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2.18
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Letting a friend make a mistake is better than saying or doing something that may destroy your friendship.

When your friends particularly close friends make mistakes, it is quite difficult to point out their mistakes since it may destroy your relationship with others or at least it is quite an embarrassing matter. However, in spite of these difficulties, I should still agree that we should do our utmost to point out their deficiencies and help them rectify them instead of just standing by.

To start off, even though at present your friends may commit some small mistakes, if you just stand by, your friends may ultimately make some serious mistakes. For example, at very beginning, some felons begin as just stealing some cheap goods or fighting with their classmates. However, perhaps, their friends may just stand by or sometimes help them due to allegedly “friendship” instead of warning them to get rid of such crime. They fail to realize the negative facets of these behaviors and continue to commit such mistakes. Gradually, they begin to steal some valuable things or just rob them from others with no fear. Even though you attempt to make some differences now, the effort may still be in vain at this stage.

Furthermore, to point out their mistakes will improve your relationship with your close friends instead of destroying your friendship. For example, when Mrs. Curie and Mr. Curie are just friends, they often picked out the other’s mistakes in the research and tried their best to help them correct them. However, their relationship never broke up due to such kind of quarrels. If this friend can accept your appropriate criticism and finally rectify their deficiencies, it means that this friend is open to an opposing opinion and eager to improve themselves. Otherwise, they only care about the praises and at least they are too vainglorious. Besides, if your friendship even cannot endure such disagreement, this friend may be just so-called weather friends.

However, even though we should point out our friends’ mistakes, this is not equivalent to the statement that we should indicate every mistake they commit. Everyone may make some mistakes occasionally and such mistakes do not represent the evil in your friends’ inner world. If we frequently point out our friends such small mistakes, our friendship may finally be ruined by such trivial and harmless mistakes.

In a nutshell, if the mistakes committed by our friends offend some laws or rules, we should do some thing to rectify them in the risk of destroying the friendship. Otherwise, if the mistakes are not so grave, we should learn to tolerate them.

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2.18 ( W: d) y/ C' o) g2 ]
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Letting a friend make a mistake is better than saying or doing something that may destroy your friendship.
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When your friends particularly close friends make mistakes, it is quite difficult to point out their mistakes since it may destroy your relationship with othersfriendship or at least it is quite an embarrassing matter. However, in spite of these difficulties, I should still agree that we should do our utmost to point out their deficiencies and help them rectify themthemselves instead of just standing by.
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To start off, even though at present your friends may commit some small mistakes, if you just stand by, your friends may ultimately make some serious mistakes. For example, at very beginning, some felons begin as just stealing some cheap goods or fighting with their classmates.你表达的意思成了“重罪犯犯重罪时一定要先偷点便宜的或打一下架” However, perhaps, their friends may just stand by or sometimes help them due to allegedly alleged“friendship” instead of warning them to get rid of such crime bad behavior. They刚看时蒙了，代词太多了 fail to realize the negative facets of these behaviors and continue to commit such mistakes. Gradually, they begin to steal some valuable things or just有点怪 rob them？ from others with no fear. Even though youtheir friends attempt to make some differences now, the effort may still 不理解 be in vain at this stage.
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Furthermore, to point out their mistakes will improve your relationship with your close friends instead of destroying your friendship. For example, when Mrs. Curie and Mr. Curie are just friends, they often picked out the other’s each other's mistakes in the research and tried their best to help themeach other correct them. However, their relationshipfriendship were (relationship可以包括marriage,也可能只是联系) never broke upbroken up due to such kind of quarrels. If this a friend can accept your appropriate criticism and finally rectify theirhis deficiencies, it means that this friend is open to an opposing opinion and eager to improve themselveshimself. Otherwise, if he they only care about the praises and or at least they are too vainglorious.(这句话逻辑上有问题) Besides, if your friendshipfriend(友情不会endure) even cannot endure such disagreement, this friendhe may be just so-called weather friends.5 {+ W" F' w0 A- V-
你的代词混用的很厉害，建议用he不要用they，they太以偏概全

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However, even though we should point out our friends’ mistakes, this is not equivalent to the statement that we should indicate every mistake they comm 用过去式？. Everyone may makemakes some mistakes occasionally and such mistakes do not represent the evil in your friends’ inner world. If we frequently point out our friends such small mistakes, our friendship may finally be ruined by such trivial（omg 我想了好几天都想不起来这个词） and harmless mistakes.
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In a nutshell, if the mistakes committed by our friends offend some laws or rules, we should do some thing to rectify them in the risk of destroying theour friendship. Otherwise, if the mistakes are not so grave, we should learn to tolerate them.

表达有点单一，但是不错了哈。。。
另外谢谢你的trivial

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2.19
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for a teacher to help students gain self-confidence than to teach them specific knowledge?

Sometimes, when students learn some knowledge for the first time, they may feel frustrated since they may make the repetitive mistakes and some impatient teachers may lose their temper on them. In this way, some students finally lose their self-confidence. However, in spite of this, learning new knowledge does not necessarily mean to lose self-confidence.

Excellent teachers can impart specific knowledge to their students without hurting the students’ self-confidence. For example, when Helen Keller’s tutor met Helen for the first time, the poor tutor felt so despair since this little girl had no idea about the outside world. Even under this circumstance, the kind tutor still taught Helen with all her patience and knowledge and she continuously encouraged Helen not to give into any difficulties. Finally, Helen became one of the famous writers at that age. The case of Helen’s tutor successfully substantiates that teachers can virtually impart knowledge to their students without hurting their self-confidence. Sometimes, the reason why some students may lose their confidence through the learning process is that the teachers lose their patience during this repetitive process.

However, even though we should blame partly on teachers for their impatience, the students sometimes lose their self-confidence themselves due to the desperate and repeated process. Someone may argue that if teachers still carry on teaching the students the specific knowledge, the students’ self-confidence may be seriously hurt. Personally, I think this saying is a little bit extreme. Most of the students cannot be so fragile that they fail to go through such difficulties. Otherwise, even though they may fortunately survive this terrible learning process, it is likely that they may still get trapped in other dilemma.

Nevertheless, teachers should still pay attention to preventing their students from losing their self-confidence due to the boring learning process. After all, the responsibility of the teachers is to impart the skills instead of torturing their students.

In a nutshell, personally, due to these reasons, I agree that it is more important for teachers to help students to gain self-confidence than to learn specific knowledge.

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When your friends particularly close friends make mistakes, it is quite difficult to point out their mistakes since it may destroy your relationship with others（去掉）or at least it is quite an embarrassing matter. However, in spite of these difficulties, I should still agree that we should do our utmost to point out their deficiencies and help them rectify them instead of just standing by.

To start off, even though at present your friends may commit some small mistakes, if you just stand by, your friends may ultimately make some serious mistakes. For example, at very beginning, some felons begin as just stealing some cheap goods or fighting with their classmates. However, perhaps, their friends may just stand by or sometimes help them due to allegedly（alleged 学习新词^^） “friendship” instead of warning them to get rid of such crime(有点太严重了 misbehavior一类的比较好). They fail to realize the negative facets of these behaviors and continue to commit such mistakes. Gradually, they begin to steal some valuable things or just（even） rob them from others with no fear. Even though you attempt to make some differences (学习)now, the effort may still be in vain（学习） at this stage.

Furthermore, to point out their mistakes will improve your relationship with your close friends instead of destroying your friendship(用代词it
避免前后重复). For example, when Mrs. Curie and Mr. Curie are（were） just friends, they often picked out the （each）other’s mistakes in the research and tried their best to help them correct them(用另外一个词表达错误). However, their relationship never broke up due to such kind of quarrels. If this friend can accept your appropriate criticism and finally rectify their deficiencies, it means that this friend is open to（学习） an opposing opinion and eager to improve themselves（himself）. Otherwise, they only care about the praises and at least they are too vainglorious. Besides, if your friendship(friend) even cannot endure such disagreement, this friend may be just so-called weather friends.（学习）

However, even though we should point out our friends’ mistakes, this is not equivalent to the statement that we should indicate every mistake they commit. Everyone may make some mistakes occasionally and such mistakes do not represent the evil in your friends’ inner world. If we frequently point out our friends such small mistakes, our friendship may finally be ruined by such trivial and harmless mistakes.

In a nutshell, if the mistakes committed by our friends offend some laws or rules, we should do some thing to rectify them in the risk of destroying the friendship. Otherwise, if the mistakes are not so grave, we should learn to tolerate them.

代词用的比较混乱
最好一句话里不要用同一个代词指代两种不同的事情
楼主的一些短语用的很好抱走学习了^^

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2.20Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers should be paid at least as much as doctors, lawyers or business leaders are paid.

Ever since the civilization has appeared in the world, the teacher has become an indispensable occupation in the society. It is the teachers who cultivate numerous elites who change the history time after time and we should not neglect teachers’ great effort to the society. Someone may argue that we should pay high salary to them in order to show gratitude. However, personally, I think this is inappropriate.

To start off, how much we pay the employee for salary is determined by the effort they have put into their work. Furthermore, such effort can be measured by time, energy and so forth. For example, a doctor may be well-paid due to their long-time working since they should often work overtime in the night in the case of emergency. A business leader may earn a high salary since they should often put great energy into the work which he is responsible for. However, under most circumstances, a teacher is unnecessary to work overtime or take great pains to work. In other words, their efforts are not worth the high salary.

Furthermore, how much we get paid is also gauged by how much we can produce. That is, if we make great contribution to the society, it is likely that we should also get high salary. Perhaps, someone may argue that teachers literally make great contribution to the society since they breed many excellent masters in the world. However, this saying is a little bit ridiculous since it is not the teachers who make direct contribution to the society but their outstanding students. For example, a lawyer earns a high salary since they uphold justice. Even though their success is partly owing to their teachers’ cultivation, their own hard working and talent also count for their accomplishment. In other words, teachers only make indirect and part contribution to the society. Therefore, their contributions are not worthwhile for the high salary.

Finally, how much we earn is also equivalent to how much our skills are worth. For example, if we possess a skill which no one else has, it is likely that we may earn a high salary. A doctor is proficient with a skill of curing the patient when no others are acquainted with. He or she is likely to earn a high salary. However, in the case of teachers, many of their skills are also shared with others. Their skills are not rare in this world. In the market of demand and supply, they are unlikely to have high salaries.

In a nutshell, even though we should show our respect for our teachers since were it not for them, we might have no chance to learn new skills, it is still improper to turn this respect into higher salary. How much we get paid is measured in many ways besides respect.
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2.19
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for a teacher to help students gain self-confidence than to teach them specific knowledge?* T* t7 ]0 ^$ Q2 [
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Sometimes, when students learn some knowledge for the first time, they may feel frustrated since they may make the repetitive mistakes and some impatient teachers may lose their temper on them. In this way, some(these如何?上文陈述的延续.) students finally lose their self-confidence. However, in spite of this, learning new knowledge does not necessarily mean to lose self-confidence.LZ观点是:学习新知识并不必然意味着丧失自信.我的理解题目是在问:对于老师来说,帮助学生获得自信重要还是传授专门知识重要?并没有说学习新知识和丧失自信的关系.不知理解的准确吗?期待交流)

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Excellent teachers can impart specific knowledge to their students without hurting the students’ self-confidence. For example, when Helen Keller’s tutor met Helen for the first time, the poor tutor felt so despair since this little girl had no idea about the outside world. Even under this circumstance, the kind tutor still taught Helen with all her patience and knowledge and she continuously encouraged Helen not to give into any difficulties.()困惑了,she encouraged Helen and did not put into any difficulties?还是什么?请指教 Finally, Helen became one of the famous writers at that age. The case of Helen’s tutor successfully substantiates that teachers can virtually impart knowledge to their students without hurting their self-confidence. Sometimes, the reason why some students may lose their confidence through the learning process is that the teachers lose their patience during this repetitive process.

However, even though we should blame partly on teachers for their impatience, the students sometimes lose their self-confidence themselves due to the desperate and repeated process. Someone may argue that if teachers still carry on teaching the students the specific knowledge, the students’ self-confidence may be seriously hurt. Personally, I think this saying is a little bit extreme. Most of the students cannot be so fragile that they fail to go through such difficulties. Otherwise, even though they may fortunately survive this terrible learning process, it is likely that they may still get trapped in other dilemma.

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Nevertheless, teachers should still pay attention to preventing(去掉ing) their students from losing their self-confidence due to the boring learning process. After all, the responsibility of the teachers is to impart the skills instead of torturing their students.8 z. x( o, ^( J+ S: X. T' W

In a nutshell, personally, due to these reasons, I agree that it is more important for teachers to help students to gain self-confidence than to learn specific knowledge.
不知是不是楼主没有省清题义,还是我的水平有限不能很好理解楼主的逻辑.请楼主方便时赐教.
语言语法没有发现错误.

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本帖最后由奇流沙于 2010-2-20 23:42 编辑

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for a teacher to help students gain self-confidence than to teach them specific knowledge?7 O7 i: b: f. Z' Z( H8 ?

Sometimes, when students learn some knowledge for the first time, they may feel frustrated since they may make the repetitive mistakes and some impatient teachers may lose their temper on them. In this way, some students finally lose their self-confidence. However, in spite of this, learning new knowledge does not necessarily mean to lose self-confidence.首段这么写的很少见耶，风格挺清新的，写作文我觉得最重要的是形成自己的风格体系~~
但是首段要是明确下主题就好了，是同意咧还是不同意咧？不明了啊不明了~

Excellent teachers can impart specific knowledge to their students without hurting the students’ self-confidence. For example, when Helen Keller’s tutor met Helen for the first time, the poor tutor felt so despair since this little girl had no idea about the outside world. Even under this circumstance, the kind tutor still taught Helen with all her patience and knowledge and she continuously encouraged Helen not to give into any difficulties（简单的词组用的很到位啊~）. Finally, Helen became one of the famous writers at that age. The case of Helen’s tutor successfully substantiates that teachers can virtually impart knowledge to their students without hurting their self-confidence. Sometimes, the reason why some students may lose their confidence through the learning process is that the teachers lose their patience during this repetitive process.) X7 v* `! H# u X e

However, even though we should blame partly on teachers for their impatience, the students sometimes lose their self-confidence themselves due to the desperate and repeated process. Someone may argue that if teachers still carry on teaching the students the specific knowledge, the students’ self-confidence may be seriously hurt. Personally, I think this saying is a little bit extreme. Most of the students cannot be so fragile that they fail to go through such difficulties. Otherwise, even though they may fortunately survive this terrible learning process, it is likely that they may still get trapped in other dilemma.

Nevertheless, teachers should still pay attention to preventing their students from losing their self-confidence due to the boring learning process. After all, the responsibility of the teachers is to impart the skills instead of torturing their students.

In a nutshell(嗯，用得好), personally, due to these reasons, I agree that it is more important for teachers to help students to gain self-confidence than to learn specific knowledge.
童鞋，通篇好句子好词，我就不一一夸了，但是看完我迷茫了，不知道使我理解有问题还是怎样，我觉得题目的意思是：对于教师，帮助学生获得自信（不是因为学不来老师教的新知识而丧失的自信心吧？）更重要还是教授实际的课程更重要。但是看完童鞋的文章，我又觉得童鞋的主题是：在教授新课程时，老师是否应该照顾学生的自信心……还和童鞋探讨一下？你觉着捏？

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又见面了:handshake
2.20Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers should be paid at least as much as doctors, lawyers or business leaders are paid.* Q5 {$ h9 C$ q  Y' T
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Ever since the civilization has appeared in the world, the teacher has become an indispensable occupation in the society. It is the teachers who cultivate numerous elites who change the history time after time and we should not neglect teachers’ great effort to the society. Someone may argue that we should pay high salary to them in order to show gratitude. However, personally, I think this is inappropriate.简洁明了值得借鉴B
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To start off, how much we pay the employee for salary is determined by the effort they have put into their work. Furthermore, such effort can be measured by time, energy and so forth. For example, a doctor may be well-paid due to their long-time working since they should often work overtime in the night in the case of emergency. A business leader may earn a high salary since they should often put great energy into the work which he is responsible for. However, under most circumstances, a teacher is unnecessary to work overtime or take great pains to work. In other words, their efforts are not worth the high salary.) `) W/ C9 r3 b/ K0 S  U" E

Furthermore, how much we get paid is also gauged by how much we can produce. That is, if we make great contribution to the society, it is likely that we should also get high salary. Perhaps, someone may argue that teachers literally make great contribution to the society since they breed many excellent masters in the world. However, this saying is a little bit ridiculous since it is not the teachers who make direct contribution to the society but their outstanding students. For example, a lawyer earns a high salary since they uphold justice. Even though their success is partly owing to their teachers’ cultivation, their own hard working and talent also count for their accomplishment. In other words, teachers only make indirect and part contribution to the society. Therefore, their contributions are not worthwhile for the high salary.论证有力( _+

Finally, how much we earn is also equivalent to how much our skills are worth. For example, if we possess a skill which no one else has, it is likely that we may earn a high salary. A doctor is proficient with a skill of curing the patient when no others are acquainted with. He or she is likely to earn a high salary. However, in the case of teachers, many of their skills are also shared with others. Their skills are not rare in this world. In the market of demand and supply, they are unlikely to have high salaries.论证有力

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In a nutshell, even though we should show our respect for our teachers since were it not for them, we might have no chance to learn new skills, it is still improper to turn this respect into higher salary. How much we get paid is measured in many ways besides respect.7 A0 e) [/ T. e, ^  P
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很好的一篇文章,论证有力,词汇丰富,佩服!看了LZ的文章,觉得自己的很汗.要取长补短!

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2.20Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers should be paid at least as much as doctors, lawyers or business leaders are paid./ S* x' O/ i5 U
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Ever since the civilization has appeared (appeared)in the world, the teacher has become an indispensable occupation in the society. (I have played basketball since I was ten years old.我记得例句是这个吧。Since后加动词过去式 ) It is the teachers who cultivate numerous elites who change the history time after time and we should not neglect teachers’ great effort to the society. Someone may argue that we should pay high salary to them in order to show gratitude. However, personally, I think this is inappropriate.
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To start off, how much we pay the employee for salary is determined by the effort they have put into their work. Furthermore, such effort can be measured by time, energy and so forth. For example, a doctor may be well-paid due to their long-time working since they should often work overtime in the night in the case of emergency(in case of 是固定搭配不用the，“如果”). A business leader may earn a high salary since they should often put great energy into the work which he is responsible for. However, under most circumstances, a teacher is unnecessary to work overtime or take great pains to (有这个用法么？bother his head with 怎么样~“不用为他的工作操心”)work. In other words, their efforts are not worth the high salary. 这段的连续对比来强烈表现老师的工作不那么费力，达到效果了！真的很有气势

Furthermore, how much we get paid is also gauged by how much we can produce. That is, if we make (a) great contribution to the society, it is likely that(放到句首比较顺，也许是我的习惯吧^^呵呵) we should(if --would) also get high salary. Perhaps, someone may argue that teachers literally make great (a) contribution to the society since they breed many excellent masters in the world. However, this saying is a little bit ridiculous since it is not the teachers who make direct contribution to the society but their outstanding students. For example, a lawyer earns a high salary since they uphold justice. Even though their success is partly owing to their teachers’ cultivation, their own hard working and talent also count for their accomplishment. In other words, teachers only make indirect and part contribution to the society. Therefore, their contributions are not worthwhile for the high salary.

Finally, how much we earn is also equivalent to how much our skills are worth. For example, if we possess a skill which no one else has, it is likely that we may earn a high salary. A doctor is proficient with a skill of curing the patient when no others are acquainted with. He or she is likely to earn a high salary(are acquainted with, thus he/she is…). However, in the case of teachers(When it comes to teachers当提到老师, 怎么样~), many of their skills are also shared with others. Their skills are not rare in this world. In the market of demand and supply, they are unlikely to have high salaries.最后这几句断断续续的不太连贯

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In a nutshell, even though we should show our respect for our teachers since were it not for them,(请问啥意思啊？~)we might have no chance to learn new skills, it is still improper to turn this respect into higher salary. How much we get paid is measured in many ways besides respect.((Uranus是想说我们挣多少可以用其他很多方法衡量，除了尊重。是么？那就应该是except吧.besides 是包括respect其他许多也是用来衡量的。)

1.分论点的段首句欠斟酌。建议套一些牛句型摆那，更有震慑力！
2.有些地方，比如倒数第二段感到楼主可能直译的句子吧。短短段段的，和前面流畅的文笔有些生硬的隔阂
3.since 作“因为”讲在文章中出现太多啦可以换一些“因为”  呵呵，我是不是太吹毛求疵了啊~

1.    1Uranus的句子都很连贯通顺啊，这点我学习了。不像我的，我的都是自己编出来的，看来应该多积累句子
2.    2许多好的短语学习了~
3.    3分段中，把老师和其他行业人对比来突出重点，学习了……

嘿嘿，水平有限，有说错的和没指出的错误尽量说~哈哈
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2.21Do you prefer to finish a project completely then to another one or do two or several projects at a time?

Even though handling one project at each period has its own advantages such as preventing us from being distracted by other things, the rapid pace of daily life propels us to handle one more projects. Besides, personally, I still prefer to handle many projects at the same time.

To start off, it is unlikely that we have many opportunities to process projects one after another. We can take the final exams for a concrete example. Perhaps every student may face many exams which are crowed in the end of the semester. Sometimes, these exams also belong to different subjects. It is quite impractical that we can prepare for these exams one after another since two exams may be arranged in the same day and under this circumstance we may have no time to prepare for the second exam in this day. Due to the high concentration of our daily matters, I may prefer to handle these things in a “parallel” method.

Besides, the inspiration from one project may contribute to solving the difficulties met in other projects. For example, when Mendel did the experiment supporting the principles of the genetics, instead of getting the conclusion directly from this experiment, he benefited a lot from other experiments done at the same time. Most of the time, the projects processed at the same time may have many potential relationship with others. Sometimes, the problems in these projects are solved in the same way as the game of Domino does. Therefore, the experience harvested in one project may also have a positive influence on another one.

Last but not the least, when stuck in one project, we can shift our attention to another. This method makes me more efficiently since when trapped in one project, if we insist on carrying on it, we can only end in nothing done but more exhausted. However, if we can spend this period of time coping with other projects, not only can we make progress in other projects but also we can be more energetic to throw ourselves into the former project.

In a nutshell, both my personal preference and the current situation force me to consider handling many projects at the same time as an ideal choice.

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2.22. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Most people often let others make decisions for them rather than make decisions by themselves.
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Since the situation of our daily life has become increasing complicated, most of us cannot make decisions all by themselves. We should absorb the beneficial advices from others and gauge the advantages and the disadvantages. Ultimately, we can make our decisions. However, even though others can assist, it is us who make the final decision.

To start off, no one else has a deep comprehension of your situation except yourself. That is, even though others can provide some favorable instructions for you, their instructions are based on their own experience and values. Perhaps, you can give some clues to your friends to help them analyze these issues in your shoes. However, their analysis process is still mixed with part of others’ own ideas which fail to match with yours. After all, you are not others and therefore their advices or decisions cannot be completely copied. Finally, due to others’ lacking of your own situation, you should still make the decisions all by yourself.

Besides, it is also unlikely that we can total believe in others to make decisions for you. Perhaps, others may make some mistakes or neglect some important facets in your issues. Or perhaps, others may cheat you to make false decisions on purposes for their own profit. If you let others take your place to make decisions, many accidents may happen beyond your control. How can you feel relieved to allow others to take your responsibility?

Last but not the least, many urgent decisions which should be made immediately cannot wait for you to find someone reliable to help you do it. For example, when we take exams, it is quite ridiculous for you to wait for others to help you choose an option. When the doctor copes with a life-and-death matter in the emergency room, he or she cannot wait for others to make the decisions. Time after time, we should make decisions with no time left. It may be impractical for us to wait for others to make the decisions.

In a nutshell, generally speaking, waiting for others to make decisions for you is not only an uncommon but also a rare situation. Even though many people may accept lots of advices from others, it is still themselves who make the final decision.

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