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On account of the prospesity of the economy society,more and more people lead a healthier life with the developmrnt of fit room.Consequently,people are invaritably faced with such a question that what results that sports bring us.There is no consensus concerning this issue among people.Based on what i know,the following two factors that sports teach lessons of our life should be considered.
The main reason for my prospensity is that the exercises aquire in fit room does a good favor to our physical life.On condition that people have a good health in daily life can people efficiency cope with different issues which occur in future work.This can be illustrates and exemplified by the case that my uncle who has been working in a computer company for a few years happened to meet a Japanese when negosiated an importnt contract.Unfortunately,he had a bad cold during that days,he couldn't stop coughing and playing a sneeze.If he had a stronger body,he wouldn't have lasted that bad cold a few months when Japanese left.Sports tell us a principle in life is that training an army for a thousand days to be used for just one hour .
Further lending credence to my postion is the reason that much experinces in sports are availably access to aquire persistance,passion and braviety.To begin with,a lot of sports like running,swiming can teach us when you face with tired or cold body,to be persistant to the end will be the victory.In our life ,we really need this quality to conquer difficulties.Furthermore,for example dancing ,I'm a big fan in dancing because the rythem and movement make me feel so crasy that I want to die to it. Only if people live with passion could we have happiness and satisfactory.In addition,Taekwondo teaches me to be a brave a in my life.When you're afraid of something,you can shout like a boy and take action without hesitation.
To sum up,I reinforce my standpoint that sports can teach lessons in our life based on the above statements.

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本帖最后由 kusehexing 于 2010-10-12 10:10 编辑

单词拼写错误不少哦
On account of the prosperity of the economy society,
more and more people lead a healthier life with the development of fit room(gym,不太确定有没有fit room,
fitting room是指试衣间).Consequently,
people are inevitably faced with (such可删) a question that what results sports bring us.There is no consensus concerning this issue among people.Based on what i know,the following two factors that sports teach lessons of our life should be considered.
The main reason for my propensity is that the exercises acquire in fit room does a good favor to our physical life.On condition that people have a good health in daily life can people efficiency cope with different issues which may occur in future work.This can be illustrated and exemplified by the case that my uncle who has been working in a computer company for a few years happened to meet a Japanese when negotiated an important contract.Unfortunately,he had a bad cold during that days. he couldn't stop coughing and playing a sneeze不太确定这个结构.If he had a stronger body,
he wouldn't  have lasted that bad cold a few months when Japanese left.（the cold would not last for months after the japanese left）Sports tell us a principle in lifethat training an army for a thousand days to be used for just one hour .
Further lending credence to my position is the reason that much experiences in sports are availably access to acquire
persistence,passion and bravery.To begin with,a lot of sports like running,swimming can teach us when you face with tired or cold body(这句好像得改改),to be persistent to the end will be the victory.In our life ,we really need this quality to conquer difficulties.Furthermore,for example dancing ,I'm a big fan of dancing because  the rymthe and movement make me feel so crazy that I want to die
for it.  Only if people live with passion could we have happiness and satisfactory.In addition,Taekwondo teaches me to be
brave in my life.When you're afraid of something,you can shout like a boy and take action without hesitation.
To sum up,I reinforce my standpoint that sports can teach lessons in our life based on the above statements.
单句之间要用句号或连接词哦，逗号不可以。呵呵

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