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TPO4integrated writing (by wyac)

Thelecture mainly discussing the dinosaurs were not endotherms, challenging whatare stated in the reading passage that considerable evidence support dinosaurswere endotherms. the professor cast doubt on the reading passage by using anumber of point

firstof all, the reading passage suggests that the dinosaur fossils, found in polarregions where only endotherms can survive, show that the dinosaurs wereendotherms, in contrast, the speaker thinks that the polar regions were muchwarmer in the stage when dinosaur live than today, hence, the fossils maybederived from the dinosaur in hibernation, which immigrate from elsewhere.so,the lecture totally disagrees with the view made in the reading.

second,the speaker discuss that leg under dinosaur's body would support more weightand the dinosaur would grow large, contradicting what is stated in the readingpassage that the leg position and movement of dinosaur coincide with endotherms.

Finally,the speaker indicates that the value of Haversian canals in dinosaurs canchange with the body temperature, so the body can grow quickly when temperatureis high and slow when it is low, this point disagrees that the structures indinosaurs meant they were endotherms demonstrated in the reading passage.

Collectively,the contents in the reading passage are totally jeopardized by the speaker andthe speaker has totally different ideas on the topics made in the readingpassage.

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本帖最后由 lanyouno2 于 2010-1-10 13:12 编辑

Thelecture mainly discussing the dinosaurs were not endotherms, challenging whatare stated in the reading passage that considerable evidence support dinosaurswere endotherms. the professor cast doubt on the reading passage by using anumber of point 6 6 l" @* ]- l4 J0 K, k1 M

firstof all, the reading passage suggests that the dinosaur's fossils, found in polarregions where only endotherms can survive, show that the dinosaurs wereendotherms, in contrast, the speaker thinks that the polar regions were muchwarmer in the stage when dinosaur live than today, hence, the fossils maybederived from the dinosaur in hibernation, which immigrate from elsewhere.so,the lecture totally disagrees with the view made(make view 好像说不通) in the reading.

second,the speaker discuss that leg under dinosaur's body would support more weightand the dinosaur would grow large, contradicting what is stated in the readingpassage that the leg position and movement of dinosaur coincide with endotherms.: w$ _8 B1 H+ J3 q4 o; \2 m

Finally,the speaker indicates that the value of Haversian canals in dinosaurs canchange with the body temperature, so the body can grow quickly when temperatureis high and slow when it is low（？）, this point disagrees that the structures indinosaurs meant they were endotherms demonstrated in the reading passage.1 U1 K9 \8 D- g3 G7 P" n8 p* ?8 U

Collectively,the contents in the reading passage are totally jeopardized by the speaker andthe speaker has totally （太绝对了吧？）different ideas on the topics made in the readingpassage.

总：粘贴之前文章没编辑好，主谓一致错误较多，个别语句表达上有点让人费解，建议使用自己理解的语言表达，不用陌生的自己不确定的方式去造句子。

彼此的意见彼此只做参考，有理改之，无则加勉。

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