hi!7.7
task1:1.第一句要用过去式I had to give a lot of ... 。2.最后一句,try to speak very slowly and deep breath可以改成take a deep breath before the speech and speak slowly during the speech。3.一共42秒,看到还没到就可以说慢一点,不要留空白。
task2: 倒数第二句,rather than those (which)are not known to us。加一个which~
不知这样批改对不对,你参考参考
抱歉,评得有些晚了,task 1, contact后面应该要有with,内容蛮好的,语音语调也可以
task 2, company 后面也应该有with,然后觉得题内容有些乱。。。。一般先说观点,说spent my spare with my friends can help me have a lot of fun. 然后扯一个例子。。。。