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本帖最后由 irrisa 于 2012-10-8 23:05 编辑
vatfy 发表于 2012-10-8 21:54
来了,10月八号的作业。
没法贴附件不好意思,求互改
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1455646-1-1.html
Issue 105
Claim: Imagination is a more valuable asset than experience. Reason: People who lack experience are free to imagine what is possible without the constraints of established habits and attitudes.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
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The speaker asserts that the imagination is more vabluable than experience due to the reason that who lack experience are free to imagine what is possible wothout the constraints of established habits and attitudes. I am inclined to agree this opinion partly. Actually, imagination is important, but experience is mattered too.
Admittedly, it is known to all that imagination play a significant role in our daily life. The car we drive, the aircraft we take, the cell phone in our hand(all come from the fantasy of imagination). Obviously, they can not(cannot) be designed and made without imagination. In reality, at times, a man who lacks experience can make a marvellous(marvelous) imagination. Mozart, the Austrian composer and pianist, one of the best composers of music of all the time, as a matter of fact, he behaves an amazing talent in music at an early age, his first work was a minuet that he wrote when he was four. And German manthematician Gauss, when he was three he saw a a(手误吧) mitake his father had made when adding up the wage bills. Those people who lack experience but do a great achievemetnt tell us it is not impossible for a fledgling to make a great imagination.
However, is it safe(firmly) to draw a conclusion that the established habits and attitudes impose constraints on imagination all the time? It may be unreasonable in some cases. Wright brothers, who are credited for making the first controlled, powered flight in 1903. But, in fact, the wrights began interested in flight in the 1890s, and they had been experimenting with gilders and other vehicles for a long time, after tens of thousands of tests, they have imagined and made a first real plane finally. There is no doubt that they are experienced about flying, and it is hard to say that their expienced (experienced)habit and attitudes constraint their imagination.
To sum up. , It (it) is irrational to jump to a conclusion that imagination is more valuable than experience. Actually, imagination is a significant factor in the artist creativity and scientific exploration, yet, experience also play a (an)important role. There is no need for us to debate which one is more valuable, all we should do is combine experience with imagination, only in this way, we can(can we) serve for our humanity better.
例子和论证部分没有连接的表达
字数略少
Xdf老师说to sum up是死亡结尾,最好有偏向一方的观点
Issue 105
Claim: Imagination is a more valuable asset than experience. Reason: People who lack experience are free to imagine what is possible without the constraints of established habits and attitudes.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
======================================================================
The speaker asserts that the imagination is more vabluable than experience due to the reason that who lack experience are free to imagine what is possible wothout the constraints of established habits and attitudes. I am inclined to agree this opinion partly. Actually, imagination is important, but experience is mattered too.
Admittedly, it is known to all that imagination play a significant role in our daily life. The car we drive, the aircraft we take, the cell phone in our hand(all come from the fantasy of imagination). Obviously, they can not(cannot) be designed and made without imagination. In reality, at times, a man who lacks experience can make a marvellous(marvelous) imagination. Mozart, the Austrian composer and pianist, one of the best composers of music of all the time, as a matter of fact, he behaves an amazing talent in music at an early age, his first work was a minuet that he wrote when he was four. And German manthematician Gauss, when he was three he saw a a(手误吧) mitake his father had made when adding up the wage bills. Those people who lack experience but do a great achievemetnt tell us it is not impossible for a fledgling to make a great imagination.
However, is it safe(firmly) to draw a conclusion that the established habits and attitudes impose constraints on imagination all the time? It may be unreasonable in some cases. Wright brothers, who are credited for making the first controlled, powered flight in 1903. But, in fact, the wrights began interested in flight in the 1890s, and they had been experimenting with gilders and other vehicles for a long time, after tens of thousands of tests, they have imagined and made a first real plane finally. There is no doubt that they are experienced about flying, and it is hard to say that their expienced (experienced)habit and attitudes constraint their imagination.
To sum up. , It (it) is irrational to jump to a conclusion that imagination is more valuable than experience. Actually, imagination is a significant factor in the artist creativity and scientific exploration, yet, experience also play a (an)important role. There is no need for us to debate which one is more valuable, all we should do is combine experience with imagination, only in this way, we can(can we) serve for our humanity better.
例子和论证部分没有连接的表达
字数略少
Xdf老师说to sum up是死亡结尾,最好有偏向一方的观点 |
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