作文练习：Buy or Trade?

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[B]Buy or trade?[/B]

Spending money to buy something and trading products for something needed are two ways for people to get what they want. Both of them have their advantages, but I prefer trading goods, because I wouldn’t waste the stuff which I don’t but some other people need and I could save money to buy something else.

Pay money is a direct but expensive way to get something. People invented money to buy products, the economic world offers everything to customers. I can get anything we need as soon as they coming short. But the precondition is I have enough money. Or I have to save money for a long time to get a thing which I like. For example, if I like a pair of good sport shoes but as a college student I don’t have that much money, I may save money for months to get them.

Trading goods is a economical but slow way to get something. Trading what I have but I don’t need at the moment to get other stuff saving much money. Everything has got their own value, it’s not useful to me but doesn’t mean not to others either. And no body always wants to pay for new things. There are many ways I could use to trade my stuff: I could trade them to my friends or some second hand stores; or I could put them to eBay or yahoo or some BBS board to find people who are interested in my stuff, and I could make friend while I trading them.

But still, trading goods needs good patience because it won’t be easy to find someone who is interested in my stuff and owns what I want. So if I need something in a hurry, I would pay money for it.

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