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发表于 2005-12-22 19:32:08 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
第一周作业总结:
Dec.21.2005


组员issue总评:

Huson的文章内容,句子,论证上都是很优秀的
calsunny对问题论述的逻辑性强,思路清晰
Cappuccino☆的例证较多
shiel和冰河谷由于是第一次写作文,很不错了,继续加油,期待看着你们的进步:victory:
taotaoQ和黄川应该注意多看一下北美范文,提高文章的语言和结构


本来该打分的,结果由于我太菜,怕打出分来起误导的作用:L
因此取消打分制度,向组员们道歉~~


优秀作文:

Huson的issue61   https://bbs.gter.net/forum.php?mod=viewthread&tid=381784



社会之少数多数类总体分析:

ISSUE61:

"High-profile awards such as the Nobel Prize are actually damaging to society because they suggest that only a few people deserve such recognition."
最高荣誉比如诺贝尔奖实际上是在损害社会,因为这种奖项在暗示只有少数人才配得上这样的荣誉。



1. 诺贝尔奖等是用来奖励那些作出突出贡献的人才的,象nobel这样的奖是为有益于社会的人所设立,比如和平奖的实践者mother Teresa很多人从中受益, 一方面为他们树立远大的目标另一方面也是对他们所作出工作的肯定同时还可以激励他或者其他的人作出进一步的努力和研究;

2. 只有少数人获得这些奖项是合理的,它是奖给应该得到此奖的人而不是社会福利,实际上也没有必要很多人得到这类奖。

3. 不能因为这个奖项一般得不到类似的奖就认为这个奖项对人类有害,实际上一方面每个人都可以活得这样的奖,另一方面这些奖项激励着众多的科学家为人类社会作出了重大的贡献,几乎每个人都能从中受益。

4. 尽管奖项比较少,但以此为目标在自己领域做出成就的人很多,即使没得奖,也没有放弃为社会做贡献。并不是为了仅仅得奖而作哪些事

5. 社会肯定了奖项的作用


                                                               -----摘至calsunny,Huson,黄川的提纲



ISSUE19:

"If a society is to thrive, it must put its own overall success before the well-being of its individual citizens."

如果一个社会要繁荣就必须将社会整体的成败置于单个社会成员的幸福之上。

1. 社会是由人民组成的,人民对社会繁荣有着很大的影响
2. 如果单单是为了追求空洞的整体成败,而忽略了人民,会造成社会不安定
3. "整体成败"的定义广泛,因此从不同的角度上来看问题会产生不同的结果


                                                                                        -----摘至Cappuccino☆的提纲


40. "Scholars and researchers should not be concerned with whether their work makes a contribution to the larger society. It is more important that they pursue their individual interests, however unusual or idiosyncratic those interests may seem."
  
我们不应该仅仅关注学者和研究者的著作能否对社会做出贡献。更重要的是关注他们如何追求实现自己的兴趣,无论那些兴趣显得是多么的非同寻常。
  
Agree:
Who is to decide which areas of academic inquiry are worthwhile? Scholars cannot be left to decide; nor can regulators and legislators.
Secondly, by human nature we are motivated to pursue those activities in which we excel.
Thirdly, it is “idiosyncratic” and ”unusual” avenues of inquiry that lead to greatest contributions to society.
少数和多数之科学家


22. "Many people believe that a few individuals or small groups (family, friends, teachers, celebrities, for example) have caused them to think and behave in the way they do. Yet it is always society as a whole that defines us and our attitudes, not a few individuals."
  
很多人认为只是一些个人或者小团体(比如家庭、朋友、老师、名人)促成了他们的思维和行动。其实一直以来不是一些个人而是社会作为一个整体在定义我们和我们的态度。
  
Individuals and small groups also change our attitudes and minds to a large extent.
Everyone influencing us is also influenced the society.
Internet is playing an ever more significant role in influencing people’s attitude and values.
少数和多数之定义人生


优秀句子摘录:

1. Some people partially think that only a few hap of taking awards, such as the Nobel Prize’s scantly five favorites annually, is the only significance that the high-profile awards show to everybody and thus most people will severely frustrated or be deprived of impetus to come through. Yet the purpose of high-profile awards' conferment is not merely prizes by all appearances, but shall be conferred in form of prizes to those who, in specific time or fields, have work the greatest discovery or improvement on mankind.


2. Because well informed and perceptive individuals who strife for the prizes are in great amount in deed, effect of such incisively by concourse would thrive our society than bring on harm to it. Just as the Nobel Prize, the nominators may multiply the prize winner, and the elites out of nomination so much as could not be numbered. They are all pith of stratum including scientists, social conductors and professors of various industries, would make our society even more hopeful by performing his or her role.

                                                                      --------------摘至Huson


例子摘录:


1. Mary Curie, as a good example, got the Nobel Prize for twice and her daughter got the prize too. This example tells us that the high-profile awards are given to the people for what they have done and encourage them to go ahead, while do not aim to hurt the common people who could not get them.


2. The medals of Olympic Games are given (to) few people, so are the medals of Oscar. Some times there are no owners of the Nobel Prize. So are the first of the Technology and science of progress of China.
                                                                     ----------摘至calsunny

3. Beneath the halo, it is the fact that Mother Teresa had persisted all her life long for helping numerous people in great sense of humanity, for the aged and young, and for the sick and poor. The Noble Prize by itself is a confirmation more of his or her great beneficial devotion to society than of merely individual’s achievements.
                                                                      ----------摘至Huson

4. Take the House of Bourbon for example, which was ruled by Wikipedia, is a princely state that represents the rulers' benefits. Obviously, this government never achieve thrive society, because it was overturned by its citizens in 1848.Therefore, a society without providing its individual citizens benefits would be ended by the revolution of the people.

5. A French economist, Francois Quesnay proposed that an empire would rich only after the (richness) of the farmers.

6. While mentions Julius Caesar, almost every one would admire this great empire, because he has brought Rome the honor which may be the overall success. However, at the same time when he orders the army to invade the land fields, the citizens in his own country are mostly suffered hunger and illness. In this condition, we may have doubts to judge whether Caesar has indeed created a thrive society.
                                                                   -----------摘至Cappuccino☆

7. Benjamin Franklin was honored as the founder of the United States and received many significant awards. His autobiography took effect on numerous people one generation after another. In the biography, with ample description of his life career, he illustrated the point that only through hard work and perseverance can one person attain success.
                                                                   -----------摘至黄川



issue社会类之少数多数话题其他相关题目及分析:

23. "Contemporary technology makes available many small pieces of factual information. As a result, people have become so preoccupied with bits of fragmented information that they pay too little attention to the larger issues and overall perspectives."
  
现代技术使获得大量细节信息成为可能。其结果是人们全神贯注于七零八碎的信息而很少去注意更大的问题和全局。

Access to great deal of information help people get a wider view of an issue, thus help them prevent being limited in thoughts.
Technology helps us pay more attention to the larger issues and overall perspectives.
To prevent preoccupation by fragmented information, people should hold right view on information, not to assimilate all, but to percolate relevant ones from those needing only a glance.
少数和多数之细节信息
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29. " Public figures such as actors, politicians, and athletes should expect people to be interested in their private lives. When they seek a public role, they should expect that they will lose at least some of their privacy."
  
像演员、政治家和运动员这样的公众人物应该预料到大众会对他们的私生活感兴趣。当他们希望受人瞩目的时候就应该至少预期到会失去一些隐私(被大众得知一些隐私)。
Agree:
Intense media attention to the lives of public figures raises a presumption in the collective mind of the viewing or reading public that our public figures’ lives are far more interesting than our own.
The media consist of large corporations whose chief objective is to maximize shareholder profit. In pursuit of that objective, the media are simply giving the public what they demand—a voyeuristic look into the private lives of public figures.
Nevertheless, the statement should be qualified in that a political figure has reason to expect privacy than other public figures.
少数和多数之公众人物的隐私
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41. "Such non-mainstream areas of inquiry as astrology, fortune-telling, and psychic and paranormal pursuits play a vital role in society by satisfying human needs that are not addressed by mainstream science."
  
研究界的一些非主流领域,比如星象学、占卜术和意念及超自然探索,在社会中起到了很重要的作用,因为它们满足了人们无法从主流科学获得的需求。
  
Admittedly, these non-mainstream areas of inquiry address certain human needs, which mainstream science and other areas of intellectual inquiry inherently cannot.
However, because these pursuits are not rooted in reason, they are favorite pastimes of charlatans and others who seek to prey on dupes.
Furthermore, without any sure way to evaluate the legitimacy of these avenues of inquiry, participants become vulnerable to self-deception, false hopes, fantastic ideas and even delusions.
少数和多数之非主流学科
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72. "One can best understand the most important characteristics of a society by studying its major cities."
  
人们可以通过研究一个社会的主要城市来了解它最重要的特点。
  
It is no longer true the major cities are characteristic of a society.
Major cities used to be the cultural centers of a society.
Nowadays, however, due to the influence of globalization, major cities throughout the world look more or less the same.
By contrast, the rural areas of a society maintain more of its cultural tradition.
少数和多数之以小见大       
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77. " People today are too individualistic. Instead of pursuing self-centered, separate goals, people need to understand that satisfaction comes from working for the greater good of the family, the community, or society as a whole."
  
现在的人们太个人主义了。与其追求以个人为中心和孤立的目标,人们更需要明白满足是源于为家庭、社区或者整个社会的更大利益的服务。
  
Extreme individualism has become a serious threat to the social fabric and the welfare of all members of society.
Some people may claim that the greater good of the family, the community or society lies in the good of the individual, which justifies the pursuit of self-interests.
The problem daunting contemporary society is that egoism as run wild.
Today there is every need for the society to encourage individuals to work for the interests of others.
少数和多数
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93. "The concept of 'individual responsibility' is a necessary fiction. Although societies must hold individuals accountable for their own actions, people's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making."
  
个人责任的概念是一种很必要的虚构。尽管社会必须让个人对他们自己的行为负责,但是人们的行为很大程度上不是自己能够左右的。
The claim that individual responsibility is a necessary fictions has some merit in that a society where individuals are not held accountable for their actions and choices is a lawless one, devoid of any order whatsoever.
A correlative argument for individual responsibility involves the fact that lawless, or anarchist, states give way to despotic rule by strong individuals who seize power.
As for the speaker’s second claim, it flies in the face of our everyday experiences in making choices and decisions.
  
少数和多数之个人责任
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170. "The surest indicator of a great nation is not the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists, but the general welfare of all its people."
  
一个伟大国家最真实的体现不是它的统治者、艺术家或者科学家的成就,而是他所有老百姓的普通福利(幸福)。

Admittedly, the overriding imperative of any democratic state is to enhance the general welfare of its citizenry. Yet the speaker fails to provide a clear litmus test for measuring that welfare.
Many scientific achievements serve to enhance a nation’s general welfare.
Artistic achievement is also needed to make a nation a better place for humans overall.
We should also be careful not to hastily assume that a nation is necessarily great merely by virtue of the achievements of individual citizens.
社会精英和人民大众
the general welfare
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220. "The increase in knowledge is forcing people to specialize. As a result, the distance between fields of specialization has become so vast that specialists in different areas are rarely able to influence each other."
知识的增加促使了人们的专业化。其结果是不同的专业化领域之间的差异变得越来越大以至于各个领域中的专业人员很少能够互相影响了。
  
Overspecialization in the academic world is liable to exert negative impacts on academic research in various fields, which makes it necessary for education to encourage interdisciplinary studies.
The dramatic increase in knowledge today has made it impossible for any one to keep pace with the latest developments in all academic fields.
As a result, specialists in different areas tend to focus only on their own area of study.
However, this overspecialization is harmful not only academically but also socially.
Schools should aim at cultivating not only specialists but also generalists.
和多数的关系之专业化
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发表于 2005-12-22 19:45:02 |只看该作者
以上是本次issue的总结
argument总结由本周副组长taotaoQ来做

欢迎大家都来积极参与作业的总结啊!!!
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好详细,好详细,好用心,好感动,好惭愧

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发表于 2005-12-23 10:24:48 |只看该作者
ARGU38,经过整理大家的作业我总结如下:
(一)        逻辑错误:1摘自newsletter,无权威性
                               2简单地认为吃鱼是避免感冒的方法
                               3简单地认为感冒是导致缺席的最主要的原因
                               4没有证明EAST的人吃鱼多就出勤率高
                               5认为鱼油可以代替鱼
                               6错误类比,认为WEEST的人也应向EAST的人多吃鱼,就可以预防感冒

(二)        可用以批判的武器:1列举他因
                                           2假设法

(三)        推荐的经典开头:一般分为四句:1归纳原论证结论
                                                             2指出原论证一方面论据
                                                             3指出另一方面论据
                                                             4表明对论述的基本判断。
                                                                                   ———  FROM  HUSON

(四)        优秀结尾,简洁有力,观点鲜明:
         In sum, the argument is logically flawed and therefore unconvinced as it stands. To strengthen it, the author should provide enough evidence that the Ichthaid which was derived from fish oil is effective to prevent colds and catching colds is the main factor to obstruct people from schools and workplaces in Western Meria.
                                                                               ———  FROM CAPPUCCINO

(五)        经总结,从逻辑错误分析,论证结构,语言表达综合来看,HUSON的文章都做得很好,是我们的榜样!
               我在这三方面都有待大大加强
               CAPPUCCINO 和 CALSUNNY的语言都不错,就是有个别用词需谨慎
     祝大家天天进步!!!

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cappuccino好认真负责啊,赞一个

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发表于 2005-12-23 11:58:41 |只看该作者
第二次作业:
Dec.23.2005

社会之法律问题其他题目:

17. "There are two types of laws: just and unjust. Every individual in a society has a responsibility to obey just laws and, even more importantly, to disobey and resist unjust laws."
  
有两种:公正的和不公正的。每个社会成员都有责任遵守公正的法律,但是更重要的是,更应该不遵守和反抗不公正的法律。
Disagree:
First, whether a law is just or unjust is rarely a straightforward issue. The fairness of any law depends on one’s personal value system.
The fairness of a law also depends on one’s personal interest, or stake, in the legal issue at hand.
Disobeying unjust laws often has the opposite effect of what was intended or hoped for.
By justifying a violation of one sort of law we find ourselves on a slippery slope toward sanctioning all types of illegal behavior, including egregious criminal conduct.

社会和个人之法律公正么?
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152. "The only responsibility of corporate executives, provided they stay within the law, is to make as much money as possible for their companies."
  
公司的经营者们唯一的责任就是在法律规定范围之内为他们的公司赚尽可能多的钱。

In several respects this position has considerable merit; yet it ignores certain compelling arguments for imposing on businesses additional obligations to the society in which they operate.
On the one hand are convincing arguments that profit maximization within the bounds of the law should be a business executive’s sole responsibility. First, imposing on businesses additional duties to society in which they operate can, paradoxically, harm that society.
Secondly, by affirming that profit maximization within legal bounds is the most ethical behavior possible for business, more private enterprises and individuals will be encouraged enter the marketplace in the quest of profits.
On the other hand are compelling arguments for holding business executives to certain responsibilities in addition to profit maximization and to compliance with the letter of law.
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174. "Laws should not be rigid or fixed. Instead, they should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances, times, and places."
  
法律不应该是僵化或固定的,而应该根据不同的环境、时期和地点而足够灵活。
  
On the one hand, a certain measure of consistency, stability and predictability in our laws is required in order for us to understand our legal obligations and rights as we go about our day-to-day business as a society.
On the other hand, rigid laws can result in unfairness if applied inflexibly in all places at all times.
法律的灵活性
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178. "It is possible to pass laws that control or place limits on people's behavior, but legislation cannot reform human nature. Laws cannot change what is in people's hearts and minds."
  
通过法律可以控制或者限制人们的行为,但是立法是无法改变人类本性的。法律无法改变人们的感情和思想。
  
It is necessary to realize the limits of law when we hail “rule by law”.
Common tells us that without laws, society would fall into a state of chaos.
However, legislation cannot reform human nature.
Society should depend on education to cultivate people’s hearts and minds.
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180. "Many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws and the legal system because moral behavior cannot be legislated."
  
现代社会的很多问题是法律和立法系统无法解决的,因为道德行为是无法用法律约束的。
I agree with this assertion insofar as it relates to constraints on certain personal freedoms. However, when it comes to the conduct of business, I think that moral behavior not only can but must be legislated for the purpose of alleviating societal problems.
Morality laws that impinge upon freedom of choice about our personal lives—to control what we do with and to ourselves—simply do not work in a democratic society.
Morality laws impinging on personal freedoms are not made any more useful or effective by purporting to serve the greater good of society, because on balance their costs far outweigh their benefits.
In sharp contrast to personal behavior, the behavior of businesses can and must be controlled through legislation.
道德和法律
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发表于 2005-12-23 12:51:30 |只看该作者
好棒啊~赞一个!加油~~
人生太短
出手要更大

旁观者不需理解
  
赢得风光
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忘记我也是无坏  
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组长很负责,最近是考试时间还花了这么多心思,真的很难得!
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发表于 2005-12-23 16:53:22 |只看该作者
呵呵,看了你们推荐的那篇Issue,花了我2个小时拍了一遍(因为中间改到一半死机,不死心的我又改了一遍)。
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发表于 2005-12-23 16:54:59 |只看该作者
Originally posted by happy_shirley at 2005-12-23 16:53
呵呵,看了你们推荐的那篇Issue,花了我2个小时拍了一遍(因为中间改到一半死机,不死心的我又改了一遍)。
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发表于 2005-12-30 09:59:10 |只看该作者
第二周作业总结:


这两次作业都写的是社会类题目,可分为社会问题和社会发展两大块。


Dec.26.2005
社会问题:
3. "It is more important to allocate money for immediate, existing social problems than to spend it on long-term research that might help future generations."与其花钱进行可能有助于后代的长期性研究,还不如把钱花在迫在眉睫,已经存在的社会问题上。
  
Humanity should take into account both long-term interests and short-term interests when making budgets.
Naturally, each generation is most concerned about solving problems that immediately confront them.
However, what differentiates human beings from other animals is that humans have a sense of future and are morally responsible for the well-being of their descendents.
Therefore, as beneficiaries of previous generations, each generation should make its own contribution for the well-being of future generations.

当务之急和百年大计的关系
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9. "Academic disciplines have become so specialized in recent years that scholars' ideas reach only a narrow audience. Until scholars can reach a wider audience, their ideas will have little use."
  
近些年来,学科已经细化到了相当的程度以至于学者们的理念只影响小范围的人群。除非学者们能拥有影响到大范围的人群,否则他们的理念将几乎毫无用处。

The speaker oversimplifies the issue of academic influence on society.
It is true that academic disciplines have become so specialized nowadays that some scholar’s seemingly idiosyncratic ideas only reach a narrow audience.
It is also true that social scientists’ failing to reach the large public makes it impossible for their ideas to contribute to society.
Nevertheless, scholars in certain realms are doomed to live in an isolated and purely academic world, which does not necessarily mean that their ideas will have little use.

过分专业化问题 overspecialization
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16. "Although many people think that the luxuries and conveniences of contemporary life are entirely harmless, in fact, they actually prevent people from developing into truly strong and independent individuals."
  
尽管许多人认为现代生活的奢华和便利是丝毫没有坏处的,但是这实际上让人们无法成为真正强大和独立的个体。
Agree
Consider first the effect of the automobile on our independence as individuals. In some respects the automobile serves to enhance such independence.
However, we have become slaves to the automobile.
Consider next the overall impact of the automobile on our strength as individuals, by which I mean strength of character, or mettle.
In contrast, there is a certain strength of character that comes with eschewing modern conveniences such as cars, and with the knowledge that one is contributing to a cleaner and quieter environment, a safer neighborhood, and arguably a more genteel society.  
社会和个人之发展问题
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58. "The increasingly rapid pace of life today causes more problems than it solves."
  
现代生活越来越快的节奏弊多利少。
  
Agree
The rapid pace of life has resulted in health problems in unprecedented large numbers.
Although people today have more leisure time, they are not in a better position than their ancestors to enjoy themselves.
More unfortunately, people seem to have become addicted to the rapid pace of modern life.
利多弊少题型
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133. "The problems of modern society have led many people to complain: 'We live in terrible times.' Yet, given the choice, no one today would prefer to live in any other time."
  
现代社会的问题是很多人都在抱怨:“我们生活在一个可怕的时代。”但是假设让他们选择的话,现在的人们仍然会选择现在而不是其他的时代。
  
We live in the best time of history.
Firstly, our living conditions today are superior to those of any past generations.
Secondly, technologies have made it possible for men to work under much more comfortable working conditions today than before.
Most of the problems troubling us today have been troubling human beings for a long time.
时间
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185. "Scandals--whether in politics, academia, or other areas--can be useful. They focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could."
  
丑闻----无论是政治、学术还是其他领域----可能会是有用的。丑闻可以用演说家或者改革家无法使用的手段让我们注意到某些。
On the one hand, scandals can sometimes serve to call our attention to pervasive social or political problems that we would otherwise neglect.
On the other hand, scandals can sometimes serve chiefly to distract us from more pressing community or societal problems.

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33. "Creating an appealing image has become more important in contemporary society than is the reality or truth behind that image."
  
在当代社会,打造一个引人入胜的外表已经变得比外表下的内容更加重要了。
  
I agree that image has become a more central concern, at least where short-term business or political success is at stake. Nevertheless, I think that in the longer term image ultimately yields to substance and fact.
The important role of image is particularly evident in the business world.
The growing significance of image is also evident in the political realm, particularly when it comes to presidential politics.
In the long terms, however, the significance of image wanes considerably.


外表和内容
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242. "Societies should try to save every plant and animal species, regardless of the expense to humans in effort, time, and financial well-being."
社会应该以不计人类的努力、时间和金钱为代价,尝试挽救每一个动植物物种。
  
There is no need to save every plant and animal species regardless of the human costs.
The history of natural evolution has witnessed the extinction of some plants and animals species, which did not result in any harm to the environment.
Of course, if scientists can more or less prove that the extinction of a certain plant or species will cause some disastrous chain effects, we should make every effort to save it.
The primary responsibility of humans is to try to maintain the environment at its natural state, and then let nature do the rest job.
人类和物种
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149. "The most practical and effective way to protect wilderness areas is to attract more tourists to these areas through environmentally sensitive projects."
  
保护野生环境最实际和最有效的途径就是通过环保的(旅游)项目吸引更多的旅游者来这些地区(旅游)。


Disagree
Tourists swarming to visit the environmentally sensitive projects may pose a serious threat to the wildness areas.
The most practical and effective way to protect wilderness areas is to leave those places to take care of themselves.
环保和旅游的关系
   
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120. "So much is new and complex today that looking back for an understanding of the past provides little guidance for living in the present."
  
现代社会是如此的崭新和复杂以至于回首了解过去对于当代生活已经没有太大帮助了。
Even though history offers few foolproof panaceas for living today, the author’s claim that today’s world is so unique that the past is irrelevant is too radical.

Admittedly, history has helped us learn the appropriateness of addressing certain social issues, particularly moral ones, on a societal level.
However, the only firm lesson from history about social ills is that they are here to stay.

现在和过去
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198. "Instead of encouraging conformity, society should show greater appreciation of individual differences."
  
Conformity: agreement
社会应该多一些鼓励个人间的差异而不是统一。
  
There is no doubt that society should encourage individuals to stand out to show their unique character and qualities.
Conformity leads to the death of creativity.
A society that encourages individual differences will benefit from the creations and vitality of its people.
“Whatever crushes individuality is despotism, by whatever name it may be called.” (John Stuart Mill)
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Dec.28.2005
社会发展:

2. "Competition is ultimately more beneficial than detrimental to society." 归根结底,竞争对于社会是利多弊少。
  
Generally speaking, competition contributes to progress in society.
Generally speaking, competition contributes to progress in society.
In democratic countries, when parties and candidates compete for power, the public benefits.
Admittedly, when competition gets out of the control of mores and laws, society will suffer.
竞争对于社会的优点和缺点
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46. "While some leaders in government, sports, industry, and other areas attribute their success to a well-developed sense of competition, a society can better prepare its young people for leadership by instilling in them a sense of cooperation."
  
政府、体育界、工业界和其他领域中的一些领导者将他们的成功归因于一种高度的竞争意识,然而一个社会还是应该更好的为那些即将成为领导者的年轻人灌输一种合作的意识。
  

Agree
The chief reason why we should stress cooperation in nurturing young people today is that, as tomorrow’s leaders, they will face pressing societal problems that simply cannot be solved apart from cooperative international efforts.
The second compelling reason for instilling in young people a sense of cooperation over competition is that effective leadership depends less on the latter than the former.
A third reason why instilling a sense of cooperation is to be preferred over instilling a sense of competition is that the latter serves to narrow a leader’s focus on thwarting the efforts of competitors.

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113. "It is primarily through our identification with social groups that we define ourselves."
  
如果我们要定位自己最重要是要定位自己所处的社会团体。
  
I strongly agree that we define ourselves primarily through our identification with social groups, as the speaker asserts.

Any developmental psychologist would agree that socialization with other children plays a critical role in any child’s understanding and psychological development of self.
As children progress to the social world of the playground and other after-school venues, their earlier recognition that they relate more closely to some people than to others evolves into a desire to form well-defined social groups, and to set these groups apart from others.
However, as young adults take on the responsibilities of partnering, parenting, and working, they appear to define themselves less by their social affiliations and more by their marital status, parental status, and occupation.
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89. "Leaders are created primarily by the demands that are placed upon them."
  
领导者主要是由身负的责任所造就的。
  
Generally speaking, leaders are the results of a combination of internal qualities and external conditions.
The demands place upon a person could challenge him or her to become a leader.
However, the statement seems to suggest that anybody can become a leader if demands are placed on him or her, which is unwarranted.
Besides opportunities, one also need to have certain qualities to make a leader.
时势造英雄
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70. "In any profession--business, politics, education, government--those in power should step down after five years. The surest path to success for any enterprise is revitalization through new leadership."
  
在任何领域中----商业、政治、教育、政府----掌权者应该在五年后就让位。这是任何机构获得成功的最好的方式:通过更新领导者而保持活力。
  
Limiting the term of leadership is an effective way to prevent corruption and lack of initiatives.
When leaders have no fear of losing their power, they tend to abuse their power.
A new leadership usually has greater initiative and would bring in new ideas.
However, in certain realms such as business it might not be so necessary to limit the term of leadership.
Furthermore, new leaders often lack the necessary skill and experience to cope with existing problems; therefore, they need a period of time for adaptation.
新手和老手
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140. "What society has thought to be its greatest social, political, and individual achievements have often resulted in the greatest discontent."
  
被社会自诩为是它最伟大的社会、政治和个人成就的东西结果往往带来最大的非议。
Agree with concession:
With respect to individual achievements, great achievers are by nature ambitious people and therefore tend to be dissatisfied and discontent with their accomplishments—no matter how great.
Individual achievements can often result in discontent on a societal level.
Turning from individual achievements to societal, including political, achievements, the extent to which great achievement have caused discontent often depends on one’s perspective.
社会和人民大众
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142. "The well-being of a society is enhanced when many of its people question authority."

当很多人都质疑权威的时候社会就会繁荣昌盛。
Agree with concession:
Admittedly, when many people question authority, some societal harm might result, even if a social cause is worthy.
While violence is rarely justifiable as a means of questioning authority, peaceful challenges to political and legal authority, by many people, are not only justifiable but actually necessary when it comes to enhancing and even preserving society’s well-being.
Questioning authority is also essential for advances in the sciences.
Similarly, in the arts, people must challenge established styles and forms rather than imitate them; otherwise, no genuinely new art would ever emerge, and society would be worse off.
  
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171. "People who pursue their own intellectual interests for purely personal reasons are more likely to benefit the rest of the world than are people who try to act for the public good."
  
能够造福社会的是那些纯粹出于个人原因而追求自己兴趣知识的人,而不是那些打算为大众谋福利的人。

Agree
By human nature we are motivated to pursue activities in which we excel.
Secondly, it is unusual avenues of personal interest that most often lead to the greatest contributions to society.
Thirdly, to adopt a view that runs contrary to the speaker’s position would be to sanction certain intellectual pursuits while proscribing others—which smacks of thought control and political oppression.

个人和整体之动机
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203. "The best way to understand the character of a society is to examine the character of the men and women that the society chooses as its heroes or its heroines."

了解一个社会特点最好的方法是去考察被这个社会视为英雄的人们的特点。

First consider the sports hero, whom in my observation society chooses not merely by virtue of athletic prowess.
Next consider the military hero, who gains heroic stature by way of courage in battle, or by otherwise facing certain defeat and emerging victorious.
On the other hand, consider a third type of hero: the champion of social causes who inspires and incites society to meaningful political and social change.

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244. "Most societies do not take their greatest thinkers seriously, even when they claim to admire them."
大多数社会都没把最伟大的思想家当回事,虽然有时候这些社会自称是求才若渴的。
  
Great thinkers are often wronged or ignored in many societies.
Confucius is regarded as a great thinker in China, but today few people pay much attention to what he actually said.
John Dewey was one of the greatest thinkers in American history, but few Americans including scholars know much about him.
In ancient Greece, the great thinker Socrates was sentenced to death.
社会和思想家


加上第一,二次作业,我们大概把社会类题目都熟悉了一遍,剩下的其他题目就请大家自己下去练习写了:
15. "The stability of a society depends on how it responds to the extremes of human behavior."
  
一个社会的稳定取决于该社会对人们极端行为所作出的反应。
It is true that how a society copes with the extremes of human behavior largely determines the society’s stability.
The extremes of human behavior--such as violence or strikes--usually dictate grave social troubles.
One solution to these social problems is suppressing, which proves effective in the short run and counterproductive in the long run.
The most effective way of responding to such problems is constructive communication and sometimes compromise.
抽象型题目
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20. "National governments should devote more of their social programs and services to children than to adults."
  
任何一个国家的政府都应该为孩子而不是为成人建设更多的社会项目和服务。
  
No one would deny the fact that it is in the young generation that lies the future of our society.
Therefore, we should attach enough importance to the development of children.
However, this does not mean that we can ignore the interests of adults, who make up the major work force of our society.
孩子和成人之社会建设
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36. "The greatness of individuals can be decided only by those who live after them, not by their contemporaries."
  
一个人是否伟大是由后人评定的而非他同时代的人。
  
We do not require a rear-view mirror to recognize artistic greatness— whether in music, visual arts, or literature. The reason for this is simple: art can be judged at face value.
In contrast, in the sciences it is difficult to identify greatness without the benefit of historical perspective.
In the realm of business, in some cases great achievement is recognizable immediately, while in other cases it is not.
时间先后
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47. "Society does not place enough emphasis on the intellect--that is, on reasoning and other cognitive skills."
  
社会对于理性还是重视不够,比如推理和认知的能力。

While the speaker might overlook the benefits of nurturing certain emotions and feelings, on balance I agree that it is by way of our heads rather than our hearts that we can best ensure the well-being of our society.

I concede that undue emphasis on cultivating the intellect at the expense of healthy emotions can harm and individual psychologically.
In many other respects, however, emphasizing emotions and de-emphasizing intellect can carry negative, even dangerous, consequences for any society.
The dangers of a de-emphasis on intellect are all too evident in contemporary America.
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65. "People have been so encouraged by society to focus on apparent differences that they fail to see meaningful similarities among ideas, individuals, and groups."
  
人们被社会鼓励而将注意力集中于显而易见的差异上,以至于人们已经无法看到各种理念、个人和群体之间的有意义的相似。
People in different cultural environments would respond differently to this statement.
On the one hand, western cultures tend to focus on differences among ideas, individuals and groups.
The danger of traditional societies, on the other hand, is to ignore differences forcing individuals and groups to conform to one authority.
A healthy attitude is to be sensitive to both differences and similarities.
统一和差异
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76. "Truly profound thinkers and highly creative artists are always out of step with their time and their society."
  
真正深刻的思想家和充满创造力的艺术家总是超前于他们所在的时代和社会的。
  
To be more exact, great thinkers and artists are generally out of step with their time and society.
Many great artists remained obscure all their lives.
There are countless examples of original thinkers who were either ignored or misunderstood by their time and their society.
However, there are cases of greater thinkers or artists who were recognized and rocketed to instant fame in their own time and their own society.
另类天才
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126. "Society's external rewards are no measure of true success. True success can be measured only in relation to the goals one sets for oneself."
  
社会给予的客观奖励并不能衡量真正的成功。真正的成功只能是取决于一个人为他自己设定的目标。
  
Success should be gauged on a personal base.
Society’s external rewards can only be regarded as society’s recognition of one’s contribution to society.
For an individual person, a correct attitude is to gauge success in relation to the goals one sets for oneself.
Overemphasizing the social criterion of success tends to belittle the worth of an individual.
客观和主观
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193. "It is not the headline-making political events but the seldom-reported social transformations that have the most lasting significance."
  
Transformation: change
真正具有长远意义的,不是那些被炒作的政治事件,而是那些鲜有报道的社会变化。
Agree
The headline-making “sensational” political events are often superficial and short-lived.
The commercial interests of the mass media determine their preoccupation with the news value of events rather than the social value of events.
Social transformations usually take place slowly, and are hard to notice at their beginning.


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明天周末,请大家要把作业补上啊,
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