copyzero2 发表于 2013-7-10 13:45
谢谢批改,我也觉得反面好写点啦~~虽然我还是写了好久TAT~~提出的建议很中肯~~
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还好吧 我觉得你还是有几句含有比较的意味的 比如 Can you imagine that people without TV could do that? We could get a conclusion that people nowadays live much happier and more satisfied lives, because of people’s changeable concept in health.