for business partners and communities. I have several projects that I would like to mature few years during and after my MBA: such as creating a business for promoting and development of tourism and services in Morocco and start up or join a venture capital firm focusing on new business / investment opportunities in developing countries in various economic sectors. This is where I want to be within 5 to 8 years after my MBA graduation. I believe that a leader can really be successful not only for the shareholder but can be meaningful when the benefits are also for the society. I think that developing business for these countries is really helping a whole society to move ahead and progress to a better life.

Edited Version：

After working for P & G as the engineering and project management director and now for CGE&Y as a senior business and IT consultant, I have successfully contributed to numerous challenging projects. Currently, I am working on consulting projects for telecom and service providers by helping them launch new services or ensure initiatives are designed and funded within the budget and in-line with corporate strategies. I daily use management, technical, leadership and communication skills, all of which I perfected at CGE&Y. I take part in business meetings, participate in strategic decision-making and manage teams. In parallel over the past five years, I have managed - especially during my father’s illness -a small family business. We specialize in sales and distribution of diet and sports nutrition and health care products imported from Europe and the Americas to North Africa. This experience added a tremendous experience to my life.

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CanucksUID：193673

did u write this whole essay ?? haha..thanx...one day we can plagiarize it if we needed :)

bqianaUID：193168

sure, no problem, man

nicole1219UID：2110150

i can't believe the original version was written by bqiana.
i felt faint after read the very first sentence. ;)

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