[i习作temp] issue23提纲: 沥血之作,请大家帮忙看看跑没跑题 [复制链接]

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发表于 2009-8-4 02:49:15 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览

本帖最后由 rainius 于 2009-8-4 10:35 编辑

构思一下午方才完成，参考了韦小宝的大讲堂。但是，说实话，不敢保证自己对论题的理解是否偏颇，所以请大家看看有没有跑题。
提纲之前附有中文观点概述。提纲只涉及正文部分。

Issue23
“Contemporarytechnology makes available many small pieces of factual information. As aresult, people have become so preoccupied with bits of fragmented informationthat they pay too little attention to the larger issues and overallperspective.”

观点简述：
1.现代技术为人们提供了庞杂的细节信息。人们从中可以方便的获取相比以往更多更全面的针对特定主题的信息。这一点排除了以往繁琐的资料查询检索带来的干扰，有利于人们 Pay more attention tothe larger issues and overall perspective；
2. 但是信息量的庞杂也使不少人望而生畏，不知如何从中筛选自己所需的信息，可能会使人陷入到对零散细节信息的过分关注而忽略了larger issues and overallperspective。但是通过训练，人们还是可以锻炼出这种能力的。一旦具有这种能力，就排除了本段所述之负面影响，而保持了第一段中所述相对以往的优势。
3. 一些新技术，例如数据挖掘技术的出现，有效的代替人们完成了从庞杂粗糙的原始数据中筛选信息的工作，也促使人们在获得比以往更多更全面知识的基础上更好的Pay more attention to thelarger issues and overall perspective

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TS. Agreat deal of factual information, which is made available by contemporarytechnology, brings people considerable benefits that people can obtain exhaustiveand abundant information, which is far more than they can get several yearsbefore, about a specific topic.
a. Moredetailed information provides people more perspectives to understand the issuethey study more comprehensively.
Example: unilateral understanding => comprehensive understanding
b.People can be no longer preoccupied by those previous trivialities, such assearching, copying, reading and analyzing the documents and pay more attentionto the larger issues and overall perspective.

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TS. However,the factual information which is made available by contemporary technology sometimesinvolve people into confusion and pressure while it provides people benefits.
a. Peopleoften find that the information they are facing is mixed with correct, clearand well-formed information and false, ambiguous, irregular or uselessinformation.
Example:
b. On the one hand, those who only have the ability to deal with well-formedknowledge and ideas of an issue would feel embarrassed and helpless to filterwhat they need from the large number of factual information.
c.when people exorbitantly concentrate on the huge number of small pieces offactual information, they can maybe hard to pay more attention on the largerissues and overall perspective.
d.On the other hand, it is an opportunity for people in such a situation to learnhow to discover valuable and useful information which is concealed in a greatdeal of useless and disruptive information.

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TS. Manykinds of new technologies have been invented to resolve the problem.
a. Datamining - transform rough and complex data to information that can be easilyunderstand by filtering, clustering, classification, unification, and otherrelevant methods.
b. It is commonly used in different fields such as marketing,surveillance,fraud detection and scientific discovery.
c.these technologies efficiently gather the information which is needed by peopleto specific issues instead people do that manually, and then, make people canpay more attention to the larger issues and overall perspective.

issue23, 提纲

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沙发

发表于 2009-8-8 23:46:59 |只看该作者

呀~刚发现LZ还有这篇~~mark之~~~明天忙看~:)

P.S.LZ很聪明~:p

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板凳

发表于 2009-8-10 16:20:24 |只看该作者

顶一下
顺便问一下写成什么样叫跑题或者偏题啊？

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地板

发表于 2009-8-10 18:01:37 |只看该作者

楼主写得挺好的~~

另外。我觉得楼主的重点是在现代科技使得筛选信息更好更方便而使得我们有更多精力Pay more attention to thelarger issues and overall perspective
而我理解的题目好像是说现代科技makes available many small pieces of factual information的出现，而导致了become so preoccupied with bits of fragmented informationthat they pay too little attention to the larger issues and overallperspective的结果。这样的话是不是把重点写到这些many small pieces of factual information对我们的影响是否如文中作者所得的结论，还有什么别的影响
当然楼主也是一种很好的思路O(∩_∩)O~欢迎探讨
其实我主要比较困惑这道题目是想说tech的影响还是tech 产生的 many small pieces of factual information的影响而导致了结果……MS楼主偏向前者，我偏向后者囧

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